How Can I Have a Paradise in My Daily Variety Show?

After reading less than a hundred chapters, let me share my thoughts: Advantages: The character creation is considered successful. The protagonist is a slightly cold, Sigma, and man with very clear goals. However, because the author has integrated many characters from anime and games, it does not look like a harem hero but is surrounded by girls. It is a bit awkward and has an unexpected weird charm. In terms of plot, the world view is huge, and it is a hodgepodge of comics including fighting, love, supernatural, behind-the-scenes organizations, unlimited streaming, etc. At present, there may not be many chapters and it is a bit messy, but it is quite interesting. Disadvantages: It's an old problem. There are too many characters. The author wants to write a semi-cool novel with some logic, but except for the protagonist, there are too few other characters, and it will gradually become a tool. It would be much better to reduce the number of characters and only retain the appearance rate of key distinctive or lovable characters, or rationalize the existence value of multiple characters and add some reasonable settings. In terms of plot, many stories are about assembly lines, killing monsters and upgrading, and you have to crush the game. The sense of substitution is not strong, and the infinite flow does not focus on confrontation. Then learn from Ace Evolution novels. The sense of substitution will be stronger if the short stories are well written. The above are personal opinions and suggestions. Overall, the novel is good, but there are many areas for improvement. Players who like comprehensive comics and unlimited streaming are worth reading. My evaluation is currently a good one, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, you will definitely write better and better.

It's very interesting. The protagonist's IQ is on the line throughout, the villain is strong enough, the story is exciting, and the narrative is very tightly linked. Especially the FATE world is wonderfully written, the world integration is interesting and the world view is reasonable. There are still a lot of foreshadowings that have not been recycled. I believe that the plot will be more exciting in the future. Each world is also very beautiful, with a lot of characters, some characters have been admitted into the harem, and there are snow girls in the real world, which is very satisfying. The author has a very good understanding of the world view of Fate and so on. The various abilities and props that appear are also very interesting. The characters and settings are basically the same as the original work. This is very good. Unlike other, other, other (important things are said three times) comprehensive comics, they are covered in the appearance of the characters of the comprehensive comics, but they are fundamentally different on the inside. Chun Chun is just trying to sell the dog's meat, in name only. I look forward to the author continuing to maintain or continue to surpass, and also looking forward to the subsequent world and heroines, come on [like] [like] [like] (you must win the battle with Shen He, continue to describe the details [send heart]) Well, the author, I want to see him travel to Lelouch's world and bring Kallen back [eat melon].

It's a very classic comprehensive manga with the main world. It has a lot of stitches, but it's not too messy. The male protagonist is a normal straight man, and he is very likable in some settings. There are many female protagonists, and it really feels like reading a copy of a fan fiction online. I hope it will be more stable in the back. I personally think it's really good. There are too few articles on Tomato.

Paradise, not bad. It reminds me of a novel about Paradise that I read a few years ago. It's about Tomato. It's the main world of Earth. The male protagonist has been to Fate and also been to a different world starting from scratch. But I forgot what it was called and I can't find it when I search for Paradise. Please [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Now I see 485. This comprehensive comic is really well written. Fate and before were very enjoyable. The five equal parts after fate are a bit poisonous (swapping bodies and becoming a nanny). I skipped through the fifth part plot copy. Now in the pirate dungeon, there is a female assassin who assassinates the protagonist and beats her to death for more than ten chapters. Now it seems that she is going to be released. The writing is quite vicious. Now I want to know if she is really released. All in all, this is a very good comprehensive comic with some poisonous points...

There are quite a lot of daily and combat plots, and both of them are well written (in my opinion) without any sense of jerkiness. The key is that time travel will have an impact on reality, and the protagonist's friends will also look for him. This makes me look forward to the Shura Field in the future. (No breeding in the harem🐎)

So far, I can see that it has a score of 4+ (111). There is no problem with the plot, and the portrayal of the characters is pretty good. The daily content is the best written by the author, and it looks quite heartwarming. In terms of combat, the unit fragments are all well written, but there are problems when they are connected together. The author does not like to foreshadow, and there are breakpoints in the logic of the writing. The reading will not be smooth or the author cannot understand what he wants to express (non-review chapters). It feels like it is in a fog and makes people confused. In terms of props, the author currently uses props to write too frequently, and it feels like a running list. To be honest, so many things are not necessary at all. Only by writing props or skills that are refreshing and memorable will the reader's stickiness be higher (for example, the "Earth Sword" and various skills in Qidian's "Apocalypse Online", I don't know if you have seen it). All in all, there are a lot of bugs, but at present, the more you write, the better, especially daily life. In fact, I think the author can specialize in invincible flow daily life if he wants to write a book, and the results will definitely be better than this one.

