Original God: Liyue, There Is a Phoenix Coming to the Instrument

Provincial Liu: The stragglers are whitewashed, and those who don't want to see can leave [sneaky laugh]

I would like to remind you that if you like watching emotionless dramas, you can watch it. The protagonist is very selfless and kind, and there is a cp plot in it. If you mind, don't watch it. It's not my cup of tea, but the Nirvana Demon God theme is pretty good. I'll give it a five-star rating.

Hmm... In terms of general rationality, this article is the best I have ever seen. Although the writing style in the early stage is a little less elegant, it can gradually be used to build the author's later achievements. He is a young person in the novel world, has a place in the literary world, and can be ranked among the top three in the literary list. In the opening chapter, the protagonist travels through Genshin Impact, and his self-care identity is obviously a new body, and it is related to the card pool. Although there is a system, the dark operation or excessive enhancement of the system can be seen in the text, which is really non-existent. The characterization goes from shallow to deep, and the background complements it, making it more literary. So when I cook chicken, I rely on my mother's talents, but I use them to control her. Compared with planning, the author is even worse! Compared with the editor, the author can be called a good person! With miHoYo, the value and benefits are even more popular among players. Although I have never played the Honkai Impact series, the author has combined Honkai Impact and Genshin Impact, two games that are both under the miHoYo banner, and it shows that the literary talent is truly extraordinary. The author writes, whether they are self-created or original characters in the game. Each one is as alive as it appears on the paper, moving among the words. Without reading, it is like a frog in a well looking at the moon in the sky! Reading it, one can see the blue sky just like a floating leaf! It can only be said that good products are hard to come by. Literary talent is not a day's work, inspiration is not a moment, articles are not written in a moment, and reputation is not accumulated in a moment. The meaning is different when you first read it, but you will understand it after you read it, and you will know its excellence only after you taste it. Charge into battle, a general is hard to find! Reading and writing is a rare book! Alas! The literary world is in ruins because of the Internet Cleanup! Fortunately! Come back because of your good writing! If I don't read this book, I will regret it for three seasons. If you don't read this book, you will be living a life of misfortune. I hope that you and I can look at this fine article together, enjoy this writing style, and appreciate the literary ink and understand the context. Fang lives up to such good articles and Uncle Fang's excellent works, and Fang does not regret not encountering this chapter.

This book contains many elements of Hua Fu shadow of faun The aspirations of all peoples Ren, who is free from natural disasters The accumulation of five thousand years Human rights are higher than divine rights. The transformation of Liyue is like a review of ancient and modern history in the long river of time, remembering the past and looking forward to the future. Since then the art has become. Praise Junbai! Praise the author! Praise those Chinese sons and daughters who rejuvenate a nation and bring blessings to the world! In the face of money, beauty, and power, the six desires of greed, anger, and ignorance originate from the human heart. What they pursue is a common belief. Fight for it your whole life This is the honor of this world and the backbone of a nation. Praise again. Author

The front is a little boring. It started to look good after the first background replenishment. There are many private settings and I saved a lot of people such as Wuyaksha, Afterlife, and the Demon God of Salt. However, there are also original characters such as Qingce Zhuang Jianxian, and some original characters such as Ziweixing, etc. Fortunately, I watched it for several days in a row, and I can still keep up. I particularly like Bai Mao. I am more interested in the previous stories and each nirvana of the protagonist. There are some plots with climaxes of group portraits. They are okay. They are not embarrassing, but they are not too shocking. There are some logics that are not worth scrutinizing. It is very enjoyable to watch without going into details. Generally speaking, it's okay. I don't like many private books, but this one is okay. It's relatively good-looking. I'm looking forward to the plot direction after Liyue. The anchors are all Beng Tie characters. Currently, the ones with more writing in Chapter 170 are Xing, Xiao Guizi, and Yin Lang. I haven't watched the plot of Beng Tie, so I'm not sure whether the characters are Beng Tie or not. Supplement: In fact, I should say that before the first background completion, I didn't think it looked good. Thinking back carefully, there are still many shortcomings and shortcomings, and there are some plots that I don't like. For example, some executives (young men, ladies, rich people) went to Liyue to do labor camps. I feel that some characters have been a bit dehumanized. Some of the settings are a bit outrageous, such as the artificial demon god of destruction (I don't like this). I'm a little confused about the combat power, but I don't like to use my brain very much, so I still enjoyed watching it.

