Miss, I Really Can't Marry You.

It's very interesting. The protagonist's family are all very nice people. I feel that the front part is very nice, but the back part feels very fragmented. I thought it was a farming article or an imperial examination article, but in the end, some kind of mysterious shepherd appeared, and he was very energetic. He can also cultivate immortality. I don't know what kind of writing it is, it's nondescript. I feel like the author still lacks experience. Writing a novel is like making a design. Only when it is consistent and correct will it look comfortable. If it jumps too much, many people won't know what you are writing. Needs improvement

At first I thought it was just an ordinary cookie and left after taking one look at it. Unexpectedly, the healthy cookie article will certainly make people cringe, but the twisted and morbid relationship story is the sweetest.

The author's writing of the pull between the characters is very good and touching, especially the contradiction caused by the conflicting desires in the heart. The two sides are unable to let go and are forced to check and balance to keep both sides from losing. It is captivating. The short pen and ink outline a living character. Those who do not knock the main cp can also eat other things (a little bit), and the reader's other xp will be taken in. It's a pity that women's videos cannot have harems since ancient times. Privately, I prefer to be a cp saint (I digressed). The subject matter and ideas are outstanding and I can't find a replacement for the time being. This is also an advantage. The author's foreshadowing and transitions are obviously not perfect. The writing experience in this aspect is still relatively insufficient. When reading, it feels like it was added on the fly. It is recommended to write more direction. Hints are in the front, psychological hints, environment, hints of inexplicable whispers, language hints, etc., And the side can also improve readers' enthusiasm for reading, make readers active and active in thinking, participate in it, give enough anticipation to continue to follow the article, and leave readers. Sometimes if the foreshadowing is too long, it can be appropriate to complain later and reveal some follow-up or explanation\thoughts from the perspective of the person involved. This type of book allows readers to think more divergently and make associations, improve their sense of reading, and provide some known information, so that they can keep curious and read on. The rest of the writing style is very concise, expressive, and very shaping. You are welcome to take a look. I have finished 121 chapters in four days (just a few small suggestions and feelings. It's not my fault. I hope I can continue to write a very interesting subject matter) Updates are very slow. The biggest thing about reading this book is not to fall in love with the protagonist Shenglu's cp... There will be no good end if you go against cp... Chang Zai walked by the river and finally fell into a ditch and became a rat that screamed for beatings... (Has any teacher written a parallel story so hungry...)

The writing is very fluent, the content is very substantial, and the plot is even better. It is particularly attractive, with layers of foreshadowing and interlocking links that make people unexpected. Not at all like a tomato [rolls eyes] It directly caused a girl to write a book review at three o'clock in the morning [Like] The characters are really fleshed out and full of flesh and blood. Alas, I also hope that the author can write according to his own ideas, and I hope that he can give them a good ending, whether it is a fax, Afu, Shenglu, or Yeha. Or maybe it's another character (except for the thirteen Taibao and other purely annoying people [pitch]) It's been a long, long, long time since I've read such a good book. Come on, author, I'll keep reading [Salute]

I have caught up with the latest chapter 53. To be honest, I think the author's imagination is really huge. The setting of the shepherd is very touching. But maybe the author made slight changes when writing it, and some parts look a little awkward, but it's still acceptable. In fact, I like Ze'an better than the original personality Ze Zhen. Because, how should I put it, in my opinion, Ze Zhen's character is really too coy, and it gives me the feeling of the male protagonist in a male novel, a cowardly version. Ze'an's character touches me more (maybe it's because the part where he was abused was too impressive). He is also very strong, has a clear sense of love and hate, and is not indecisive. Although Miss Lu seems to like Ze Zhen, I would rather eat with her and Ze An. In addition, I am also looking forward to the direction of the following major forces, and the protagonist is dealing with several forces. If the subsequent direction can surprise me even more, I will add the following star. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I didn't expect this direction. It's getting more and more exciting. Do you like it? Although it's a bit sadistic, the two protagonists are directly in love with each other. The setting is also quite logical. The heroine has brains but is love-minded. The other heroine is simple and rational and is tortured into crazy. It's a bit like Capricorn and Scorpio. If you can't take revenge on others, you take out the heroine and end up sinking into each other. Blessed are the people who understand. Feel free to write, I am raising the banner for you.

Anthropomorphic version of human-canine love. The dog knew how to bite, so he was chosen by Pan Hong. Although he had been trained in the dog farm and was very well-behaved and cute on the surface, secretly he still liked to bite his owner's hands and even wanted to eat him. Dog owners also like this large dog that can bite people, and they hit it off immediately. It's been a long time since I've seen such a classic retro sadomasochistic story about chasing the "wife" in the crematorium, and it's not an orthodox Lily story. It's the first time I've seen so many buffs.