It looks good, the character of the protagonist is well developed, and the plot is quite interesting. I just hope that the elements of the stand-in can be added as soon as possible [take a closer look]

This is definitely one of the pinnacle works of Tomato comics. The setting is rigorous, the author is also very creative, and it covers a wide range of worlds (not only anime but also some online articles). The key is that this book does not just follow the plot of a certain series. It has its own world line, which makes people unable to guess the subsequent plot. This is the best thing in my opinion. And basically all the protagonists are included, making it enjoyable to watch.

This book is a comprehensive comic that mixes many themes. It is not confusing and complicated. You need to read it more slowly. The heroine did not hesitate when it was time to accept. The main plot is actually evolution, and I am actually a little doubtful about the fact that I have superpowers but am quite calm in reality, because the black organization is really too big, so I think this is a bit forced. And I would like to remind everyone that this is a free book. The writing is really good. When reading the novel, there are a little unreasonable things. It is not good to be a second generation. Relax, brothers.

This comprehensive comic has been written quite well. Except there was a stinker in the fifth quarter. Everything else is actually okay. If you don't like reading it, you can skip 350 pictures and skip 10 or 20 pictures later.

This is a super interesting manga series. It is the best one I have ever seen that incorporates a daily heroine into a supernatural setting. The setting is complicated and it can be called the king of nesting dolls. This is an advantage but also a disadvantage. The slow update magnifies the pain of catching up. But like a kaleidoscope, this kind of articles must be colorful and dazzling, which fully satisfied my appetite for reading this kind of subject matter on Tomato. The setting shows that the author is full of sincerity, the fashion value is high, and the people he leads are neither dramatic nor dull. Come on, author!

I have read more than 700 chapters. I can say that the overall ideas, ideas, and jokes are very good. It can be regarded as a good comprehensive comic. But there are also shortcomings. For example, the original numerical system is not adapted to the current realm system, and the combat power does not improve but suppresses the realm. I also hope that when the author writes the article, he will not make the settings embarrassingly long. It is true that many settings are quite awesome, but this is a novel and not an explanatory text.

It's a very good comprehensive comic with many elements. The protagonist feels semi-invincible. So far, I feel that the plot is progressing smoothly. When it comes to the fate world, it may be due to the huge world view and the author's preference for fate. It feels a bit delayed to explain this part of fate. It should be a mess. The plot of Shura Field is also okay. Overall, it's a comprehensive comic novel worth reading.

This is the first time I read a book with this theme. I didn't expect it to be so good. There are many familiar anime characters in the book. I used to often fantasize about how great it would be if these anime characters were all together.

Although some areas may be considered minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. It should be considered one of the better ones among the unlimited streaming comics.

Various animations are combined together. The author's imagination is really big and the sense of immersion is very strong. I couldn't stop watching the whole movie and couldn't stop. There are so many familiar anime characters.

Comprehensive comic flow ➕ player flow, there is no problem, the treatment of each character is reasonable. I'm just a little dissatisfied with the fact that the main character's name is Xu Lun, but he doesn't have a five-pointed star on his shoulder >_<. Then there are those things on the introduction, now there is none.

As a unique literary form, fan fiction is deeply loved by fans of two-dimensional culture. Such works are often re-created based on the world view, character settings and plot background of the original animation work.

Not bad, not bad. As far as it goes, the integration of various animations can be done. I hope the protagonist can have a stand-in. This way I feel Ola Ola Ola. It's cool.

Secondly, the setting is good. The main reason is that the author has incorporated elements of extraordinary adventure while ensuring that the original character image does not collapse. It is very good (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧very innovative, with a sense of contrast and a certain degree of logical rationality. Summary: Update quickly

Yes, at least it has its own free thinking, and it's not so brainless. The plot advances at its own pace, and the characters are appropriately described. You can take a look. Furthermore, the things I drew from were based on the original text and I gave my own ideas to it. Generally speaking, it's okay.

