Anime Crossover: Evolution Paradise

After reading less than a hundred chapters, let me share my thoughts: Advantages: The character creation is considered successful. The protagonist is a slightly cold, Sigma, and man with very clear goals. However, because the author has integrated many characters from anime and games, it does not look like a harem hero but is surrounded by girls. It is a bit awkward and has an unexpected weird charm. In terms of plot, the world view is huge, and it is a hodgepodge of comics including fighting, love, supernatural, behind-the-scenes organizations, unlimited streaming, etc. At present, there may not be many chapters and it is a bit messy, but it is quite interesting. Disadvantages: It's an old problem. There are too many characters. The author wants to write a semi-cool novel with some logic, but except for the protagonist, there are too few other characters, and it will gradually become a tool. It would be much better to reduce the number of characters and only retain the appearance rate of key distinctive or lovable characters, or rationalize the existence value of multiple characters and add some reasonable settings. In terms of plot, many stories are about assembly lines, killing monsters and upgrading, and you have to crush the game. The sense of substitution is not strong, and the infinite flow does not focus on confrontation. Then learn from Ace Evolution novels. The sense of substitution will be stronger if the short stories are well written. The above are personal opinions and suggestions. Overall, the novel is good, but there are many areas for improvement. Players who like comprehensive comics and unlimited streaming are worth reading. My evaluation is currently a good one, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, you will definitely write better and better.

I stitched a lot of daily stories into it, and the stitching was pretty good, but a lot of the plots were just water for the sake of water, which made it a bit uncomfortable. Then there's the fifth section, which is really uncomfortable to watch. The avatar is still awakening and goes berserk and uses its abilities uncontrollably. Bobo was disabled and old at first, and his stepfather came to the door and wanted to kill the protagonist at first. Later, the protagonist joined in as a nanny and asked his soul to bring the copy. He would do anything for the sake of water. Thinking about it, the relationship between the protagonist and the five sisters is not that good. It is outrageous to think that the protagonist's fault was caused by someone's own involvement. 🤦

It's very interesting. The protagonist's IQ is on the line throughout, the villain is strong enough, the story is exciting, and the narrative is very tightly linked. Especially the FATE world is wonderfully written, the world integration is interesting and the world view is reasonable. There are still a lot of foreshadowings that have not been recycled. I believe that the plot will be more exciting in the future. Each world is also very beautiful, with a lot of characters, some characters have been admitted into the harem, and there are snow girls in the real world, which is very satisfying. The author has a very good understanding of the world view of Fate and so on. The various abilities and props that appear are also very interesting. The characters and settings are basically the same as the original work. This is very good. Unlike other, other, other (important things are said three times) comprehensive comics, they are covered in the appearance of the characters of the comprehensive comics, but they are fundamentally different on the inside. Chun Chun is just trying to sell the dog's meat, in name only. I look forward to the author continuing to maintain or continue to surpass, and also looking forward to the subsequent world and heroines, come on 👍 👍 👍 (you must win the battle with Shen He, continue to describe the details 💕) Well, the author, I want to see him travel to Lelouch's world and bring Kallen back 🍉.

It's a very classic comprehensive manga with the main world. It has a lot of stitches, but it's not too messy. The male protagonist is a normal straight man, and he is very likable in some settings. There are many female protagonists, and it really feels like reading a copy of a fan fiction online. I hope it will be more stable in the back. I personally think it's really good. There are too few articles on Tomato.

Now I see 485. This comprehensive comic is really well written. Fate and before were very enjoyable. The five equal parts after fate are a bit poisonous (swapping bodies and becoming a nanny). I skipped through the fifth part plot copy. Now in the pirate dungeon, there is a female assassin who assassinates the protagonist and beats her to death for more than ten chapters. Now it seems that she is going to be released. The writing is quite vicious. Now I want to know if she is really released. All in all, this is a very good comprehensive comic with some poisonous points...

This is a super interesting manga series. It is the best one I have ever seen that incorporates a daily heroine into a supernatural setting. The setting is complicated and it can be called the king of nesting dolls. This is an advantage but also a disadvantage. The slow update magnifies the pain of catching up. But like a kaleidoscope, this kind of articles must be colorful and dazzling, which fully satisfied my appetite for reading this kind of subject matter on Tomato. The setting shows that the author is full of sincerity, the fashion value is high, and the people he leads are neither dramatic nor dull. Come on, author!

Paradise, not bad. It reminds me of a novel about Paradise that I read a few years ago. It's about Tomato. It's the main world of Earth. The male protagonist has been to Fate and also been to a different world starting from scratch. But I forgot what it was called and I can't find it when I search for Paradise. Please [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

So far, I can see that it has a score of 4+ (111). There is no problem with the plot, and the portrayal of the characters is pretty good. The daily content is the best written by the author, and it looks quite heartwarming. In terms of combat, the unit fragments are all well written, but there are problems when they are connected together. The author does not like to foreshadow, and there are breakpoints in the logic of the writing. The reading will not be smooth or the author cannot understand what he wants to express (non-review chapters). It feels like it is in a fog and makes people confused. In terms of props, the author currently uses props to write too frequently, and it feels like a running list. To be honest, so many things are not necessary at all. Only by writing props or skills that are refreshing and memorable will the reader's stickiness be higher (for example, the "Earth Sword" and various skills in Qidian's "Apocalypse Online", I don't know if you have seen it). All in all, there are a lot of bugs, but at present, the more you write, the better, especially daily life. In fact, I think the author can specialize in invincible flow daily life if he wants to write a book, and the results will definitely be better than this one.

This is definitely one of the pinnacle works of Tomato comics. The setting is rigorous, the author is also very creative, and it covers a wide range of worlds (not only anime but also some online articles). The key is that this book does not just follow the plot of a certain series. It has its own world line, which makes people unable to guess the subsequent plot. This is the best thing in my opinion. And basically all the protagonists are included, making it enjoyable to watch.

There are quite a lot of daily and combat plots, and both of them are well written (in my opinion) without any sense of jerkiness. The key is that time travel will have an impact on reality, and the protagonist's friends will also look for him. This makes me look forward to the Shura Field in the future. (No breeding in the harem🐎)