I Went to Join My Uncle, and Lü Bu Shook His Head

The author is a newcomer with limited skills. I am grateful for the tolerance and encouragement of my book friends ~ This book is not a cool book, the pace is relatively slow, and the plot is also different. There is no need for those great gods who call "poison" whatever they don't like to say "poison". There are many great works by other great people. There is no need to chase after amateurs like me to criticize them ~ Thank you for your tolerance I spent a week revising this book at the end of February for branch issues, as well as some unrealistic military performances. To be honest, I wrote this book for my own entertainment, and I didn't expect to make much money, but there were always a lot of people saying bad things. I just saw it on the front end recently (Tomato is hidden in the backend, and the author can't see it). I feel very bad. It's true that wherever there are people, there are rivers and lakes. I will sort out my mood next and try my best to finish this book ~ I also wish everyone to be more calm in reality and have more good luck ~ Let's encourage each other

Not bad, four stars for now! But considering the author says he is a newbie? Give me a five-star encouragement! It should be regarded as an imaginary parallel world of the Three Kingdoms, so it has some original plots and characters. In addition to war and strategy, it also incorporates some martial arts, or martial arts elements. I feel it is more suitable for fans of the Three Kingdoms. I hope I can write better and better!

The writing is good, but it is a slow-burning article. The author was a bit of a mid-level reader in the early stage [note], but the problem is not big. The protagonist exerts his strength around the 20th or 30th chapter, and is relatively good [learned] [learned]. Mainly attacking a Shu Han gang [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Haokan, what do you think about the whole if line, where the protagonist suddenly dies of illness after taking the last step to revive the Han Dynasty for the emperor's uncle? (Of course the Han Dynasty was still revived, but the protagonist still didn't see the day of salvation) [Sneaky laugh]

I personally feel that the protagonist can have a background, a descendant of the champion Hou Huo Qubing, with either a gun or a halberd, and the development direction should not become a complete martial artist. I suggest that a combination of Deng Ai and Jiang Wei is better, one who mounts his horse to fight and dismounts to govern the country. After all, the Shu Han Dynasty was extremely short of generals in the later period. It is recommended to capture all the generals that can be recruited, such as Pang De, Xu Shu, Wang Wei, Wenpin, and Gan Ning. It depends on the situation (it is recommended to take it, after all, Gan Ning and Ling Tong have a feud), and then recruit Tian Yu (Liu Bei's old acquaintance). Secondly, for the fighting scenes, I suggest you describe the scene and directly name the moves, which is a bit embarrassing and doesn't have that sense of imagery. And from my point of view, Xuzhou is not enough to be the foundation. It will be even more uncomfortable to be sandwiched between Cao Cao and Sun Quan, without a large rear area. Secondly, Xuzhou has been riddled with holes after many wars, plus massacres, and the population has also dropped sharply. I suggest that Jingzhou be added to Western Shu, and then take Xiliang from Jing and Shu first, and then conquer Jiangdong across the river, and then divide the world in two, and conquer the north from the south, like Deng Ai and Jiang Wei in the later period. Secondly, Lu Xun can fight for it, after all, he has a grudge against Sun Ce. Now that Hu Che'er is here, Chen Dao can be liberated relatively. Hu Che'er will be the commander of Liu Bei's personal guard, and then he will form the Baijie Army in advance, and then choose the generals to go south to Jiangdong. Assuming that Liu Bei personally conquers it, if nothing unexpected happens, Guan Yu (other people think that Liu Bei will also be worried) should be the governor who stays in Xuzhou to guard against Yuan Yuan. Shao or Cao Cao will come to steal the butt, followed by Zang Ba, Sun Guan, Chen Gong, Sun Qian, Xu Shu, Chen Deng and his sons, and Gao Shun. Those who will fight should be Huo Xiao, Gan Ning (the main force in the water battle), Zhuge Liang (to restrain Zhou Yu), Chen Dao, Zhang Liao (in a sense Soochow's nemesis), Zhang Fei or Wei Yan (one of these two must be left for Guan Yu). After defeating Sun Ce, you can see how the Sun family ends. Sun Ce cannot surrender at this time. Sun Ce's ambition to capture Jiangdong was already very great. It is basically impossible to surrender, and surrender will be meaningless. After a few years of basic cultivation, it will start to be flat. Then if Sun Ce does not surrender, Cheng Pu, Huang Gai, Han Dang, and Zhou Yu will all die. , Those who are unlikely to surrender, those who can surrender are Tai Shi Ci (an old friend of Liu Bei), Lu Su, Lu Meng (not a diehard loyalist at this time), Lu Xun (who has enmity with Sun Ce), Xu Sheng, Ding Feng and other later generals as well as some aristocratic generals. In the future, the development will be nothing more than pacifying Jiaozhou in the south, attacking Liu Biao and Liu Zhang in the west, and attacking Cao Cao and Yuan Shao in the north.

The real battlefield performance, but the protagonist's performance on the battlefield is not described enough. The assassination organization in the early stage of the plot made people feel a bit poisonous. Fortunately, it disappeared soon.

I have been hesitating for a long time whether to give it four stars or five stars. Four stars is because of the hurriedly concluded outline, and five stars is because of the calmness and relaxation while reading. In the end, I chose five stars - the comfortable narrative and reasonable characters make it one of the few Three Kingdoms novels that I have read recently. The protagonist Huo Xiao traveled through time and became an ordinary soldier in Lu Bu's army. By chance, he joined Liu Bei's camp, and the gears of fate began to turn. In fact, there are no big ups and downs in this book. Because of the appearance of Huo Xiao, Liu Bei successfully surrendered Lu Bu's camp after defending Xuzhou. The early departure of Zhuge Liang, Pang Tong and others stabilized the situation in Xuzhou. Some talents who should have gone to other forces also joined Liu Bei's command. As a result, the Shu Han Dynasty, with its advisors and generals gathering like a rain, was completely different from history. Gan Ning, Xu Sheng, Ding Feng, Lu Xun and other important figures in Soochow all belonged to Liu Bei, and Sun Quan's suspicion and cruelty became the last straw that broke Jiangdong's mind. As a result, Liu Bei and others crossed Jingyang and conquered the world. Unfortunately, due to the author's financial reasons, the content after the annexation of Jiangdong was not spelled out in detail. It was only given an ending in the form of an outline, which is quite a pity. The king and his ministers should work together, and the wise and sages should work together.

Liu Bei is such a hero, how can I bear to do him a little harm?

The writing is quite good, especially the Xuzhou part. The strategic and tactical parts are very organized. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied tactical formations and cold weapon tactics. The newcomer has written very well at this level. If he can write about political maneuvering, family interests, and supplying food and grass in more depth, he can be on par with Shao and Song Dynasties.

Five stars. Signing in without a system voice is already pretty good.