In the comprehensive harem manga, the relationship between the heroine is handled more reasonably, and she is not just a doll. The logic is clear and not too poisonous. It should be attacked and killed. It's not really a battle of wits, I know the plot well and I can play tricks. The reason for the low rating is that I was banned for a period of time after being reported for pornography. The small flaw is that there is no control when switching from the attribute system to the realm system. It feels like the attributes you cheated on in the early stage are blocked and you need to level up again. The main fun part is knowing the advantages of the plot to counterattack, pretending to be cool, accepting plot girls and interacting with the plot, etc...

The content is good, and the worldview is well written. There is just a bit too much text in the description of skills. It is recommended that the author simplify the description of skills as much as possible and put more words into the interaction between characters and the advancement of the plot.

Overall, it looks okay, but there are a few poorly written parts in between. I personally suggest that you can just skip the chapters mentioned in the comment section if you are not interested. First of all, I hope the author can adjust the proportion of daily life and combat, especially in the part of the Holy Grail War where battles and daily chaos are mixed together. There are obviously a lot of uncertain dangers, but in the end, I wrote a lot of daily life, although I understand that it is to gain favor. In addition, I hope the author can control the length of each copy and not make it too long. One Piece World has written more than 400 chapters so far and has not yet finished, which is enough to open a dedicated volume. Regarding the strength of the protagonist, the protagonist is currently at level 5 and has not yet changed professions. However, he can fight against the four realms with his skills and talents. Is it analogous to cultivating an immortal but has not yet established a foundation to fight against the Nascent Soul? I think I can transfer this copy directly once I finish it, and it should be better by then.

Awesome! ! ! , It is indeed very comprehensive. The author is a bit awesome [Like][Like][Like] The author has written about half of the total chapters in this Holy Grail War world. I feel like I could write two hundred chapters on the Holy Grail War alone.

The book is very good, but the plot is a bit too long, and updates are too slow. I strongly urge five updates a day. It took more than 800 pages to write for two years and only four worlds. Excluding the worlds that are divided into five equal parts, One Piece's Marvel has many chapters and only four plot worlds, but the scale is increasing. The protagonist has more than 600 chapters. None of them have entered the path, because it was changed later, so it changed from adding points to level to realm, but it is not too much. After all, most of the equipment and skills are sealed and some are unlocked. Then the equipment and skills can only be used with defects. Poison 2, about the five equal divisions, some people can't accept that the adoptive father has murderous intentions. All we can say is that someone took two of the five cabbages, so that they were forced to become one. The plan that lasted more than ten years was suddenly destroyed by a person who counter-prophesized. Isn't such a strong person angry? Later, I gave a listener's talent stone. Talents are very precious. I hope that under the care of the protagonist, the protagonist will directly gain territory in that world and have a direct way to jump to the five realms. Later, I will give him top-level equipment. He has murderous intentions, but not action. Then I read more than 600 chapters. I hope you can update soon. I looked at the catalog with more than 800 chapters and it's still One Piece. It's too watery. Weekly updates have been updated for half a month. There won't be monthly updates to Taijian in the future. The latest chapter is just level 5 and I became the captain.

This book can be said to be a masterpiece of comprehensive daily and infinite comics. It is rare to see such a comprehensive and well-written work. I haven't read some of the parts written by the author and still think it is very good. Except for the fate part, which is purely personal, I don't like reading it. The first chapters may be a bit casual. Later, it is obvious that the author starts to fill in the details of the world view and the overall route. It is still a very grand world view. It feels like a semi-simple article, but it doesn't have too many setbacks. It looks good. , The setting of Ninth World Yuanlong is very good, and various fusions of the same type, including the main world, are also very good, and the acquisition of girls is also very decisive. Basically, it is helpful to improve oneself, etc. It is not a brainless acquisition. I have also read the negative reviews and can only say that I haven't finished it. I haven't seen the beginning of the story, or the random characters have only a few chapters of description, and they start to lick the left brain and attack the right brain. I'm not very good at expressing myself. I can only tell whether it's good or not until you take a look [ Eat Melon ]

It's pretty good, I watched it for a long time To be honest, the author shouldn't let readers vote to determine the length of the plot. This is the last place that should happen. The most important thing is to look at the author's overall layout. Continue to wait and see behind

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