HP: Intellectual Genius, Star of Ravenclaw

Super pretty! The heroine is smart and charming, and the author's writing is very good, with many beautiful sentences. The heroine, like her name, is a smart little evening star, and she is sensible and at the same time very gentle to those she recognizes. Her originally messy sexual orientation suddenly became stable in front of Quinlan. She stood there without saying a word and I became jealous. This always-smart and always-calm personality really impressed me. She often wrote letters of report but she never complained. What she reported was all clear flaws. She was a smart and powerful little witch. Moreover, generally in fanfics with relatively big Golden Finger, there will be a feeling that the protagonist and the original characters are not in the same dimension, but this one does not. You can see the excellence and charm of the heroine, but you will not ignore the shining points of other people.

My goodness, the writing is so beautiful. There is a sense of rational beauty. Very Ravenclaw. And the heroine is kind of rational and cold, but also a heartthrob. I really like this. Very well written! He's going to be hot, really. It's definitely not just this rating. I want Crouch on! ! ! ! I really like crazy dogs.

At present, this book has 46 chapters, which has been equaled. The heroine of Yingyuan is very intelligent and powerful. I won't lie to you. She is really at the level of a master. The pace of the plot is arranged very quickly, and it is now the beginning of fourth grade. There are some plots, such as criticizing Dumbledore's overindulgence of Harry and his view of heroic history. I feel that the writing is quite enjoyable, so I will comment on it here. Regarding CP, it's currently a single arrow, and it's a bit perverted. What do you think about sister Bao's words, which are a bit indifferent? Nerve? The writing style is more descriptive, and I quite like it. I feel it is really perfect. Men see it as crazy, and women see amenorrhea. This is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. If you have any questions, you can ask me after reading it. It is recommended to update more [send heart][shy] @

The wise evening star, indifferent yet gentle, always knows what she wants to do and what she wants to do [get it] He has personality, does not follow the crowd, has a strong heart, and is a brave little eagle. Writing reports, giving suggestions, setting precedents, etc. It's so cool [blowing kiss]. As expected of a shining star, super charming [send heart]. Wisdom, keenness, strength, handsomeness, calmness. It feels so safe. Smart people will naturally understand what love is. Although the tone is light, it is also very romantic (the flower that wants the stars) (so what kind of fragrance will it be when the wind blows the curtains of my bedroom in the morning? What kind of fragrance will it be when it lingers on the tip of my nose and wakes me up from my sleep [smirking]) She is O because the highest level can only be O [note] Is this sapiosexuality? ! Love it so much The big timeline is also super super super super super super super awesome! Reincarnation is doomed, time and space have no boundaries. The foreshadowing and foreshadowing are cleverly designed. Some things are doomed from the beginning. But your own destiny should be controlled by yourself, not even God. If something is going to be achieved, then expand the width of the thing and carve out the depth of the thing. Try your best to crush the enemy's stepping stones, grab the hand of fate, and step out of the curtain of death. Even if it is a decisive victory. Everyone has this power. Do what you want to do, no matter what direction your destiny takes, no matter how time is reset, the "script" is only a "script" after all, and it can only be a "script". When fate wants to control the situation, pierce fate and its packaging. No matter how gorgeous the packaging is, it is not a reason for manipulation. The ending without thinking is certainly stable, but the story is about flesh-and-blood, living people with their own thoughts, not chess pieces on a chessboard that can be manipulated by others. They should also be able to have the right to choose. If someone tries to control his own destiny, let him or her pay the due price (I forgot what the original sentence said... I forgot to underline...) Now, those cyclical time games have to end The writing style is super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super! ! ! The writing is beautiful, and the plot is interesting and humorous. (The cute star conscientiously comforts the person (but the other person seems to cry louder) and so on. It's so interesting) and the concept is exquisite. It's been a long time since I read an article so happily [blowing kiss]!

How to put it, good-looking is good, bad is bad. [Thinking] I like the character of the protagonist, but those entangled things ruined my perception too much. There is also the timeline. I feel there is no need to foreshadow the plot or anything like that. There is no sense of suddenly realizing the key clues.

The heroine is gentle and sensible enough, and she doesn't have the temper to swallow her anger. Sometimes she has a slight sense of madness, which is very enjoyable to watch. Riddle in this book is really upset, and he can't forget the helpless and unwilling words "Teacher, I should be like this." The heroine really taught him well. The extra diary chased me to death. He knew clearly that it was wrong, but he had to do it. He went through painful cycles again and again just to meet the heroine again. The teacher's writing style also has a delicate and gentle feeling. At the end, every girl runs towards a bright future and they are all shining. Moreover, the timeline is handled well and the connection is very natural. Finally, I hope that the teacher can finish the extra chapter as soon as possible. I plan to read it again after reading it.

