Miss, I Really Can’t Marry You

It's very interesting. The protagonist's family are all very nice people. I feel that the front part is very nice, but the back part feels very fragmented. I thought it was a farming article or an imperial examination article, but in the end, some kind of mysterious shepherd appeared, and he was very energetic. He can also cultivate immortality. I don't know what kind of writing it is, it's nondescript. I feel like the author still lacks experience. Writing a novel is like making a design. Only when it is consistent and correct will it look comfortable. If it jumps too much, many people won't know what you are writing. Needs improvement

At first I thought it was just an ordinary cookie and left after taking one look at it. Unexpectedly, the healthy cookie article will certainly make people cringe, but the twisted and morbid relationship story is the sweetest.

The author's writing of the pull between the characters is very good and touching, especially the contradiction caused by the conflicting desires in the heart. The two sides are unable to let go and are forced to check and balance to keep both sides from losing. It is captivating. The short pen and ink outline a living character. Those who do not knock the main cp can also eat other things (a little bit), and the reader's other xp will be taken in. It's a pity that women's videos cannot have harems since ancient times. Privately, I prefer to be a cp saint (I digressed). The subject matter and ideas are outstanding and I can't find a replacement for the time being. This is also an advantage. The author's foreshadowing and transitions are obviously not perfect. The writing experience in this aspect is still relatively insufficient. When reading, it feels like it was added on the fly. It is recommended to write more direction. Hints are in the front, psychological hints, environment, hints of inexplicable whispers, language hints, etc., And the side can also improve readers' enthusiasm for reading, make readers active and active in thinking, participate in it, give enough anticipation to continue to follow the article, and leave readers. Sometimes if the foreshadowing is too long, it can be appropriate to complain later and reveal some follow-up or explanation\thoughts from the perspective of the person involved. This type of book allows readers to think more divergently and make associations, improve their sense of reading, and provide some known information, so that they can keep curious and read on. The rest of the writing style is very concise, expressive, and very shaping. You are welcome to take a look. I have finished 121 chapters in four days (just a few small suggestions and feelings. It's not my fault. I hope I can continue to write a very interesting subject matter) Updates are very slow. The biggest thing about reading this book is not to fall in love with the protagonist Shenglu's cp... There will be no good end if you go against cp... Chang Zai walked by the river and finally fell into a ditch and became a rat that screamed for beatings... (Has any teacher written a parallel story so hungry...)

The writing is very fluent, the content is very substantial, and the plot is even better. It is particularly attractive, with layers of foreshadowing and interlocking links that make people unexpected. Not at all like a tomato [rolls eyes] It directly caused a girl to write a book review at three o'clock in the morning 👍 The characters are really fleshed out and full of flesh and blood. Alas, I also hope that the author can write according to his own ideas, and I hope that he can give them a good ending, whether it is a fax, Afu, Shenglu, or Yeha. Or maybe it's another character (except for the thirteen Taibao and other purely annoying people [pitch]) It's been a long, long, long time since I've read such a good book. Come on, author, I'll keep reading [Salute]

I have caught up with the latest chapter 53. To be honest, I think the author's imagination is really huge. The setting of the shepherd is very touching. But maybe the author made slight changes when writing it, and some parts look a little awkward, but it's still acceptable. In fact, I like Ze'an better than the original personality Ze Zhen. Because, how should I put it, in my opinion, Ze Zhen's character is really too coy, and it gives me the feeling of the male protagonist in a male novel, a cowardly version. Ze'an's character touches me more (maybe it's because the part where he was abused was too impressive). He is also very strong, has a clear sense of love and hate, and is not indecisive. Although Miss Lu seems to like Ze Zhen, I would rather eat with her and Ze An. In addition, I am also looking forward to the direction of the following major forces, and the protagonist is dealing with several forces. If the subsequent direction can surprise me even more, I will add the following star. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you 🥺 🥺

I didn't expect this direction. It's getting more and more exciting. Do you like it? Although it's a bit sadistic, the two protagonists are directly in love with each other. The setting is also quite logical. The heroine has brains but is love-minded. The other heroine is simple and rational and is tortured into crazy. It's a bit like Capricorn and Scorpio. If you can't take revenge on others, you take out the heroine and end up sinking into each other. Blessed are the people who understand. Feel free to write, I am raising the banner for you.

Anthropomorphic version of human-canine love. The dog knew how to bite, so he was chosen by Pan Hong. Although he had been trained in the dog farm and was very well-behaved and cute on the surface, secretly he still liked to bite his owner's hands and even wanted to eat him. Dog owners also like this large dog that can bite people, and they hit it off immediately. It's been a long time since I've seen such a classic retro sadomasochistic story about chasing the "wife" in the crematorium, and it's not an orthodox Lily story. It's the first time I've seen so many buffs.

⚠⚠⚠If you just want to read a sweet article, then you can go. This novel was sweet and nice at first, but the style of the novel suddenly changed in Chapter 25. The protagonist was abused in various ways (the innocence is still there, Jie). After one night, he turned into a black man, and even became a child. He wanted to kill the innocent heroine, but he actually tried it (unsuccessfully). . . I don't know what will happen next, although this novel is really sweet when it comes to sweetness (otherwise I wouldn't have read this), but for friends who simply want to read a sweet novel, this level will be a very big test⚠⚠⚠, so consider it carefully!!! Things get better after chapter 45, the protagonist is no longer abused all the time. In short, Li later escaped from Yangcun and arrived in the ancient country, where he also split into a kind personality. Li met some people, such as a female priest, a female general, etc., And then there was a love-hate entanglement and a complicated personality split. Finally, Lu came, and the two met in the Wild Wolf Valley. After falling in love and killing each other for a while, Li finally failed to be cruel. Instead, he saw the true feelings in his heart and finally fell in love with Lu. The priestess finally became Yinglili. In the end, the two of them were forced into a desperate situation and prepared to die for their love. . . This is the general content before Chapter 100. Friends who are too sad in the middle can read this comment and skip it. From Chapter 100 onwards, the content will be sweet (should be) 🙂

She was very fond of watching "Eating Melon". She initially thought it was for cultivation and making money, but she was suddenly beaten, and then suddenly beaten by the crowd 🤦 🤦. Then she turned black and made Xiao Lu do something like that. When I saw it later, I felt that the chief priest was very kind to her, but it turned out that he was also selfish. Only the city lord really liked her. I don't know how the emotional line of the two protagonists will go in the future, please come on ❤️

The author gives me more! I have a destiny to wait!! I love it so much! Especially the part where the eldest lady dances with a sword and laughs is extremely tempting! Ahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha sister~master~ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Changed the cover~~~It's so beautiful~~~~shasshasshassha