Middle-earth in a Box

Point 1: It is impossible for the mysterious box to be affected by the protagonist's various remarks about connections and the like, and then be made into a game. Your setting is unreasonable. Point 2: Since their physics are the same, magic should not exist.

The setting of terminal illness is very cliche and the story is quite interesting. I hope future stories will be more epic. Five-star praise. It's normal for muskets to appear, as long as some outrageous Maxim machine guns don't appear to kill magicians. Then how could there be something like Dantian inner elixir in the magical world? Your initial tone was magical and western fantasy, and you suddenly came up with something like Dantian. It was really inconsistent. If you really wanted to write about Dantian, then you shouldn't have used magic as the main tone at the beginning. It would definitely be inconsistent with the mainstream, and it would still be uncomfortable to watch. Even if your plot is reasonable and your conception is normal, not many people will watch it.

The book is cleverly conceived and the plot has ups and downs. The characters written by the author are lifelike. I think it is a good book worth reading [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

A very nice book? Praise!

Are you sure the protagonist won't be caught and tortured? Dare to openly cooperate with game companies, terrifying time flow, completely unique culture, not only alien technology but also related to aliens

Very good book

I prefer this style of book