There are 48 chapters now. I have finished reading it. I won't talk about the rest. I will only talk about what I have read and hope it won't end. It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't drag on in the early stages. Every revenge must be retaliated. When the owl's feathers are plucked, it's also tit for tat. The first-grade versus the principal and some very elegant plots are very touching to me. I love it very much. But I don't really like the single-arrow love line between Crouch and Riddle. Lan is very sensible, handsome and powerful, and her life experience has always been foreshadowed. In short, two words, super love❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc) The author should update more＼(`Δ')/I really can't get enough.

For me, this book is the ceiling of HP. It is fast-paced and the heroine is very sensible. She always has something to do, just like the author said, "the evening star of wisdom." Absolute Ravenclaw, sane lunatic. The heroine has no CP and has no family relationship with the characters in the book. I'm really looking forward to the heroine's future development, and I hope the author will write more stories... After all, there are more than 130 chapters in the sixth grade, and there are almost no surprises, and everyone is doing well. The anti-Ministry of Magic scenes made my blood boil. In this book, Dali has also changed... In the end, I hope the ending will be he. Although everyone is fine now, I feel that there will be a knife in the future...

It can be said that this is the most logical and beautiful book I have read so far. The early timeline was a bit confusing, but after connecting to it later, I discovered the author's intentions and imagination. Infinite reincarnation, time series, souls from other worlds, and gradually I can see the author's precision in creating this book. The heroine's lack of CP and gentle or tough rejection of love really surprised me. When I read these fanfics, I was originally rushing to go without CP, but everything about the heroine can make her have many admirers and followers. The emotional stories of all the people in it are very meaningful and are not just emotional bondage and group CP. Whether it is friendship, love, or family relationships, they are all written in a very logical and meaningful way. I can say that I have read so many books, and this is the only one that made me feel comfortable. I really recommend reading it. Why is this book not so popular? It's a pity, pity TAT

It's great, the characters are very helpful, and the writing is not awkward or weird. But I want to ask, are the people who like the heroine only the ones in the introduction or are there others who haven't written them out yet?

It suits my taste very well. The heroine is very sensible. In my opinion, the heroine is warm on the outside and cold on the heart. She seems to be very close to everyone, but no one leaves too many waves in her heart. The heroine also has strong magical abilities. I feel that he is very versatile (can do any part-time job and does it very well). In this book, the relationship between Dali and Harry is not as bad as before. There are very few articles about Ravenclaw, so this one is super good-looking. The author is really great (›´ω`‹) but the updates are too slow. It's really good. Come and read it. The author is really great (｀Δ´)! As a digression, I wasn't afraid to finish reading it at first, because there were still two books I hadn't read, but now I've finished three books. The authors of the three books are so slow to update? Final confession to the author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Please update soon (><) The child has no food now [crying]

Seeing this, I already want to urge the author to update 300 chapters a day. Perla is a very gentle person, she has a strong and determined core, and she grew up resolute and independent. Many of her ideas also touch me a lot, especially what she said: "There are always people in the world who care about saying hello, and she doesn't mind saying it several times." And "The excited sharing of hard-working and excellent girls should not be interrupted." I really love Perla! ! I really want to kiss her! ! Yeah, yeah, yeah! The author writes very well! [Shy][shy][blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful. I really don't know how to describe this book. The logic of thinking is very rigorous, especially in the section where the heroine travels through time and space, everything forms a closed loop. The heroine's character is really calm and sober. This is the first hp fanfic I have read in a long time that really pays attention to and solves the bullying on the campus of Hogwarts. It not only solves the relationship between the teachers and the predators, but also truly proposes solutions to the bullying problem in the school. After all, there is no cp, but there are several couples in it that I really can't stand. But it's well written, and everything is so reasonable and just right. Maybe this is the best ending for each of them (from the perspective of this book)

It's really good to see (//∇//) The time travel that follows really makes everything come true and fills up all the pits in the past_(:з∠)_The heroine also has her own personality. She will not be mentally exhausted and will take the initiative to tolerate others, but at the same time she will not be weak. When she encounters school bullies, she will fight back [admiration]. She is really a genius with both EQ and IQ online! ! ! At the same time, he has a crazier side, a rational madman! ! ! It's really touching 🥺 and she respects the love of others, but she can't describe it well. I feel that all the beautiful words are worthy of her. The author's character creation is particularly good (✪▽✪)

This is the most beautiful HP Ravenclaw I have ever read. It has been on fire since Chapter 200. When she assured me that this was just an ordinary Quidditch match, I felt really relieved and calm. Especially in Chapter 209, when I saw Riddle for the thousandth time, my heart felt like it was cramping. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It's been a long time since I've been touched by the content of a novel. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up.

