A Young Man on a White Horse Is Drunk in the Spring Breeze: a Visitor from the North

Damn, this is the most enjoyable time I've ever seen the original female protagonist in Shao Bai. It's particularly beautiful. Brother Yun didn't end up with the woman who harmed him all his life in the original work, and Xiao Dongjun didn't suffer a lifetime of hardship for Yue Yao. All the good people in the original work are. With a good ending, it would be great if this was Shaobai's ending. Your writing is really good. Thank you for the article you wrote. It fulfilled the dreams of people in Shaobai and also fulfilled my dream of regretting the incompleteness of Shaobai. It's really great! ! !

There is no other rare masterpiece in Shao Bai. I didn't expect that a female channel's book could be so popular. It's very beautiful and the heroine has a distinct personality. I feel like she should have been in the book. She is Su Baiyi's daughter who has entered the Jianghu. There is no sense of disobedience. Come on!

I like this kind of fanfic that is not controlled by the plot. It is written just like the original work. The heroine has a very unique personality and the author is the protagonist. It does not revolve around the original work. The writing is very good. Come on [like post] [like thread] [like thread] Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX It's a pity that it's not finished. I feel like it will take a while to catch up, so rush rush [salute] [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute]

There is no rebirth and time travel. A truly original heroine blends into some stories of Jianghu and Shaobai protagonists. I hope it can change everyone's tragic ending. I'm very happy that the CP is Ye Dingzhi. I hope they can all have a happy ending. Please support me with five stars. I hope it won't collapse in the future! ! It's good-looking and not OOC. The addition of the heroine is very appropriate and not at all awkward. More updates! ! ! Hope it doesn't collapse later. Beautiful, can't get enough! ! ! ! Ahhhhhh! !

It's really beautiful. Great author. For the sake of my short time, please add a few more chapters! God knows how difficult it is for me to wait for updates in my room. I have a few days left before school starts. I wonder if I can wait for your update! For the sake of me going back to prison soon, author, please give me a few more chapters! Ah! ! ! The author is great, I love you to death, you are my god. I thought the author would not update today, but I didn't expect to update two chapters at once. What kind of magical author are you? ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Fly Kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss] [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Fly Kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

This book is not bad, the writing is plain, and it also describes the heroism of the world, but the focus is on Ye Dingzhi and Nangong Jihe, not a group portrait. Baili Dongjun did not end up with Yueyao, probably because he drank the funeral wine and lived a lonely life as mentioned at the beginning. In the end, Xiao Ruofeng was awakened, and he left Tianqi and became a knight-errant in the world. Except for Dongjun, everyone should be thinking about developing in a good direction, which can be regarded as a good ending for Shaobai.

The writing is so beautiful, it would be unbearable if it were not changed. It is really beautiful and the setting is good. It gives Ye Dingzhi a happy ending [crazy] [crazy]

It really fulfilled my Shaobai dream. Whether it is novels or animations, my favorite is Ye Dingzhi. I always feel that such a free and unrestrained young man should not live a lonely life without a happy ending. In this book, Brother Yun and Dong Jun are always side by side, and Ye Dingzhi is no longer alone. He is alone. This time he is surrounded by a group of like-minded young people. He also has a wife who loves him, protects him and believes in him. He has a happy life. The only flaw is that Yin Luoxia's highlight is still given to Yueyao, but the flaws are not concealed, and she is beautiful [Sending Hearts]

It's really awesome! ! ! I can't stop laughing, that feeling that you can't stand me but can't kill me, it's so amazing! ! ! I really like the heroine, the part about breaking into the palace, and the fake power of the fox from the sky, hahahaha, I really love it, please give me more updates ahhhhhhhhhhhh I finished reading it all in one go, and I can't see other fans anymore [I'm about to cry] I urge you to update, I urge you to update like crazy!

It looks good, the heroine and Ye Dingzhi are together, Wuxin still obeys God's will and enters Hanshan Temple, and has a sister. While watching the drama, Ye Dingzhi's death made me cry for a long time. I always felt that he shouldn't have died. He was so good, so of course he had to live. Baili Dongjun was not with Yueyao. Baili Dongjun was extremely sincere. Although Yueyao regretted it and finally stood with Baili Dongjun, she always felt that there must be a sincere and passionate girl who is more suitable for Baili Dongjun. But it is a pity that Baili Dongjun was not given such a girl in the book. This kind of ending is very good, everyone deserves to live well, and a happy ending is the best future.

