Genshin Impact and Honkai: Star Rail: I'm in Genshin Impact, Taking Tree Sea Jobs on Demand

So far, it's pretty good. Some people say that the protagonist's strength is too high. I personally think it's okay. After all, it's about saving the world. If you don't increase the strength, why should you slowly develop it? There won't be enough time for you to develop.

I like. Here I am adding to the union mission. The current Honkai time is three years before the start of the game plot. Because there are few famous big scenes in Honkai, I propose a mission. I am not sure about the specific time of this event. It is an existence that is only mentioned in the plot. It is the Honkai that Anna (Bing Lu) and Chen Tianwu (Yan Lu) first met. It is also a city-level Honkai. Since there are very few other Honkai locations mentioned in the main storyline, this is the one I can think of. All I can think of is what happened a few years before Ice Law appeared, which is probably the time in the current plot.

Looking forward to meeting famous actresses from Mijia

The content of this book is good, but the characters have too many dialogues. In fact, some of the dialogues can be appropriately reduced and omitted to improve the viewing experience. There is no need to repeatedly emphasize some content. For example, except for the part at the beginning that introduces the functions and responsibilities of the protagonist system, you can omit these later and just use one sentence to bring it over.

The subject matter is okay. Keep up the good work, I'm more optimistic. It's better to lean towards characterization rather than harem. The harem story is not interesting. It may take a lot of thinking to describe the plot, but the score may be very high in the future.

The writing is still OK, but there is one mistake. Teyvat is in the quantum sea, not in the tree.

If you want to comment, you can check the comments section and I won't go into details. To be honest, I am the kind of person who likes to read harem stories, but the location and content of the emotional scenes you wrote here feel weird (I have always failed in Chinese, so I won't say more because I can't say anything). The subject matter of this book is still very good. If the minor issues can be corrected in the later stage, it will be very good. Four stars encourage you to read it later.

Very nice and well written

Just think of it as the parallel world of Genshin Impact, Honkai Impact, and Star Iron.

I fucking retract my preface, you are really good at it, I'd better wait for a few hundred chapters before reading it.