I Want to Be a Pokémon Cake Maker!

It's more of a daily routine, but overall it's pretty good. Advantages 1. The description of the interaction with Pokémon is OK and very warm. 2. Mengke's "mom"-like personality is very suitable for warm-hearted Pokémon. As for the childish behavior from time to time - it can add color to Mengke's growth. But I don't recommend too much. After all, if you don't have the patience to read novels, it's really easy to give up. Disadvantages: 1. The interaction between the two protagonists... Is a bit blunt. For example, the protagonist is worried about Ai Qi going to the health room in an accident. Ai Qi left without waiting for Mengke, which seemed very rude. At this time, the psychological description said: I ran away because I was moved or embarrassed, and then blushed. This is very nice 2. Human energy is limited. Whether it's a Pokémon or a friend, Pokémon can't be distributed well. Supplement: The background of "academy" tends to be more interpersonal, and the elements of Pokémon are not too prominent. It can be present or not. Adventure and exploration, and then battle with friends, play is more suitable for Pokémon style. However, studying in school is also quite a novel setting. I believe that the author can master his own rhythm. Comparison has just begun❤

Pretty good, come on

Very well written. Good luck, author.

Not popular but pretty

I'm a thief who jumps around in the relationship department [smile]

Come on, author! Daily articles about the promising future

Well done, author, come on

It's okay, it looks better everyday

It's more everyday, with a refreshing feeling

It's really beautiful! The relationship between them is so touching and exciting!