She was very fond of watching "Eating Melon". She initially thought it was for cultivation and making money, but she was suddenly beaten, and then suddenly beaten by the crowd [face covering] [face covering]. Then she turned black and made Xiao Lu do something like that. When I saw it later, I felt that the chief priest was very kind to her, but it turned out that he was also selfish. Only the city lord really liked her. I don't know how the emotional line of the two protagonists will go in the future, please come on [love]

The author gives me more! I have a destiny to wait! ! I love it so much! Especially the part where the eldest lady dances with a sword and laughs is extremely tempting! Ahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha sister~master~ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Changed the cover~~~It's so beautiful~~~~shasshasshassha

⚠⚠⚠If you just want to read a sweet article, then you can go. This novel was sweet and nice at first, but the style of the novel suddenly changed in Chapter 25. The protagonist was abused in various ways (the innocence is still there, Jie). After one night, he turned into a black man, and even became a child. He wanted to kill the innocent heroine, but he actually tried it (unsuccessfully). . . I don't know what will happen next, although this novel is really sweet when it comes to sweetness (otherwise I wouldn't have read this), but for friends who simply want to read a sweet novel, this level will be a very big test⚠⚠⚠, so consider it carefully! ! ! Things get better after chapter 45, the protagonist is no longer abused all the time. In short, Li later escaped from Yangcun and arrived in the ancient country, where he also split into a kind personality. Li met some people, such as a female priest, a female general, etc., And then there was a love-hate entanglement and a complicated personality split. Finally, Lu came, and the two met in the Wild Wolf Valley. After falling in love and killing each other for a while, Li finally failed to be cruel. Instead, he saw the true feelings in his heart and finally fell in love with Lu. The priestess finally became Yinglili. In the end, the two of them were forced into a desperate situation and prepared to die for their love. . . This is the general content before Chapter 100. Friends who are too sad in the middle can read this comment and skip it. From Chapter 100 onwards, the content will be sweet (should be) [smile]

How can I say that the writing is okay, but the plot is a bit contradictory and sometimes makes people a little confused, but overall it is okay. The heroine is not a traditional Madonna who does everything. She has her own characteristics. The other heroine is also very cute, okay.

Come on come on! Looking forward to more plots! It was so miserable for us little dogs [almost crying], we turned around and bit back, and killed the thirteen bullies. I always look forward to the subsequent development of the relationship between the two heroines [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Why do I feel like the author is getting more and more crazy? Disadvantages: Regarding whether to open a harem or not, the author clearly said that it is not allowed to open a harem, 1V1, but some of the plots in it are very uncomfortable. The protagonist watches other people (the city lord) ZW, and a person who takes advantage of the protagonist feeds medicine directly through the mouth. The punishment is kissing. I really accept incompetence. If you want to have two heroines, don't do this mess. The key is that the goddess kissing is punishment. I don't quite understand the author's brain circuit in setting the characters and conceiving the plot. I used to like Dian Dian very much, but now I feel like I am wandering all the way. Another author said that he initially planned to write a story about a woman who transforms into a man. Later, some readers called for the change to a story about two female protagonists, Lily. I don't know if that's how the daddy flavor came about. But the protagonist was a girl in her previous life, and she lived in modern society. She really feels like a street kid. Let's not mention the character for now. ; I seriously suspect that the author is not very clear about the emotions of the two girls. It feels like anyone of the same sex can kiss and hug each other, as if they are in close physical contact. It makes me unable to complain. Even if the plot in the outline of the female-to-male transformation that the author planned to write before has not changed, at least there is a sense of boundary. (Of course I don't believe that the author's plot of going crazy all the way has a sense of boundary) Regarding the protagonist's plan to fight to the death, I thought it was on fire, but it immediately flamed out (of course I feel that the author intended to imply that the protagonist intended to gain trust and control power "with a flash of eyes"). It was very different from the slogans shouted before, "I am from China, I am an Earthling", and it made me feel like I was watching a joke. Or maybe the author just wants to explain the hard struggle of working as a laborer, so can he stop shouting slogans or shouting such lofty slogans in the first place? Later, for his own ideas and purposes, he can still be like this again🐶 (over and over again) "Sweet text" really tricked people into killing them. Advantages: The author's settings reminded me of the Shang Dynasty, slavery and human sacrifice in the Shang Dynasty. The ruling class of a small country sacrificed its own people as livestock to the Shang Dynasty, thereby gaining power and the protection of the Shang Dynasty and consolidating its rule. Those who were sacrificed were not the "sheep" in the author's article. It satirized something to a certain extent and was more thoughtful.

