Ding Town**

I like it very much, thank you for the author's writing

The writing is okay. It's just that the protagonist isn't cruel enough. Try to see if you can reach the mortal world. I started writing about ascending to the upper world, then ascending to immortality, and then continuing to ascend to godhood. Make the protagonist more murderous and decisive. Make it one. Kill the demon king with love and justice. Write him as a character who is afraid of ghosts when he sees others. The protagonist of the weak fight integrates shock, elixir, and talismans, allowing the protagonist to transcend the three realms.

It would be better to watch with more thrills and excitement

Article: The characters are concise and clear, not afraid of hardships, dare to fight but have a good attitude.

Write clearly and read the rhetoric