Good reviews. It is a second creation based on MiHoYo. The plot is reasonable and richer than the original work. It adds thinking about human governance and divine governance and pays tribute to some things in reality. It is great. But if this is a game, the protagonist and the protagonist's special skills are too supermodel.

It adheres to the main line while adding the author's own original work. Although there are already a large number of novels of the same type, judging from the writing style and content of this novel, it is no less than other high-quality novels of the same type. It is a rising star in this type and has great potential [like]. I look forward to the day when this novel reaches one million words ✊✊✊, and I hope it doesn't die prematurely. Come on, the author, code words ٩(๑^o^๑)۶!

Nice! Hope: No CP and try to keep the character's personality without affecting the plot of the book - for example, the self-made character should not have CP? It is recommended to write about the kind of friendship that is not yet full of love. For example, in Zhongli, it is recommended to write about comradeship (personal suggestion, don't criticize) and CP. . Just write, I'll just read it. . The plot has been written smoothly so far. Please write it at your own pace and don't leave it unfinished. Thank you. I still like the author's style. Again, please don't mess up, thank you [Like]

It looks good, the subject matter is interesting, and the characters saved by the author can even be included in the card pool. However, after reading the fanfic, I suddenly understood why there were so many knives in the original plot. The most unforgettable gold content of the tragedy is still rising. The following are my personal feelings about the plot and are not intended as a reference for book reviews. At present, I have seen the battle against Osel. At this time, nothing happened to Wuyaksha or Wuyaksha, and even the karma was completely resolved. But on the contrary, after all, Wuyaksha changed from being stubborn to a cute demon, and Wuyaksha went from dying for the country to becoming a general under the marshal. The author later arranged the plot of Wuyaksha in Layer Rock, but it was still not as touching as the original plot. Just like Mandrill did not suffer so much and no longer guarded the Wangshu Inn alone, but the players naturally did not have such deep sympathy and love. In addition, the final death, the degradation of the Kitchen God, and Ruotuo's loss of reason. These knives themselves shape the cruelty of the Demon God's war and the strength of the Rock God, and the most important point: they are the wear and tear of the Rock God, so there is retirement, and they can reflect the personality charm of the Rock God. I am Zhongli Chu, and my death is indeed unforgettable, and the departure of my friend is also very painful. Seeing the emperor "wanting to buy osmanthus and carry wine with him", I also feel sad for him, but I know very well that if those tragedies are really rewritten one by one, the emperor will not be so attractive to me, and the only thing left is the admiration of a Liyue person. But in this article, there are three demon gods in Liyue, so even this respect has to be taken away from them. But it's normal. The protagonist of this book is Jun Bai, so it's normal to give him the popularity points. He does need the popularity points to rewrite the plot.

To be honest, among the many Genshin Impact fanfics I have seen, they are among the ones with the highest creative level. Both the plot and the characters are well created. I really hope the author can advance the plot beyond Nata.

It's quite interesting. The main character is Phoenix Poke. I really like the nirvana story that supplements the background. The plot is also very rhythmic. This is the second time to fill in the background. First, Jun Bai went through it himself, Tian Tiezui probably told a modified version, Jun Bai told it again himself, and finally Jun Moli's perspective came again. This story has been told four times [face covering]. To be honest, I'm a little tired.

The plot is good, it's the best one I've ever seen among Genshin Impact fans. The characters are well-developed and I can see that the author put his heart into it [shy] Moreover, the plot is also very good! (It's just a bit of a knife) But I want to ask, the author Ni Sanitation Mo Yao Weaver Dao Junbai is alone! God knows how much I wanted to cry when I watched the second brother part! It's a small knife, but each knife will be special when you taste it carefully! Overall, it's a very good book and worth reading! [OK][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Laugh][Laugh]

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. It would be great if it could be linked with Mu Yang and Xinez. I'm following these three books. The brothers pushed me up. Score! ! ! Mu Yang's copy is gone, this one can't be gone anymore

It's very interesting, a little better than Laoyang's book.

Although you made it up, it still made me cry. It looks so good. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

It's super good-looking. It's one of the better-looking ones in Genshin Impact. But it can be adjusted appropriately. Don't make the protagonist too invincible. You can add some knives.

The first few pictures are a bit embarrassing, but when you look at the back and front pictures, they don't matter anymore. They are so beautiful and I love watching them.