It's good to watch, the heroine is very strong but it doesn't feel like she's cheating, everyone's ending is wonderful, and the finale is absolutely amazing. Oh my God, I'm really looking forward to the extra Shao Ge. I highly recommend it! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's so well written. This is the best Shaobai fanfic I've ever read on Tomato. It shows the spirit of Jianghu, the logic is smooth, and the writing is humorous. All the plots can be rounded off. I hope I can write another fanfic about Su Muyu in The Legend of the Dark River. I hope the other side can be reached and the Dark River can have a good ending. Come on, support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The heroine has a fun personality and is really good-looking [Sending my heart] Great! ! !

Absolutely beautiful, a strong female character, the female protagonist is the best in terms of strength! I also have a collaboration with Jun Youyun, I like to watch this kind of thing, the author has more updates, I love to watch it! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

It's super good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's not a loss for me to invest in it. It's my favorite Shonen Hakuba fanfic right now. It's fun. I've made up for all the regrets. I haven't finished watching the drama. I'm so excited for Wen Tiantian. I love it so much. I ended up showing my love to my wife. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

It's beautiful! ! ! ! At first, I was a little surprised that she and Ye Dingzhi were CPs. I either couldn't stand each other or I didn't feel they were a good match. But after reading it, the author really wrote it very well! ! ! ! ! There is no white writing style like other fan fiction writing plots. After reading it, I felt that the protagonist is CP! I'm not even excited anymore! ! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! ! !

It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Good luck💪

It's a pity for the TV series that gave Ye Dingzhi a good ending! However, Baili Dongjun is still alone, which is a little regretful, but the author wrote it very well overall and it is very interesting! ! ! !

This novel is really the best written by Shao Bai that I have ever read. Although it is written that the heroine Nangong Jihe redeemed Ye Dingzhi, she does not completely revolve around him. They are two independent individuals. Moreover, the heroine is strong and hard-working, with a humorous personality. The relationship between them is a natural one. There is a little intersection in the comedy, and the fusion of the original In the plot, other plots were also added, and there was no conflict at all. The gentle and jade-like Langya King Xiao Ruofeng finally gave up guarding Apocalypse City and went to the rivers and lakes he yearned for. The Yusheng Demon did not die in the end, and Lei Mengsha also survived. It really made up for the regrets in the TV series! ! The author really writes fluently, with delicate thoughts and rich emotions. The writing is really super beautiful! ! !

It's so beautiful. I'm not familiar with the original work, but it still doesn't stop me from thinking that this is one of the best Shaobai fanfics I've ever seen on Tomato! ! Really, I like the heroine very much anyway. She is confident, free and easy, and has a sharp tongue. She also fulfills many regrets in the original work. All in all, she is very good to watch.

A must-see for those who love Shaobai! ! ! It really makes up for the regret, Lei Er is still alive, the younger brother has become a handsome prince, Ye Dingzhi and the heroine live a happy life, and they have not joined the demon sect! ! ! [Cool][cool]

After watching it, I really enjoyed it. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists was not abrupt at all. The plot connection was smooth, and all the actors were on the line. The writing was very good. Ye Dingzhi did not meet Yi Wenjun. He was still the same young man in bright clothes and angry horses, wielding swords in the rivers and lakes, and aspired to the apocalypse. He finally solved the case for his father, met his best friend, got the same person, had children, and lived a happy life. Baili Dongjun is no longer in pain and self-blame for accidentally killing Yueyao. Lei Mengsha did not die on the way to conquer Nanjue. It's great, it gave them a happy ending┭┮┭┮

Not bad! ! ! I finished reading it in one sitting, it was really good. I opened Shuhuang without any hope at first, but I was quite surprised by the result. The heroine has a strong background. Except for a few that she couldn't beat at the beginning, she is almost the best in the world later on.

I think the writing is quite good, but the story in the north is not that good, and many of the subsequent ones are quite sloppy. I hope the author can work harder and come up with more extras, please [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good. The author will continue to update it. I look forward to it! ! !

It's so beautiful, the writing is smooth, and I'll never tire of it. She is like my magical wife! ! !

Super pretty! I really like the character of the heroine, full of worldly atmosphere!

Very well written, thank you to the author!

It's so good, I love watching Xu Huan, I just need some support (crying) [crying]

It's super beautiful. The writing is very good, the plot is good and the characters are good. I love it!