[Electric-Type Gym + Pokemon World + Shiny Shinx + New Region + Training and Growth + One Female Lead]
Inside Lan Feng Gym
Chen Luo, the senior disciple at the Gym, stood before his junior brothers and sisters in a yellow trainee's robe, giving them a pep talk.
"Before the old Gym Leader left, he told me that as long as something could help the Gym, I was free to do it. Now, for the sake of rebuilding the Gym, I've gathered everyone here to brainstorm. Anyone can share their ideas."
Seeing everyone enthusiastically discussing, Chen Luo nodded with satisfaction.
That was, until one of the junior disciples shared his idea:
"I think our Gym should appoint a new Champion and a new Elite Four to replace the League's Elite Four. Then, Senior Brother, you can become the new League Chairman."
Chen Luo patted the junior disciple on the shoulder, smiling warmly. "You sure have a vivid imagination when it comes to helping the Gym, kid."
A crowd of reporters surrounded Chen Luo. "Gym Leader Chen, thank you for stepping in and saving the entire Naxi Region. What's the secret behind your incredible strength?"
Chen Luo furrowed his brow and replied impatiently:
"I've told you not to call me Gym Leader. I'm just a lowly trainee!"
From the beginning to now, 80,000 words have been written. Let's talk about your thoughts. First of all, I really like the creation of new areas in the context of this Pokémon worldview, and it has the author's own characteristics, which is very good. As for the plot, it seems that the plot is relatively slow at the moment, but it can be seen from the front that the author has still put in some effort, starting with the protagonist setting of gym leader + student, which I prefer, as well as the school's rookie cup and school team. Then there are a lot of foreshadowings about the gym, and I am looking forward to the next development. Moving on to the updates, the continuous and stable updates for the past month are also a plus. The article is also very easy to read. In short, the potential is still very great, so go for it!
🤔 Let me say something from the bottom of my heart: I personally think it is really beautiful, the story is flesh-and-blood, and the characters are my favorite. The narrative style is also very relaxed, making it a comfortable read. However, you can still feel the unfolding of the plot, and feel some of the details that the author has done intentionally or unintentionally, such as some psychological activities, small movements of the characters, etc., Allowing us to make personal guesses about the subsequent plot while getting to know the characters. And this is the rare thing about this book - it creates interaction between readers and the author in plot prediction. However, precisely because of our personal thoughts, we will also see some "flaws" in this book. For example, the fighting plot, the training and matching of Pokémon, these may be very different from our usual understanding (our usual understanding refers to judging based on the official data), but the author writes it like this, but it can give people a bright feeling. Just imagine, in the anime, Xiaozhi, who has irreversible attributes and cannot play, is placed in the game. You will definitely say that he is not good at it, or that he does not understand the game at all. But in the anime, doesn't it just reflect the character of a hot-blooded young man (or a reckless person 🤦)? So, the same principle applies to fan fiction. We don't need to be too deliberate in bringing in the logic of Pokémon games and pursue the so-called "rigor". After all, that set of "rigor" is more suitable for games. (It's not a complete denial, it's just that the fanfic is not true when we read it.) For example, in this book, regarding Thunder Beast's moves and tactics, it is clear that according to the official data, Thunder Beast should be a medium-to-high-speed special attacker. It should use special attack skills and kiting tactics, so it should not use three-teeth skills to fight the opponent in close combat. But we are limited when we think about it this way. Judging from the fact that Thunder Beast is a canine, writing a skill like Sanya can better reflect the tension of the battle scene. In addition, the author also raised the question of "how to make Thunder Beast use Sanya stably without causing energy rejection", which is very eye-catching! All in all, when reading pm fanfiction, we can use our own understanding to explore the feasibility of various details of the book (including battles, training, etc.), Instead of pursuing the optimal solution every time like in the game. Because behind these details lies the author's own thoughts, which is the highlight of this book. Finally, as a newcomer, the author is very surprised to be able to write like this. I am very curious about the follow-up story. I hope the author can write better and better, and I also wish all readers a good reading experience [laughs]
The author's writing is good. I have only added three books with single attributes to my bookshelf. I actually saw the treasure in the new book section. After adding it to the bookshelf, I might consider getting a Mamo Eel King, an electric Pokémon without any attributes or weaknesses. Where is the author?
It looks pretty good so far, keep up the good work!
It's rare to see a good-looking Pokémon article. Whether it's the background setting or the main plot, it attracted me immediately. However, in terms of the detailed description of the battle, the author's writing style is still immature. I sincerely hope that the author will continue to work hard. I believe that the writing style will gradually improve. Come on! And don't stop updating, I will definitely support you all the time⌯>ᴗo⌯ .ᐟ.ᐟ
Looks good!! The rhythm is good, keep up the good work!
Super beautiful, highly recommended.
The writing is really good, there are basically no skipped chapters. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.