I really like this kind of subject matter and the author is also very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard and make our lives no longer boring. Finally, I wish the author good health and a happy National Day!

It looks good, but it feels like many places are allusions and the characters are just changed. It doesn't feel like the writing is like Genshin Impact, nor is it like Tokusatsu, although it won't have any impact on me who dabbles in both.

It's a good read. It's one of the best Kachi novels I've read since I started reading Genshin Impact (in my personal opinion). It not only fits the main plot, but also has a large number of self-created characters and self-created monsters. I can do it all without any other novel, but the brightest point of this book is that the protagonist cannot be omniscient and omnipotent. The protagonist is not invincible and tragedy will happen, and tragedies will also happen. Even the protagonist is the biggest knife. When others write him as a Kachi character and Liyue Xiaodu Xiaodu, his combat power will definitely expand, but the monsters in their writings will not be enhanced. However, this book not only enhances Liyue's combat power, but also has corresponding monsters. Although the overall look is still a bit bloated, other countries also have this kind of bloat, so it will not be bloated. Moreover, the characters created by the author never create just one country, but multiple countries. The welfare of the protagonist in the preview makes us fantasize. And it's really amazing. There are nearly 500 foreshadowings buried in one foreshadowing. For other authors, five to five hundred photos are no longer known to have this foreshadowing, and it's not just sometimes. It can be said that the author is really meticulous. When I clicked on this book, I just thought that this book was too low. There are too many chapters, and I definitely won't be able to finish them. I just read the first few chapters, and then if I feel bad, I will directly join my chapter and read the inside. Unknowingly, I read it for six days. Basically, as soon as I woke up, I turned on my phone and started reading this novel until I went to bed at night.

I like the setting of Phoenix and Nirvana. Finally someone wrote what I was thinking.

It was as if the folds of the cerebral cortex were instantly smoothed and stretched, and there was an instant relaxation, just like walking in the forest of Norway, swimming in the Pacific Ocean of Sanya, feeling like a smart butterfly, sucking the first drop of nectar after the rain, sitting on the grassland with a few dogs, looking at the horizon, and the whole person seemed to have turned into a pool of water. Slowly passing by, slowly calming down, feel the long and warm spring wind passing by Lake Baikal, blowing on your cheeks like a passionate kiss from a young girl. Lie down and let the warm and soft sunshine cover your whole body. Slowly close your eyes, integrate yourself with the whole world, let your senses connect with the long wind and the light, and roam freely between the vast world.

I picked this book up automatically from a brother's bookshelf. It's really cool. This book makes up for the regret I had about not playing those plots in Genshin Impact, and it allowed me to see a lot of stories!

I personally think it is a masterpiece among the original fanfics. The characters, plot settings, and direction are all excellent, and it is super beautiful to watch.

The writing is very good and can be said to be the work that I got into Kachiwen. However, starting from the Xumi chapter, the use of AI is too obvious. It can be seen that the author is just trying to get perfect attendance, but overall it is very good (I hope it can be linked with my novel [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss])

Suddenly I realized that I haven't commented for a long time [face covering] It's very interesting, I've been looking forward to the next one, and it's updated every day. It has several thousand chapters now, and it's one of the few that I've read so many fans that I've been able to stick with. To summarize: 1. In some places, the same background is added too many times. Some people have also mentioned this problem, and the author said that it will be improved. 2. The plot of Fontaine has not been changed too much. The author also said that there is not much to change in the plot of Fontaine, so AI is useful. 3. I don't know why the author always updates it at the underworld time of eleven o'clock or twelve o'clock. 4. It's not interesting enough! Author update soon! Really looking forward to Kingdom at War! [Adoration]

It's really super good. Now that I've seen the plot of Genshin Impact, I wonder if Jun Bai will have a plot, and then I realize it's a fan novel. It's really well written, and you, Brother Bai, also feel particularly safe [blowing kiss]

It looks good, but it needs to be maintained. You have to update it (p′‵.)

So far, it's pretty good, and there's nothing wrong with the plot setting. It's just about drawing a knife. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. How will the protagonist prove his relationship with Iwagami (assassinated) next? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Overall it's pretty good (≧∇≦*). Although the early stage looks a bit like plagiarizing Li Yue Sword Fairy, the plot later on is quite rich and there is no plagiarism from Li Yue Sword Fairy (after all, they are not the same character and it is impossible to copy them all).