A Prisoner of the Fire Moths, Lu Mingfei, Step Forward

I finished reading it in one day, it's not enough, author, how can you rest? ! Please give me the code, ten million words, ten million words. She is very nice when it comes to storytelling. The former civilization and the present are constantly changing, and the reasons for Lu Mingfei's changes are revealed bit by bit. What's even more exciting is that the Dragon Clan and Honkai Impact are connected! This is a perfect product for me as a weekend player! Especially the familiar knife makes me want to stop. It's a tragedy, I just want to see the tragedy! There are also quotes from various philosophical quotes, and the written expression shows that the author has very good literary skills. Anyway, it's not enough. Let's go to another 1000 chapters [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

The writing is really great, and the writing is very touching. When I look at it, I feel the pain of a knife slowly chopping my heart, but the flesh and blood are still stuck together and still beating. Author, can you keep writing? I can do anything.

The author's writing style is really great, blending the tragedy of the Honkai Impact and the decline of Ming Fei very well. I am ashamed to say that I used to want to write a novel based on the desolation of the dragon clan and the setting of collapse. I can only say that I respect my lost dream.

There is the sadness, mourning, literary youth of the dragon clan and the determination, despair and courage of the civilization before the collapse. Some settings of the original work have been cleverly changed, and the Herrscher of Death has been given a new lease of life. It's a very good idea. Lu Mingfei's power is too little (it's a small flaw for me, because the protagonist shouldn't have no abilities at all, right? At least give Lu Mingfei the key to control made from Yimer's core?) But it suits my taste, and it should be the final burst of despair. Although the plot of the stream of consciousness is scattered, it has a sense of memory. Lu Mingfei's PTSD is well displayed. But the author doesn't seem to be planning to write anymore. First, the update time is too slow, which is disappointing for other readers, and the lack of plot updates will make the whole book seem... Difficult to evaluate. All I can say is that it restored Honkai Impact III's despair and Lu Mingfei's state of being unable to do anything very well. At the same time, readers can't do anything because the author updates too slowly. If you want to read this book, you must first read a pair of radio waves. For me, it is the sacred grass, but the updates are too slow. Some authors have seen this and responded. And if the author doesn't write it, then I will take action (write it myself), and I would like to seek the author's opinion here.

The writing is very good, very sharp, very weak, and the whole story is just depressing. I have never watched Dragon Clan, and I have been playing Beng San for 6 or 7 years. I still have a bit of sword-carrying ability, and a little bit of catharsis. As a result, it is still very depressing and powerless to see a little bit of joy. It may be that I have read too many cool articles, and I am a bit tired after reading them so far. The characters are very vivid, and the memories are not too conflicting. After reading it, I need to find some thoughtful and cool articles to relieve the depression in my heart, but it is very difficult to find books on Tomato.

How can I put it this way? It's very well written, and I feel like I was watching Jujuejueji. But at present, the shortcoming I feel is the same as the feeling of Critical Legend: there are too many story lines, mainly Lu Mingfei. From every direction, every time node, and every person he meets, at least half a chapter of the story is extended. It has advantages. The world is very three-dimensional, the characters are full, the emotions are very stable, and the story is smooth. If it is a published book, even if it only has the first volume, the middle volume, or the so-called one or two, I will buy it and read it word by word. But here is the shortcoming. This is a serialized reading book based on chapters. This canopy-style writing method will appear. After updating, readers will forget what was written before, and they will not know what is written in this chapter. They may even not look forward to what will be written in the next chapter over time. Therefore, I suggest that you, the author, make a good distinction between which side stories are necessary in the advancement of the current main line, which ones can be treated as separate chapters and described separately before or after the climax of the story, which ones are post-narratives that can be placed as supplements after the end of the story, and which ones are introductions that should be shown before the story. Moreover, as some necessary branch lines in the main chapter, it is recommended to place them at the end of the chapter and divide them into sections.

What turned you into this? Is it Lao Mi? Is it Jiangnan? [Cry][cry][cry]

Dragon Clan and Honkai Impact, a very interesting idea. [Blowing kiss] Moreover, Lu Mingfei's portrayal is very good, unlike other fanfics where he directly replaces characters. [Laughing] Come on, author

Very good knife, makes my heart spin, love comes from china.

If you don't like knives, don't look at it, there's a big knife ahead. . .