The “Wings of the World,” an organization made up of 26 companies, incorporating twelve Associations and answering to the Five Fingers, has changed the storyline in the universe of Honkai: Star Rail.
Note: Some of the technology from Project Moon has been altered, enhanced, and stitched together.
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The works involved include, but are not limited to, Dragon Raja, Red Alert, Warhammer 40,000, Stellaris, Arknights, the Cthulhu Mythos, and the ███ Foundation. I guess you could call it a behind-the-scenes story... maybe?
Content rating: Four stars. After a rough review, the content is quite good, but there is a loophole in the connection of the plot (after telling one story, it quickly jumps to another plot, and some transition words should be added in the middle). The wording is quite simple. Although I don't know much about Bengtie, I can continue reading, which is a good point and attracts the reader's attention. Brainstorming rating: Five stars. After watching it, I can feel that it has a big view of time. I just saw that the concept of star core looks a bit familiar. I guess it collides with my first world view, but it is just a name. The world view is generally different from mine. Writing evaluation: four stars, a sharp review. There are many typos in the novel, which can be felt intuitively. After reading a chapter, I can't remember what kind of story it is about. However, the wording may be due to personal style. I have never been exposed to the type of novels related to this area. Once the basic logic is smooth, the grade will be improved. Overall, the writing is okay, but the plot connection is a bit rough. Eighty percent of the 1,000 words in the first half are dialogue! It would be better to add some modifiers and scattered descriptions appropriately.
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