HP: the Obscurus with Two Lives

I have finished reading the whole book, and my overall feeling is that although the male protagonist is a Sri Lankan teacher, it is more suitable for people who like to experience Hogwarts campus life, and there are not too many emotional lines. Let's talk about the advantages first. The heroine's setting is unique and attractive to me. I haven't read any novels in which Bo Jinbok is a relative (I only read personal trainer CP novels). The family line is very touching. Goyle, Crabbe, Malfoy, Ron, there are quite a lot of plots where these people make silly mistakes, and there are also some very funny ideas of the heroine. I think it is very interesting and relaxing. Overall, the character creation was successful. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The emotional line didn't appear until 90% of the whole novel was read. Before that, Si Jiao had hardly appeared, and the length of each appearance was extremely short. I really wanted to read a cp novel without tears. The emotional line seemed to appear suddenly. Although there was an explanation from the author, I felt that Si Jiao was relatively occult. In the end, the two people still felt like a teacher and a student when they got along, and they could never switch to the identity of lovers. And there was no romance part, the engagement seemed to come out of the blue, and the intimacy between the two afterwards made me feel a little awkward. The heroine's Obscurus setting was supposed to be a big bug, but as a result, there was no highlight moment when the heroine's Golden Finger exploded. Especially when Sijiao faces Nagini, it always feels like it goes against the setting of losing control of his emotions and causing him to run away silently. It feels like the heroine does not regard Sijiao as the most important person in her heart from beginning to end. So it feels a bit inconsistent to use the Resurrection Stone later. I like to underline my favorite passages while reading. I have highlighted eighty or ninety of my favorite passages in this novel, but there are really very few that are related to Sri Lankan religion. In short, babes who don't have much requirements for CP can still read it well.

The character of the heroine is not the usual perfect one. She will be jealous and get angry when rumors are spread. She is like a living person. Unlike some other books, she has a nonchalant attitude when misunderstood. The heroine does not have a big golden finger. She is just an ordinary wizard studying and living at Hogwarts. I think the author writes it very well. If you are tired of those kinds of stories about strong women, you can read this. I hope it can keep reading. Come on.

At first I was always wondering why the rating was so low. It's really hard to find HP's teachings that I couldn't stop reading. Let's talk about the advantages first. The group portraits are very well drawn, and the setting is also novel. There is basically no OOC in the characters of Si Jiao. Especially although Si Jiao appears less in the first half, you can still feel some "unique" male protagonist feeling when there is a female protagonist. There are few stories that can create this feeling without being OOC. But in the second half, I understood some of the reasons for the low score. The heroine's settings in the front were too full, but as a result, the plot did not play any role at the end, and there was not even much personal growth line. As the heroine, I feel that the heroine is really aggrieved (not as miserable as some sadistic stories, but too aggrieved). Forget about being transferred to a hospital in the first grade. After that, the uncle's death, amnesia, and the cuckolding of the HP yelling "He has loved my mother all his life" in the battle... The emotional line is also very little in the "falling in love" part, and the part from the fourth grade to the sixth grade is too close to the original plot. But overall it's still good, because I was looking forward to the first half so much that I got this kind of star deduction.

For Sri Lankan fans, it is also possible to read the seventh volume directly. There is really no emotional breakthrough at the moment. Just because she lost her memory doesn't mean she can fall in love suddenly. It's also difficult for Si Jiao to fall in love with her. I don't have any sense of cp yet, but I'm still looking forward to it because I love reading Si Jiao's novels!

Very nice looking HP. What impressed me the most was the transfer to another hospital. Although my sister was stabbed in the open, she was very sexy! Relying on his own talent, he still has a good time! Born! Water! Rise! (Using exaggerated rhetorical techniques to express the author's love) There is a feeling of playing chess alone and winning half the world. Like_(:з∠)_

One of the best articles in recent times. Although the plot is a bit slow, the characters are three-dimensional and not OOC. The author's description of each original character is very objective and true. The heroine's psychological description is also very suitable for her age and setting. She is a typical little snake [shy]

There is almost no progress in the emotional line so far, and it is accompanied by a large part of the original plot, but the writing is not bad, and there is no long unintelligible inner monologue. The advantage is that the characterization is great, and the supporting characters who were peripheral in the original work are also flesh and blood here. But when I thought that this was a revenge novel, and that there would definitely be death of important characters and abuse of the protagonist in the later stage, I felt a sudden rush in my heart [crying]

Super well written! ! The writing rhythm is very comfortable, the emotional line is relatively slow, but the plot develops naturally and the characters are well developed. It is more like a HP group portrait article than a simple professorial article. I particularly like Xie Li, the interaction with her uncle is so heartwarming... After reading more than a hundred chapters, there are finally more professor scenes, and I look forward to the follow-up development~

The final battle in this book is considered a hehe, but many people still died for it. The role played by the protagonist in Harry's story is actually not as big as imagined. Her prophetic ability is not even as useful as the professor of divination. As an Obscurus, she only appeared in the final battle. In summary, this is the life of the protagonist alone. It is not bad. Recommended

It's pretty good, and the emotional line is quite long. If it wasn't written in big letters with CP, I would have really forgotten that there is a male protagonist [face covering]

The plot writing is okay, but I feel that the author didn't fully express what he wanted to express in the end, resulting in some plots being meaningless.

Very good article, makes my wand spin, love comes from Ravenclaw (make a wish for Tuff Potter to return, want to see the CP of Housekeeper and Umbridge)

Big cheers for the author!

Don't finish it, I still want to watch, woo woo woo

The writing is superb!!!!!!!!!

The emotional line is not as well written as other plots. The death of the uncle is a bit sudden, but everything else is good.

After writing for a long time, I realized that I had written some comments about other fanfics, and then deleted them all at once. The writing was very good. I didn't really read the part about Egypt after the war. I mainly like HP, so I only read the HP part. It was really well written. The heroine has many shortcomings, but her living environment also determines that she is not a very good person. They are all very good, and the author respects the original work.

I found another professorial article with great writing and content.

Good to watch, highly recommended

A particularly beloved book

Overall it's okay, but the emotional line is not perfect

I haven't been in the mood to write long reviews recently, but this book deserves my review later, so I'll give it five stars first.

It's pretty good, but the emotional line is a bit weak, and the writing is pretty good.

Very nice, the characters really fit

Very interesting and recommended (please mark it with Sijiao)

The writing style is as good as that of a primary school student, and it surpasses 90% of HP fans in this regard. Logical coherence and echo

Oh Snape, you finally have a mouth🤣