It's really super beautiful, and it's very thought-provoking at the beginning. I think the collision of thoughts between Pella and Albus is very smooth, and it doesn't make people feel very fragmented or unbalanced. It's the interaction between Barty Jr. And the stars, which is really touching. It's hard to live up to expectations [crying][crying], especially the last episode, which is of course expected. Pera is really good, influencing many people around her, making the students at Hogwarts gradually better and better, with her own judgment, and Riddle. I cried to death, really. Especially the extra story, it really fills the gap, I really shed tears all the time, the bond between him and the teacher is really tearful, the fate is really unfair to him, it is really heart-wrenching, in the whole story, everyone is a good baby, maybe the bright moon should hang high. It's really hard to take a photo of one person and break it down into the following extras. After I finished reading it, I had a very strong reaction during that period [crying][crying][crying]. The answer is that this article is really super super super good-looking. I recommend it to others\(//∇//)\

The heroine is not passive but also very talented, and she studies very well. And he is very independent and clear-headed. It has its own set of theories, so in Hogwarts and even the wizarding world, it is like a drop of water in a pan, and fairy tales are punctured by the sharp edge of reality. The author's writing has the same ethereal feel as Luna's. The heroine gives people a sense of calm madness. Although there is no cp, there are always people hanging around the heroine, and the heroine is always being teased, such as having her wrists grabbed and other physical contact. Still feeling a little frustrated.

Not bad. The heroine is calm and rational. I have read Chapter 36. I really like the plot of the first grade [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. The heroine's brain is always online. I deducted one star because I personally don't like the interaction between the heroine and Tom. I feel that he is sick and unworthy of the heroine (he is not the heroine's CP. This contains personal emotions, and it does not mean that the writing is bad [sending my heart])

I am very glad that I did not give up reading when I was very confused. This is an HP novel that requires you to really calm down and read. Here, you cannot rely on the characters you read from the original novel to look at the characters in this article. Each character is very independent and distinct, and every detail has the author's own considerations. Don't feel that it is a bit inexplicable. It's so wonderful that I gave up because in the end you will find that everything is so reasonable. I felt pity for every boy who had a crush on the heroine but was rejected. I even thought about who the heroine could be with. But in the end, I was very happy that the heroine could remain sober and rational. What I regret most is the boy who lives in a house with colorful flowers all year round.

Holy shit, it's so beautiful. When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was some kind of Mary Sue plot. It turned out to be a masterpiece [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

I haven't finished reading it yet. I'm almost done with it. I'll post a review first. I'll follow up after reading it. The concepts in it are really shocking. The heroine is the kind of person who doesn't care about feelings but is very serious about them. So, please stay happy! Ah, I've finished reading it I'm really in a daze. I know I'll finish it soon, but when that day comes, I still feel uncomfortable. There is no winner after the gunshot, but we are all still alive Death is not the end, forgetfulness is, so please unswervingly believe that he is still alive and prove to Him The three views are really upright. Students should study. School is a place for teaching and educating people. All darkness ends at the school gate. To our stars ✨ I have very good ears, and I will hear you even if you call me from far away, so please call me more often. After all, the whole article is finished, but the story continues——