Who said this article is difficult to criticize? This article is so good, but I am a philanthropic person. I can't use the priest. Can the city lord give me more scenes? I feel that the city lord is so cute. He has been teased by our heroine so many times, and he is still praising himself. I feel that the two of them are very close to each other. I don't want a harem. Can you have more scenes? I am willing to summon a character, and I will use my big number to give you another five-star

I feel like I'm going to be, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch😣. I want to know how the two of them will be like this in the future. I feel that the heroine is so miserable. But it's also very good, and nothing like what I've seen before. Very novel. Come on, author #

It tied the game overnight, and the plot is fascinating. It is one of my favorites that Tomato has encountered. The writing has no plot at all and is not very attractive, but luckily I came in and read it when I was bored, and luckily I didn't miss it. When I first read the article, I wondered why she, a successor in the 21st century, couldn't see this loophole? I thought I would just give it up and watch it, but the reverse came. There is a reason behind everything. Forgive me for not being good at writing. How can I put it, the various reversals are dizzying, and they are all logical and reasonable. Excited heart and trembling hands, looking forward to updates from my wife, I love you so much~(^з^)-♡[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I really enjoyed reading it. I originally thought it was just a romance novel, but later I realized that my vision was too low and I couldn't keep up with the author's ideas. It was so enjoyable to read and I felt like I was about to take off. I hope there is a good ending in the end, otherwise I will be sad.

Although the book is a bit confusing after chapter 30, I admire the author for coming up with this shepherd setting. I have never seen anything like this before, and the plot is also very attractive. I just feel like the heroine and the eldest lady don't have a sweet love, and there is only a crazy love between them that only I can kill you. At first, I thought that Shenglu didn't like the heroine, but now I'm not sure. Thinking about it carefully, it seems that although the heroine is miserable, she is a heartthrob. I'm used to watching Shuang Jie, so I can actually accept it. My acceptance level is quite high, but now I want to watch sweet love! ! I don't know if the author can implement it. It's really good to watch without losing money after investing in it. The heroine goes crazy in Order City, which makes me happy. [Shy][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Staring]

It's great. I hope you can continue writing. The style is unique, the writing style, plot, and characters are unique. I especially love the way of writing songs interspersed with the story. This work itself is a very imaginative article, shepherd, sheep, sheepdog... When these familiar nouns are replaced by names of people and paired with songs, it makes people tremble. In this novel with dark wind as the background, whenever the world seems to be swallowed by the endless abyss, and kind souls will be eroded by the shadows, heading towards boundless corruption, there will always be someone with the most clarity and clarity to penetrate the darkness, adding a glimmer of hope and a touch of morning light to this novel. But the short-lived candle will be extinguished. "Tragedy is tearing beautiful things to pieces for others to see." Read the story of Shenglu and Zean I also want to sing like the author: "Twilight of the Gods" I hear your prayer reach out to eternity But it touches the moonlight in your eyes Already flowed for others

This novel, you say it is good, but not that attractive, you say it is bad, but the plot is somewhat interesting, I don't want to read it, but I still read it, the feeling the two heroines gave me is just one word - crazy, a kind of morbid madness, the plot as a whole has a strong sense of fragmentation, twists and turns, twists and turns, you never know What will the author write in the next chapter? There are a lot of foreshadowings and a lot of imagination. What makes the plot attractive to me is that it is curious enough. My rating is only based on my satisfaction with the book. What I most want to ask the author is: "Is your mental state okay?" I have been reading online articles for almost 6 years, and for the first time I want to use one word to describe a book: moody.

It's very good-looking and I think the experience is quite rich. I didn't know anything in the early stage. In the later stage, I discovered a certain secret, and then I was beaten. Then I went crazy and split into several personalities. I lost my memory for a while and it was very confusing. Then in the later stage, I realized that it was like this. When will it be updated? I really want to watch the sequel below. Alas, I really want to know what happened to her later. I didn't expect this heroine to be so powerful. Oh my god, it's still divided.

The content is novel, and it vividly describes the mental state of a person who is forced to a dead end. Li Zhenzhen's mental state is the opposite of what he was before. I feel that the amnesia may be due to the body's self-protection mechanism, so I will forget what I did during the crazy batch period. The sunny boy in the peaceful era turned into a dragon in the end. (Personal understanding, please don't spray, thank you.)

