Slam Dunk: Raising Players at Shohoku

The writing is quite good. The only criticism is that Mitsui has been weakened too much, and Mugure has also been strengthened a lot. Can you imagine that players of the same level as Maki, Fujima, and Sendō can't break through the unknown one-on-one? Mitsui is basically not weak to Fujima too much, even if he is at Kiyota's level.

A very good fanfic, that is, the overall physical strength of the Shohoku players needs to be strengthened, and they need to find two strong substitutes. Otherwise, it will be difficult to compete in the national competition. Mitsui's junior high school MVP also needs to develop the offensive ability with the ball, not just a three-point shooter. Center Gorilla, power forward Sakuragi Hanamichi, small forward Rukawa Kaede, shooting guard or 3D Mitsui, point guard, Miyagi Ryota,

The whole book is quite well written, especially in terms of various tactical lineups. It is very professional and comfortable to read. However, in the plot year, the author weakened Shohoku in order to make the plot less bland, especially Sakuragi and Mitsui. After all, Mitsui, who has no window period, and Sakuragi, who came into contact with basketball two years in advance, can be imagined. The strength, coupled with the advanced mastery of various Akagi, who has skills around the basket and mid-range shots, Miyagi, who has learned mid-range shots and three-pointers and has no window for a year, Rukawa, who has learned passing skills in advance, plus Kigure, Kosuge, Katsumi and others, Shohoku is invincible in Kanagawa, and it is basically a dimensionality reduction attack on other teams. In order to be less insipid, it is understandable that the author weakened some, and played on par with Hainan Lingnan and others. But in the end, the battle against Sanno was written quite well. Although it was not as passionate as the Mitsui Explosion Seed or Sakuragi Rukawa Century High Five in the original novel, it was strengthened after all. It would be somewhat unreasonable to do that anymore. However, the tactics were written quite well and it did not weaken Zebei. It was very good. It was a slam dunk novel worth reading.

OK. The protagonist is not only good at basketball, but also knows a lot about basketball and can be called a forum expert. Niu, who had a heart disease but still played, suppressed the basketball team in the early stage. Moreover, he traveled from the future to the past and has super basketball awareness and tactical arrangements. What he wrote is like a story about traveling through the past in the Anti-Japanese War novel, carrying a thermal imaging map, having a field of vision, well-equipped, and capable soldiers (referring to the protagonist's strong military ability). In 20 years, Shuang Wen had an e-sports talent that rivaled or even surpassed that of donk. He joined the club at a young age, competed in all directions, won the first place in the Korean rankings, and became famous for China. In short, it's nice to have a head start. The key is to help Xiangbei win the top four. Judging from the current trend, it may be the first place. The author should keep up the good work, it's not enough.

So far it's pretty good. There are some details that haven't been taken care of yet. Just consider the era at that time. At that time, some private schools had canteens. One suggestion I gave him was that everyone in Xiangbei should increase their height by a few centimeters inside the cylinder. After all, they have been systematically trained by the protagonist.

A rare coaching article, the plot design is reasonable and the characters fit the comics very well. There are flaws, but not many. The quality is considered to be excellent. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง.

Is it the TV version or the comic version of Slam Dunk World? If it is the TV version, there is another super talent who does not have a famous teacher, Naito Tetsuya. A good interior dominant center was turned into a point guard, and he only played point guard for one year. If he was given to Xiangbei, Lingnan and Hainan, he would never be given a ceiling-level basketball player with such useless physical fitness.

The subject matter is novel, the characters are in line with the original work, and each chapter is very substantial. I hope the author can keep updating it. After all, it is not easy to find a good-looking and non-destructive Slam Dunk fanfic 🤦.

Awesome, I feel like the author is very professional

A very good Slam Dunk fanfic. From different angles, he leads Xiangbei to realize his dream. Rather than being a player and breaking the entire Five Tigers of the Xiangbei team, as a coach, it is more clever to improve the character's ability. I don't know why the score is only 7.5. The overall writing style, logic and narrative techniques are all in harmony with the Slam Dunk style, and it can be seen that the author has a basketball level rather than a data flow and a running account. I support the author.