After an S-Rank Vampire Loli Took a Liking to Me

Well, let's take a look now, but until I read Chapter 4, I felt that this book A masterpiece that combines the shortcomings of Japanese light novels and Chinese novels Anyway, I read the light novels, although they didn't include the blood, fighting, etc. They were just about campus love. However, relatives and friends said that although there may be problems with the connotation and logic, it has more to do with my own writing style and ability. At least this won't happen. The kind that doesn't even talk about logic. Anyway, the logic of this book is very speechless. Anyway, his second brother is very speechless. Anyway, the people in the novels I read are very logical, but you are not. It's a light novel that's very strong in this room, but it doesn't have the same advantages as others. There is also a strong smell of Xiaobaiwen. It's quite difficult to break down, so be it.

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just update it. Just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, brother. Just one more chapter. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter!!! 😭

After reading it for a while, I found it to be okay. The language is humorous and humorous. Overall, it is fluent. However, it still needs polishing. The character portrayal is okay (I think you can refute it if you don't like it). It's just a beginning work. I wish it better and better.

Can the human camp, a master of civil war, win? Did the person who killed all his teammates not sleep for several days? How did he survive? This kind of master of civil war is acceptable and abstract in the human camp. The vampire book is set not to use human weapons, but high-level vampires are intelligent, so why not learn from them. If you become a vampire and lose the memory of being a human, how can you have a personality? If you still have memories, how can you attack your former compatriots?

The characters in the first part of the novel are a little uncomfortable and disgusting, but as the plot unfolds later they become more natural. It starts low and goes high. But the psychological description of the protagonist is a bit unclear and fragmented, and the emotional line is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It is recommended that new readers try to skip reading. It is strongly recommended that the author greatly strengthen the protagonist group. Why is it so difficult to defeat one of them? Vampires are not fools. It will only become more difficult to defeat them if they form a group. And don't create so many female characters on opposite sides. Also don't ask for the Holy Mother. If you need to kill, you must kill. Just write vampires as if they were Japanese

Well, overall it's pretty good, and it's not that uncomfortable to look at.

It's okay, just so so, good luck Like it

Pretty good

Reduce the number of stalks, you can have them, but not too many

[Learned][Has planted grass]