Star Rail: Teenager's Tour

Five star support But every time I see the protagonist unable to read the text, I feel weird. Don't underestimate the synesthetic beacon, it can translate text. Why do some people always think that it can only translate languages ​​but not text?

This book is considered to be an upper-middle-class novel among the Beng Tie novels I have read, but I don't know why the rating is a bit low. Although there are some typos, the writing is smooth, which is commendable. The plot is not like some fanfics that follow the main line. You become a master and solve problems for the train along the way. It is highly original. There are characters from Arasaka and some other 3A games. The plot logic is also harmonious. It is more of a daily novel and has some laughs, such as the Masked Fool part. At the same time, the protagonist is not Long Aotian. Although the components of the system appear more in the beginning, which affects the perception, the system appears less frequently after the protagonist obtains the power of hunting. The difficulty is solved solely by the strength and wisdom of the protagonist and his partners. To sum up, this article is cleverly conceived, has many original plots, and is light on systematic writing. At the same time, the author himself is very active, corrects mistakes (bushi), and updates frequently. I also hope that everyone will give 10 points to comment and urge the manuscript. I don't want to interrupt this book. The story must have a beginning and an end, right? The pioneers and the audience who see this also have the unknown Mask and his followers.

Star Iron's rare original text The advantage is that it doesn't follow the main plot like most fandoms. And most of the original plots are good At least there's no setting that makes people think it's too dramatic at first glance. And to be honest, the protagonist embarks on a hunting journey It was a great opportunity to write it. There are really too many fans who don't take the philosophical concept of the Star God in the game seriously. He would lie down on his own every now and then and become an envoy of nothingness. On the contrary, it was a very funny piece of writing. It makes sense to become an Aharantha. It cannot be said that the subsequent original works are without any problems. But at least it's reasonable For example, the Iron Planet part I do feel that the author is a little unsure of what he said. As a result, the writing was a little rushed. It feels much better later on No matter it's the elves' planet Or the Black Tower Space Station? And Diamond Planet feels much better. Finally, I hope that the author will write wonderfully in the future. I like you, the author qwq

Very little, the score is just over 6 points, and Iron Planet is a bit weird. It feels like I want to write big but can't grasp it. The later parts are a bit smoother, but the description of each world (planet) in the later parts is a little less. And, uh, it's not my schoolgirl's shield... I'm quite curious about how Guelfen saw the liberating holy sword during the Immortal Boat (after all, Beng Tie is going to be linked up)... If you want to be invincible, I suggest giving the protagonist the following skills. ∞Black Bean Paste Filling (from Mysterious Heroine x [Alter]) Sea of Life (from Tiamat) … Why is it said to be invincible... It depends on the settings... If it is exactly the same...

There is love and righteousness, there are bottom lines and pursuits, the protagonist is well portrayed, and it lives up to the name of the boy's game. It is not limited to a few main lines of land, but truly expands to explore the universe. It is very good [like][like][like]

The original plot is very innovative and can be said to be eye-catching, but the problem is that it emphasizes this value, but sometimes the combat power is messy, and there is also a very exciting plot. I feel that the author wants to express the connotation behind it, but the writing power is obviously not enough, and sometimes he cannot grasp it.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I am already very picky, but this book is very good, but it is too slow to tie it. I hope it will continue to be the same (just don't have a female protagonist and let the male protagonist be beautiful alone)

The original work is quite good, but the plot of Belloberg that introduces the world's consciousness-correcting power is too poisonous.

It looks good, but the multiple life paths are a bit confusing, but as far as the current hunting life path is concerned, it is still very good. Come on, don't mess up (and update it soon) [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] Does the author have no group? [Grief]

Star Iron fan. Without following the plot, most of them are original: success is original, failure is also original; there are also shortcomings, and the numerical values ​​are inflated. Give it five stars as a web article, and look forward to subsequent updates to OvO The numerical expansion is mainly due to the increase in the protagonist's strength, because it follows the original plot and adds numerical values to the original plot (...) It feels like adding more water to the original plot (there is also a complaint in the book review about Beloberg's original plot of Novice Village, but the protagonist was beaten half to death) I originally wanted to deduct one star because of the numerical expansion, but after beating the abyss with millions of blood, I smiled with relief: it turned out that I was playing Star Iron. I think the author has the talent for numerical planning of Star Iron, it's so scary! It's a joke, but let's control it: now that I've written about Xianzhou Luofu, I have mixed Huanhu and Buli together to increase the value. What should I do when it comes to Pinoconi? () Skip it and don't write it? It feels like if this continues, the Star God of Order will really be resurrected (…) Mingxiao: Shall I fight the Star God? True or false By the way, I want to ask the heroine if she is sure——

It attracted me from the beginning. I like this combination very much. The protagonist also has a good personality, is humble and kind, and I think it is very interesting. More! Author! Although Fate doesn't understand much, I look forward to the explanation and interpretation on the railway.

What can I say, I feel this book is very good. The first two volumes are a bit like a supernatural novel with a Star Iron background, and the background blends in quite well. But when I got to the main plot, it started to get a little boring, but I have to admit, it's a good book [Like][Like][Like]

Come on, if you can't continue writing, just tell us so that we can find out if we've opened a new pit or tell us, I know.

I also give myself a five-star review [shy][shy][shy]

It's very interesting to watch, but I don't know if the protagonist will finally express a feeling similar to that of Shōnen Yu. [Chigua]

It's a good-looking novel about Star Railroad, but it's still an original part so far, and there should be a long way to go before the plot begins😄

Most of them are original stories, which are really great. The world view of Bengtie is large enough to accommodate all kinds of stories. It is best to create more stories based on this foundation.

It's pretty good. I think it's pretty good overall. The characters and personality traits aren't very popular. There doesn't seem to be any bad points at the moment. Come on, don't make me lose my book again.

So touching.

Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews

The writing is good (#^.^#)👍🏻Is there a female protagonist?

It's okay in itself, but I still feel like I want to make up for the regret. If it can have an impact on the plot later, it's okay. You can try to solve the Dragon King before going to pressure Luo No. 6. Under the existing conditions of the divine domain, you should be able to complete the plot modification, or let the Great Guardian see hope and solve it on your own. But with the vow I made before, there shouldn't be anything I can do, but I can try resurrection [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's obviously very good-looking, why is the rating so low?

It's so beautiful. Why are there so many people? Don't worry about it. It's very beautiful. I don't know why there aren't many people. It's better than the many recommendations.

It's been the second time I've done it, so I'll take my time to taste it. You don't have to drink the best tea to drink it, just drink it carefully and you will have a lingering fragrance aftertaste.

Author, please, please be sure to write about Ompharos [I'm about to cry] Come on come on.

An underrated book. Although the writing is a bit immature and the characterization is not rich, it is still interesting.

So far, they are all Star Iron's original plots, which are quite interesting.

The plot of this book feels pretty good, I don't know why it's so low rated. Currently I feel that Chapter 104 is the best written chapter.

The plot is quite good, and the author's attitude is also very good. Anyway, everywhere I looked, the author corrected all the typos he could. [Like]