After Passing Through the Book, the Little Writer Became Popular

Wow, it's really good. I didn't expect it. I finished it in one glance. I didn't have enough time to read the author's update soon! However, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings. For example, Mr. Jiang has most likely met Lele in reality and helped Lele. When they return to reality in the future, damn, it will be super cool! That is to say, when we return to reality, can we not forget the memories of this world? Let both of them keep their memories, okay? [Sending Hearts]

It was very interesting, and the ending was a bit fast. The pace of the story is very fast, and there is also a part about Lele's own growth. However, in dealing with the villain, although the speed is fast, it is not complete enough. Some parts are not written, such as dealing with Lele's family in the world after traveling through the book. There is no process, only an ending, but the speed is fast and there is no tension. The relationship between the two people also progresses quickly, but there are too many things. The part where the two people get along. It's a bit sparse, and then the ending is a bit hasty. For example, it ended when the two finally returned to their original world, and then there was no formal proposal. It still felt a bit regretful, but the logic in the book is okay and quite smooth, but it may be because the author was just starting out so he didn't dare to start. As a result, there are quite a few regrets in the whole book, but there is no sad part in it. It is good as a bedtime article.

It's very beautiful, but not enough (I'm at a loss for words)

Super pretty! Sweet! Very nice

Not bad, good humor [top post][top post][top post]

It's so good to read, the author is so excited [admiration][admiration][admiration], come on [blowing kisses]

The logic is good, there is no misunderstanding. The character design is also nice, but the deputy CP really pokes at me. I'm going to give you my heart.

Yeah, it's pretty good. It's a sweet story, but the ending is quite rushed.

Very interesting, looking forward to the author's next book

Overall it looks pretty good, the process could be improved a bit, the pace is a bit fast, I hope it will be better in the future

Not bad, sweet love

Mengmengmeng, very beautiful!

Not bad, I like this content very much

It's very good, but it's not enough [I'm about to cry] I want to watch the extras

It's okay, it's a nice little sweet article.

It's so beautiful. It's obviously a little sweet bean. I can't see where there's any charm [love] [love] [love]

It's very good to watch, the only drawback is that there are no extras

The plot is okay, but the writing is a bit immature. Good luck to the author.