Jobless Reincarnation, Time Sage

I've read a few chapters and I feel pretty good. It's much better than other jobless reincarnations in Tomato. Come on, I really want to see the last one [Like] Very bad, the story line is very strange, the plot is inexplicable, I can't accept that the jobless reincarnation is so difficult to write, it is very average, very average, or poisonous

You publish a book and write about being unemployed, I read it, click in, the beginning is good, very attractive, small flaws, it doesn't matter, read slowly, you slowly update, write innovation, be able to accept, let yourself go, no, run away, but please encourage me

This book is not as embarrassing as the author said. This book is at least in the middle and upper reaches of what I have read, but it may also be due to the small size of the book and the fact that I have not read the original work. I actually don't comment much anymore, but author, I think you need some help in your heart. First of all, more than 70% of people can write works. As long as there is no bottom line conflict, those readers who are obsessed with you every day have no right to criticize you, and the readers who criticize you are not as important as you think, just like a neutral pen mark on an 8-karat white paper, insignificant but attracting your attention. I think everyone in this fast-paced society is very busy. Compared with the readers who criticize you, there are more ordinary people who relax with cool articles. The kind of ordinary people who have no time to waste on criticizing others. If they like it, they will give it a good review after reading it. If they don't like it, they are too lazy to waste energy. So those negative fans you think are really insignificant, so don't be internal. Moreover, there are so many free books. It can only be said to be picking up the bowl to eat and putting down the bowl to curse. Finally, the author, your thoughts are very similar to mine. You are the kind of person who likes redemption. If you want to add some suffering but are criticized, I can only say that they want to see it and suffer, because those who don't like it have long stayed away. Haha, I wish the author a safe journey.

It's worth appreciating. The writing style is good, but the relationship between the characters is not handled well, the logical relationship is a little loose, and there are some minor problems with the arrangement of the timeline. However, the emotions between the characters are still good among the main characters. The details need to be polished more, but it is still a good novel.

I hope the author will read the original novel carefully. Some of the plots in the anime have been deleted too much. It's very messy, and the more you write, the more messy it becomes. It will be much better to write the framework first and then write.

This could have been done. At least the language is coherent, the logic is clear, and the updates are stable. A bit better than other jobless novels on Tomato. Come on, author.

Well, quite satisfactory. There is nothing particularly praiseworthy. Basically, I read it because of the protagonist's plug-in setting and Luo Qixi. I think these two points are acceptable. In addition, the author can be happy when he sees bad reviews. At least some people will read them. I have seen several books. The writing is okay, but there are only a few readers. They are basically playing stand-alone games [laughing]

Judging from the current rhythm, it is possible that the cp will be dismantled. I still think it is not good to dismantle the cp.

Jianguo's introduction of culture is not very interesting (personal opinion). Invincible is very easy to get bored in terms of combat. It is obviously very interesting to develop and use three king-level swordsmanship and two magic spells for the male protagonist in close combat in the later period. And why the male protagonist didn't bring his family with him a year before the big transfer. The heroine Luo Qixi has good reviews. It's a pity that the candy is not very good.

It looks good, I love watching it, don't die, please Luo Qixi, the female protagonist, yay! 2024.8.30 2:43 Thank you for your company for a month, thank you Good night and sweet dreams

Come on, author, I really like the book Jobless Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi! 🐱🐶 😡 😭 👗 👗 ✊🏻 👕 ✊🏻👕 👧 🪑🪑 👖 👖 👗

It's very good, very relaxing, and may not be to the liking of many people, but equally, it is a good work for many people.

Even if the grade of the novel is not good, please keep writing it (become the King of Elden Ciallo~(∠ω< )⌒

Thank you for the joy you have brought to me this month. I am sorry that I only remembered to rate this book after finishing it. I wish everyone who reads it all the best, and I wish the author a safe journey.

It looks good, but it's a bit lacking. Come on, the author.

It's interesting. There are very few jobless books. You are one of them. I'll keep an eye on you. Come on.

One star was deducted because of the prison sentence. Well, although it may be force majeure, everyone has their own judgment. Other than that, I think the writing is very good. There is no bad writing or bad plot as others said. It's worth reading, but it's a pity that if I could have read this book earlier, the author would not have really finished the book because there is one more reader who likes this book [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Finally, good night

It's very interesting. Come on, author. I hope there will be a single heroine, Luo Qixi.

[Crying] I finally met a jobless reincarnation whose writing skills are good enough. I won't talk about the plot or anything else.

Author, hurry up, I want more. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Very well written and delicious ('▿')

Good, good, good, good, good, good I don't want to write at all

Not bad, not bad, Rocky Shiroki Shiroki Shiroki Shiroki Shirokishi

There are currently few jobless fans who have survived, and they look pretty good [sending my heart]

It's not enough, author, please post 30 more pictures [crying][crying][crying]

Come on, author, support me, I feel pretty good, I hope there will be a single heroine

Overall, this book seems to be okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง

I've read more than 30 chapters, and I feel it's pretty good. It's quite outstanding among the same type of fan fiction.

Come on, can you have a single female protagonist? Author! ! !

Wherever Mama Blue is, I'll be there