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So far, it's pretty good. Some people say that the protagonist's strength is too high. I personally think it's okay. After all, it's about saving the world. If you don't increase the strength, why should you slowly develop it? There won't be enough time for you to develop.

I like. Here I am adding to the union mission. The current Honkai time is three years before the start of the game plot. Because there are few famous big scenes in Honkai, I propose a mission. I am not sure about the specific time of this event. It is an existence that is only mentioned in the plot. It is the Honkai that Anna (Bing Lu) and Chen Tianwu (Yan Lu) first met. It is also a city-level Honkai. Since there are very few other Honkai locations mentioned in the main storyline, this is the one I can think of. All I can think of is what happened a few years before Ice Law appeared, which is probably the time in the current plot.

Looking forward to meeting famous actresses from Mijia

The writing is still OK, but there is one mistake. Teyvat is in the quantum sea, not in the tree.

The content of this book is good, but the characters have too many dialogues. In fact, some of the dialogues can be appropriately reduced and omitted to improve the viewing experience. There is no need to repeatedly emphasize some content. For example, except for the part at the beginning that introduces the functions and responsibilities of the protagonist system, you can omit these later and just use one sentence to bring it over.

The subject matter is okay. Keep up the good work, I'm more optimistic. It's better to lean towards characterization rather than harem. The harem story is not interesting. It may take a lot of thinking to describe the plot, but the score may be very high in the future.

Very nice and well written

If you want to comment, you can check the comments section and I won't go into details. To be honest, I am the kind of person who likes to read harem stories, but the location and content of the emotional scenes you wrote here feel weird (I have always failed in Chinese, so I won't say more because I can't say anything). The subject matter of this book is still very good. If the minor issues can be corrected in the later stage, it will be very good. Four stars encourage you to read it later.

，，! I fucking retract my preface, you are really good at it, I'd better wait for a few hundred chapters before reading it.

Just think of it as the parallel world of Genshin Impact, Honkai Impact, and Star Iron.

Good looking, good luck to the author

It looks good so far, keep up the good work

Miyou players are overjoyed. This setting is very interesting and beautiful. You can write more about different worlds. Uncle Yang of Bengtie is the main plot that appeared a long time after Honkai Impact. I think there is no ending anyway, so there is no need to rush. I should finish Honkai Impact 3 first. Honkai Impact 2 can also be checked in later. How about it, please help the author!

Holy shit, I haven't read such a high-quality book in a long time. Five stars must be five stars, not five stars, sorry for this book.

It's beautiful, hold on, don't let it suck

It's a very novel subject matter, refreshing and worth watching [laughs]

This book is so fucking beautiful

A very good book

Not bad, I like it very much

When will it be pushed to zero?

Good looking, good looking, come on

Come on Come on Author

What situation, what situation, just one chapter, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [Thinking]

I would like to ask the protagonist, doesn't he know that Kiana is the sister of Duo Ge? Why can't we instigate rebellion? It's so strange. It feels like the protagonist knows a lot of things but doesn't tell Theresa and the others.

It's a good subject, but the various explanation dialogues are really long.

Very good, support the author to continue writing novels with similar themes

Not bad, the subject matter is very good, I like it.

It's creative and beautiful, and it can realize all the famous memes on the Internet. At the same time, there are more possibilities. …Forget it, it's pretty good-looking anyway.

Come on, author, come on, come on, watch it well.

It's very interesting to cross the sea of ​​trees, Miyou players are ecstatic