Beast ControlNarutoInvasion of Alien GodsRamen-loving Kapibara
When he arrived at the world of beast control, he was faced with a Kapibala who was pessimistic about life and death at the beginning. Yelan was very helpless, but the Naruto mobile game from his previous life came here with him.
As a villager who lives an extremely self-disciplined life and never misses Wednesdays and Saturdays, Ye Lan showed a funny smile.
Yelan: Kakala, it's time for them to see our bond!
Kapibala: "It's a big fall!"
Kakala, join the nine lamas! .
Reader comments
New characters appear too quickly, there are too many useless plots with irrelevant characters, the events are messy, there is no novel plot, and the protagonist does not receive reasonable compensation for the major events he participates in.
In addition, the traditional protagonist's explosive seed can be triggered again, which is more reasonable and safe. The protagonist of this book is an experience card and it is exposed. There is nothing to say, and the plot development is also very abrupt...
Give a five-star rating to your friend's new book, and then use a whip to urge him to update the book five stars.
New characters appear too quickly, there are too many useless plots with irrelevant characters, the events are messy, there is no novel plot, and the protagonist does not receive reasonable compensation for the major events he participates in. In addition, the traditional protagonist's explosive seed can be triggered again, which is more reasonable and safe. The protagonist of this book is an experience card and it is exposed. There is nothing to say, and the plot development is also very abrupt...
Give a five-star rating to your friend's new book, and then use a whip to urge him to update the book five stars.
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