Self-Rescue Guide for Sand Sea Bug

There are several problems in the novel that novice writers have. I have no criticism or malice, just the problems I found as a reader. ① The heroine and Wu Xie communicate very little in the first dozen chapters, and they don't even have basic introductions to each other. They are too focused on Aning. Later, when I read Chapter 33, the heroine still rarely communicates with other people. ② The heroine said that she read the original novel two or three times but didn't know that there were grass ticks on the trees. Sometimes she didn't know what would happen, which was a bit contradictory. ③The heroine sometimes communicates mentally with the system and sometimes speaks directly. In fact, it is a bit confusing. Sometimes it is difficult to distinguish whether the sentences with double quotation marks are psychological words or directly spoken. I think these three questions are quite obvious. The introduction says that the heroine is an abstract and perverted heroine, but the heroine is too submissive. I thought she was the kind of person who goes her own way and goes crazy at times. But in fact, the heroine's thoughts are quite funny. She just doesn't say it out loud, but it's also very good. At least it doesn't collapse and it's not too embarrassing. The plot is also advancing steadily and there are emotions, and there aren't too many temptations and intrigues, which is good. [Note] Come on, author, I will become more proficient in writing as I go to the end [currently working on the manuscript] ps: I saw that the author wrote in the first few chapters "Recommend comments from gentlemen", so I have a small suggestion. Most of the female fans who watch tomb robber videos are girls [Thinking] If you want to express intimacy, it is better to use "grandma" or "wife" instead of "grandma" or "wife". Female words are used by women [Like]

I won't allow anyone to read such a beautiful book! ! ! I'm gonna push push push push push push push push! ! !

It looks great, does the author dare to suddenly update 100 chapters to scare me to death? I really liked the time when the heroine and Wu Xie lived in Wushan. It really seemed like they were already living together in daily life.

This novel is quite good. I really like it. The author writes it very well (=^▽^=)

It's quite abstract and funny, and it's a bit more abstract on the original rather heavy and scary plot. The problem is that after reading the introduction, all the members were ambiguous, but in the early stage, I thought it was the Aning line. . The heroine is fascinated by Aning. The range settings look pretty good, but a bit monotonous. No more moves. Why is this description of going to the tomb so disgusting?

It's very interesting and funny, and has sweet extras from time to time.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

It's very interesting. The protagonist is very abstract. What he talks about in his dreams is quite interesting ❤️ I hope the author can keep updating✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧

It just feels so good-looking

I like you

Wow, the author, I Just Love You, is a cool and beautiful book.

It's pretty good-looking, but the rating is a bit low. But don't look at the low rating, it's actually pretty good-looking.

I beg the author to update more, it's really good. I like it very much.

It's very beautiful, the logic is clear, and the heroine is both subversive and abstract.

It's so well written and I like the heroine's nickname so much😍😍😍😍