Photo by Mang: the Nostalgia of Yellow Roses

The character design is very good and the plot is just right, but there are some small details that I didn't notice. For example, Joseph is a bit OOC. I personally think that a French nobleman will not swear, and Yueyue's character is clearly stated on the official website that he is gentle and noble in the early stage ( I personally prefer to talk about wives 💪) The latter part is more cold-blooded, but after reading this article, I feel that it is a bit contrived. I wrote a lot without taking into account the character's personality. Karl's gloominess and reluctance to talk are not shown, but the paranoia is shown very well. Summary: Personally, I think it's a bit cookie-cutter, like a copycat. I enjoyed reading the first part, but at the end it's a bit formulaic and doesn't take into account the characteristics of the characters. Even though it's a fanfic, you have to pay attention! ⚠️⚠️⚠️ Big suggestions for the author are as follows (not a pointer! Just a suggestion! ⚠️): The first and most important thing is to pay attention to the character! ! Carl's character is a bit crazy (this can be seen from the original work in which he set fire and walked into a fire scene). I recommend the author to read "A House of Dark Lights" to learn his descriptive techniques! (⚠️Orthopedics! If you can't accept it, you can ignore it and find a replacement!) Secondly, there is a bit too much description of the appearance. I know it is a characteristic of Tomato but there is nothing I can do about it. . Just don't always have a lot of sentences filled with gorgeous words, it's a bit cumbersome! ! ⚠️ Finally, I praise the author for his greatness. I am super happy when someone cooks the food for death. The cold circle is like this... (If you don't like the above personal opinions, please don't criticize! I'm just making suggestions! Please point out if I'm wrong! It's hard for the author to write the book. We all hope to see better works! I hope the author will listen to my suggestions and write better articles!) Praise the author [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]! !

How red😋I'm so red😋Oh my god, it's so good to poke me It's cool (will be deleted if it hits the target)😋😋👅👊🏻Teacher update👅I'm crazy👅👅👅Teacher, I am your pet👅👅👅👅 Teacher, I'm starving😭😭😭😭😭😭I want to eat😭😭😭😭

It's so beautiful. Fans of burial photographers must go see it.

Looks good! ! ! ! Rare funeral photos! ! ! 99% Rare! ! ! ! It's just that the author sometimes has less time to update.

Nice! I really like the funeral photography! Love it, love it!

After reading too much about the funeral and thinking about the funeral, it's so sweet. I'm sure you will be the author. Please update soon!

It looks good, it looks good, the author has recently returned. We can pick up the chopsticks and knock on the bowl to ask for food (chew, chew, chew)

Oh my gosh, this is so pretty.

If I don't update, I will starve to death. Author, please save my innocent life👁️👄👁️

It's so beautiful! I've been reading it since last summer vacation, and I came back and read it again this year🌚✨

It's great. It's the first time for Guang Shengjie to eat such a delicious meal. I'm so touched [crying]

Teacher, teacher, hungry for food🤓🙏

Write quickly, I still want to read [smile][smile][smile]

It's so delicious. The few funeral photos on Tomato are so sweet to me.

Come from God, the writing is very fragrant, very fragrant