Collapse of Iron**********

It's okay, the protagonist is just a powerful person and has no divinity. There is also the expected indifference towards enemies, and the closeness to kind people can also be reflected, which is quite normal. I just feel like what I wrote in the front is different from what I wrote in the back. It would be nice if the front could be written like the back.

Big cheers for the author, the new book will definitely be better. But if you are writing a fanfic, why? Go and write weird [smile][smile]

It's very well written. It's the first time I've seen a book like this. The author's writing style is good and the writing is very good. Come on! !

Jizi has a weird timeline and is much younger than Jingyuan

Everything else is fine, except for the timeline issue, but since the author said so, forget it, it's still pretty good. [Please update] If it weren't for the writing, I would have given it a six-star review. After all, this timeline is too six-star [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's very good. The plot is not cliched. The only drawback is that the timeline is a bit cut, which is equivalent to a small flaw. Putting this aside, I think it is a very good novel. Come on, kick me when you get angry [got it]

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A very good novel. If it is updated continuously, it will be the next nine-point novel.

Okay, well written, good luck to the author! This looks so good! !

Come on, come on, come on [Love]

The protagonist is a human being, not a god

Understand Hanabi better [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The concept of destiny has been occupied by weekends and weekends. I wonder if you will eat him or he will eat you after you become a god?

Very good, I hope I can stick to it

In fact, why would a star god of destiny fall in love with someone? Don't understand.