Red Moon*****

This is the first time I write a long review (please forgive me for the bad writing) This book is overall very good (in my opinion). The protagonist is not invincible and will have some character flaws, which also shortens the distance between him and the readers. The supporting characters may be a little less fleshed out, but they are still flesh and blood. What I like the most is the fighting scenes. They are vivid and real, and the visuals are very strong. They still need to be improved. The transitions are a bit stiff. The above is an evaluation of the writing style. The setting of the plot is novel. It is the first time that I see the protagonist appearing as an "NPC" in a domain. The setting of gods and code names will conflict with other books, but I still have to stick to my own writing style. There are still very few chapters, the protagonist is also a fledgling, and will gradually grow up in the future, and the pace is not fast () Although I have only read it for two or three days, I hope this book will get better and better, and I will continue to follow it.

The writing is okay. I hope to see a new writer break out of his cocoon and become a butterfly. Just like when I first joined the Insects, no one thought he was successful. But he proved himself in the end. I want to see a new person emerge from his cocoon again. Every word is an exploration, every story is a break from the cocoon. As new writers, you touch the edges of the world with the tip of your pen. You don't have to be afraid of the immaturity of the first draft. When doubts strike, please look back at your original intention of writing - the most touching works in the world are often born from perseverance that never gives up. But I found a serious problem. This book has been serialized for a year, but the number of views is very few. Not even rated yet. I think the traffic of most novels relies on each user's recommendation interface. And if the rating is not enough, it will not be recommended at all.

Who can bear to be pointed at a gun when you come up [laughing and crying]

The writing is smooth and the thinking is clear. It's good. I recommend it.

Many people say that when a red moon appears in the sky, many things in the world will mutate. The red moon also appears in this novel, which is quite curious.

A Cthulhu-style book, the description is more like a movie storyboard. It has a strong sense of picture and is good at describing group portraits. Highly recommended. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Not bad! The writing style still needs to be refined!