It's very sweet, Bao Tian. When I first read it, I thought it was the kind of cultivation novel where I saved the eldest lady and then brought him back to the sect to cultivate immortality with the master in the village. I didn't expect such a twist. Fortunately, I skipped the chapter that was mentioned, otherwise I would have been heartbroken.

I thought it was an ordinary novel about two female protagonists, living in a family and farming, but I didn't expect it to be a fantasy novel about martial arts, fighting for hegemony, falling in love and killing each other, deep sadomasochistic love, and living without going crazy. The author is great, it's beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful! One hundred likes for you! ! !

In fact, the writing is quite good, but the plot twist is so big. It was a sweet story at the beginning, but suddenly changed into a dark story at the end... Warning for abusers. The author said that after 100 chapters there will be sweet stories, emmm, I don't know how many there are. The first 30 chapters and the last 70 chapters have a strong sense of separation, and there are foreshadowings that have not been recycled. Based on the current atmosphere of the article, it is difficult to imagine that it will be a sweet article after 100 chapters. It feels like the author is using Chapter 70 to persuade people to quit reading sweet stories. If there is a sweet story after 100 chapters, people who read Dark Lord of Abuse will also be persuaded to quit... I'm just curious about how the author would write it. If I write back the feeling of the first 30 chapters, it will be another level of division. This book will be considered useless. If not, how can I express sweetness in such a dark writing environment? Oh, I'm so curious, but I don't have any hope The rating needs to be modified urgently (waiting for updates)

This novel is so amazing, it is astonishing. It is the first time in the past two or three years that I felt that it was written by a god. I will definitely follow it to the end. The writing style, the plot, the characters, the emotional portrayal, and the three perspectives, I think this is the most touching thing I have seen in the past few years!

Good-looking and good-looking. It's just that there are too few updates now. The plot in the middle was so depressing. Although it was said in a joking way, a little girl faced absolute strength. Helpless. Sadness still makes people uncomfortable It feels logical to file a complaint later. At first, I was still struggling with when to reveal my gender, but later I was so happy that I got my revenge.

The writing is mind-blowing, beautiful, and addictive. This book describes the psychological growth of the characters very well. The two protagonists are both pure lovers who know right from wrong and care about themselves. They are a little selfish and a little selfless with a conscience. The growth lines of the protagonists are also very clearly written. I watched the latest chapter from the beginning before I knew it, and I was addicted.

I love the plot development and detailed descriptions. Personally, I would like to see Wanxing finally reconcile with the eldest lady. Help the other party create a prosperous world. For example, Qin Shihuang and Wu Zetian. It also saves the people of Liming who are living in agony. There is a happy ending.

I have read a lot of Tomato novels, but there is rarely a novel that can make people sit down and read it for a long time. Anyway, the author's writing is online and can be read with a brain. The character creation is also good, but there are a few shortcomings in the perception. If the author has carefully considered it and decided to write it like this, I am definitely not as thoughtful as the author, but if there is someone who thinks the same as me, I still hope the author can take care of it. ①The first is the problem of split personality, which I think is the most uncomfortable problem. Li Chuanzhen has experienced so many things until now, and these events have gradually shaped her into her current character. Suddenly, a character of Li Chuanzhen who has not been tortured has appeared again. This Li Chuanzhen is more naive and weak than the Li Zhenzhen who has been with us until now. This contrast makes me feel a strong sense of strangeness towards this protagonist. They are essentially one person, but the split personality is torn into two people, which makes people feel a bit unacceptable. ② The issue of combat effectiveness. Around Chapter 30, Mr. Lu sent someone to investigate. It was written that Li Zhenhua had the strength of a second-rate master, but after being trained by 13 grand masters for several years, he became a relatively powerful second-rate master. The author, please look at the sentence above. Everyone hopes that Li Zhenhua will be a master at this time, but it may not be appropriate to improve as a result. And people don't have a clear idea of ​​what a second-rate master is, which may be why I didn't look back. There are still some minor problems left, but they don't have a big impact on me. Other readers may also put forward some ideas of their own. I hope the author can take a look at my problems. This book is very attractive to me. I have read Chapter 51 so far. Some problems may be solved later, but for now, the split personality still makes me read it. Not very comfortable. The above only represents my personal opinion, and the author mainly expresses his own thoughts [Love]

It looks good. I thought it was Xiao Tianwen who clicked on it, but I got stabbed in the back. Fortunately, I love looking at knives, so I just ate it and it was great. Li Zhenfa and Xiao Fubao are so in love, if not I would have eaten this screen.