It's a very good book. It's currently in the top 1 of my HP books. I really like Quinlan's characterization, the wise Evening Star [crying] As for the plot, I think the first part is quite satisfactory (personal opinion) (I think the second part of the plot is better! The most noteworthy advantages are: 1. The shaping of Quinlan ( 2. The writing is beautiful (there is a sentence that I particularly like: love travels thousands of miles away) 3. The views put forward by Quinlan in the article are thought-provoking (for example, 1. Victory is not the only criterion for making choices... 2. People are not one-sided.) 4. It feels like it will be a group portrait. Everyone is important and has his or her own value. In the final battle, everyone is the savior, instead of just putting the credit on one person. It feels very passionate (crying all the way from the battle to the extra chapter). 5. As mentioned in the above three examples, the people here are two-sided, so the characters will be more vivid. … The two most important points are the writing style and Quinlan's characterization (Quinland's characterization x3, hahaha, it can be seen that I really like it) Tom Riddle's extra episode makes me cry so much, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo shortcomings There are some parts of the plot that are not handled well. I feel that the writing experience is not very long. In terms of some major plots, the handling is still relatively green, and some parts are not explained clearly (the ouroboros on the finger is not clearly explained, and why there is a snake shape at the back... Time Reset has too little foreshadowing, as if it was inserted suddenly) (Personal opinions, personal feelings, maybe I mentioned some of them but forgot/didn't see them, apologies) Again, you will know if you like it or not after watching it. Finally To Vespera Quinlan Hello, nice to meet you. And, looking forward to seeing you again. (Yes, the first sentence is quoted from the book (it feels very suitable)

No wonder the rating is so high. The author's writing style is so good. I feel like my heart will calm down after reading his words. I can't describe this feeling. It looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good [Like]

I have already read it. This book is the top 1 among the books I have read for a long time (no cp female channel) The heroine is full of charm, gentle in her rationality, and seemingly cold-blooded in her sobriety, but in fact she has her own set of standards of judgment, as if she is pursuing the best world (always writing reports) but is not paranoid. She just sees what she wants to do and can do it, so she does it. The ability to deal with problems is max, she is decisive in doing things, she doesn't get angry at all, she sees things clearly, she is calm, emotionally stable and full of wisdom, who doesn't love the heroine [Send my heart][Send my heart] Moreover, according to the description of this book, all the characters in the whole process are not OOC (everything they do is in line with common sense, do not read the original work). The plot is very compact. It ends in more than ten chapters in the first semester. The story is typical and can easily highlight the characters' personalities. The heroine's unique personality is highlighted in just a few chapters. Every character is very lovable (except for some...) The author's perspective on thinking about the problem is also unique! It's a completely new way of thinking about HP. I've read several HP fanfics and it's the first time I've seen it written like this. It can be said that it even rationalizes the original work (I don't know if that's a bit exaggerated, but it seems like it to me). The writing at the beginning of the description is very gentle. It is a kind of fine chaff that needs to be calmed down and tasted carefully, and the more it tastes, the more fragrant it becomes. The heroine in the gentle and delicate writing is also gentle and delicate [Like] [Like] [Like] (A word of silence: Actually, I don't understand much about the heroine's life experience... I feel like the past life is not explained in detail, although it's not important... Wuwuwu srds I still can't bear to part with the foreign persimmon, so I won't go to Lujiang to follow Da Da.

It's so good to read, because I fell in love with Barty Jr. In this book. I found a lot of Barty Little fanfics but none of them have the flavor of Rouse. You smell so good, Rouse (˘❥˘)

This is probably the first time I have encountered a book with this writing style of the author. Without talking about the heroine, I feel that it is fresh, natural, and unhurried, and the author's book is also suitable for careful reading. The first time I read it, I felt that the reading was not smooth, because I am used to reading ten lines at a time. The second time I read it carefully, I felt that the writing was excellent, the style was what I liked, and the description of the heroine was also very nice. The plot is not too slow and there is not too much nonsense. I highly recommend this book.

This is a very nice book. I have read so many books. In this one, the author's ideas are novel and the characters are three-dimensional, especially the heroine, who is sober and powerful... All the beautiful words can be seen in her. This is not just a heartthrob, there is growth, there is learning... In short, it is not a setting for her to become a heartthrob, but a necessity. Moreover, the author's writing style is really good. The various environments, appearances, actions... Are all very good, and they are very consistent with the original characters. I also imitated it in my composition... Love you, author greatly. I would call this book "the greatest book" (personal feelings)

It's a very good-looking fanfic. It fits my idea of ​​a perfect heroine who is calm and self-possessed, with unparalleled wisdom, but also like fireworks in the world. The author is really good at writing, and it's so easy to get excited after just one more glance. But the update speed is so good (｀Δ´)!

After reading it, I felt a slight sense of disappointment. It ended like this. The writing was really good. I was often touched by the words in the article. It was a novel experience from a perspective I had never seen before. I highly recommend it to everyone who likes to read Harry Potter fan fiction! ! !

It's amazing that the heroine is really career-centered. It's not like a non-CP otome novel. Moreover, the teacher's writing style is very good and there are many foreshadowings. I'm amazed every time I watch it. There's also a very delicious dog training theme😋😋