“Cousin Chongba, just hang in there for two years. Once you're emperor of the Great Ming, your little cousin will be counting on you to live a life of luxury.”
“Ji Nianbei, a dog may not be human, but you really are a crafty bastard. Why'd you keep all these great things from me for so long? You hid them from me for most of my life!”
“Heh, your cousin was just worried you'd be content as a rich landowner. Cousin, think bigger! If I accidentally make the Hongwu Emperor disappear, who am I supposed to enjoy all the good food and drink with?”
“Hmph. You think I believe that? Guards, send this bastard to the frontier to keep the Mongols company!”
“Cousin, don't joke around. Don't forget, you've got a son named Zhu Di...”
I have read Chapter 58 so far, and the overall impression is still good.
1. The author's description of the age value is a bit vague.
2. The incident of the maternal uncle is a bit inconsistent with the incident of the protagonist being robbed.
3. Qiqi and Agu predict that they are direct Mongolian nobles, and they are rescued by the protagonist for the second time. (The noble status is related to them.) They haven't seen anyone for a day, and the county magistrate has made no movement?
4. There are foreshadowings behind the predictions given.
5. The skill point of the protagonist being able to tell fortunes is currently almost none.
The outline direction is correct, but the events are abrupt, the details are rough, and the author's writing needs polishing.
Four stars for encouragement, hand typed comments, "personal views"
Then the direction given to the author is to imitate and derive it first, then create it personally, and finally produce a masterpiece. Imitate first and then eat to become a god.
The protagonist's temperament is appropriate, the plot is compact, and the system application is just right. It can be called a masterpiece of Tomato books.
Five-star recommendation
But most of the book friends who read Tomato are looking for a quick word. It's a bit difficult to get ahead. Come on.
I have read Chapter 58 so far, and the overall impression is still good. 1. The author's description of the age value is a bit vague. 2. The incident of the maternal uncle is a bit inconsistent with the incident of the protagonist being robbed. 3. Qiqi and Agu predict that they are direct Mongolian nobles, and they are rescued by the protagonist for the second time. (The noble status is related to them.) They haven't seen anyone for a day, and the county magistrate has made no movement? 4. There are foreshadowings behind the predictions given. 5. The skill point of the protagonist being able to tell fortunes is currently almost none. The outline direction is correct, but the events are abrupt, the details are rough, and the author's writing needs polishing. Four stars for encouragement, hand typed comments, "personal views" Then the direction given to the author is to imitate and derive it first, then create it personally, and finally produce a masterpiece. Imitate first and then eat to become a god.
The protagonist's temperament is appropriate, the plot is compact, and the system application is just right. It can be called a masterpiece of Tomato books. Five-star recommendation But most of the book friends who read Tomato are looking for a quick word. It's a bit difficult to get ahead. Come on.