A Childhood Sweetheart, but a Heartthrob!

On the surface, it looks like a novel with a female protagonist and a female protagonist, but I haven't seen the inside yet "because I haven't read too much." The main reason for this book review is that I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the plot where the female protagonist and the second male protagonist appeared. In a plot where the female protagonist is happy, does the appearance of the male protagonist have to be that the heroine is in danger and a hero comes to save her? They can have a more natural encounter, such as meeting at the heroine's grandmother's house. "Also, the heroine's dress and temperament should be more eye-catching and noble. Generally speaking, kidnappers should avoid this kind of behavior. Unless they want to kidnap the heroine for ransom, otherwise it should be more troublesome to kidnap such a girl. It may also be because the heroine is not a native of the country.

If you like big heroines, please stay away. This book feels like spoiled wife literature, abstract.

Oh my, really, every couple is sweet, who knows, but every time I see it, my heart feels sour. If there were less misunderstandings, more understanding, and more courage, could the heroine have a 1v1 line with them? I am a heartthrob and don't like to read 1v1 because I think there will be regrets, but this novel is not 1v1 and I will regret it..., The heroine baby The characters are very lovable. Really, I would shed tears when watching some plots. My tears are really low. When I see the heroine getting along with each of them, I will sigh, "This is love! (Sichuan dialect)." I hope that the process will be np and the ending will be a 1v1 line for each of them, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable [I will cry]

Give yourself an evaluation. First of all, I would like to thank you for your positive reviews. Thank you for your affirmation. I will work hard to continue updating (I love you). Next I would like to share some of my thoughts on negative reviews. In fact, I haven't been writing books for too long. I used to write books on a standalone machine and write down my favorite jokes. So I admit that I may not be that proficient in my writing craft right now. Again, I would like to thank everyone for pointing out the logical bugs in my book. I will reflect on the shortcomings and strive to do better next time. But one thing I hope everyone will not doubt is that my love for the heroine is unquestionable. She is my child, my treasure, the most cherished work that I have devoted my efforts to, and my golden branch. If there is any, I will correct it, if not, I will encourage you. Thank you all for watching. I hope I can bring you better works next time and contribute my strength to originality. Keep writing, orange and grapefruit seeds As for infantilization, I actually don't want to defend myself. It's really what I say: in the grandmother chapter, I assumed the identity of Zhizhi's grandmother. From my perspective, I put on a little filter to see her. The last point is that I personally am currently not very good at writing about machinations, business wars, and slaps in the face, so in many places I may have sacrificed logic to describe more of the emotional pull that I am better at. In short, it will continue to improve, and everyone is welcome to invest.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Now I am very optimistic about Young Master Chi! ! ! ! ! Can you replace the bamboo horse of one of the male protagonists with Song xx? (The heroine Zhu Ma's former friends, I feel that he is better than Zhu Ma!!!) Or you can change it to Jiang Senior [Shy] Zhu Ma should chase his wife in the crematorium, but he can't! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very beautiful. The heroine is very sober and has a good family background. She is not wronged and can get out in time. Although the original male protagonist cannot let go of the female protagonist, he has barriers to emotional cognition. If the female protagonist does not withdraw, there is a high probability that the things in the dream will be repeated. After all, the original male protagonist does not realize that he likes the female protagonist. This is very good. Although Xiao Min likes the female protagonist. The main character, but he is very awkward and cannot make the heroine who has just ended her love for Xiao Xie (the original male protagonist) feel a sense of security. There is also a Xiao Xie brother. Hehe, the scene where the brothers are fighting is also very interesting. Now Xiao Chi, Charmander is so cute. He expresses his feelings straightforwardly and passionately. It is really good. The sense of security is enough. Let's see how the plot develops [Cool]

After reading it, I found that there are still some shortcomings, which I can tolerate a little more. Overall, the writing is pretty good. Well, to be honest, there are some shortcomings that I still can't accept.

In terms of content, it would probably be rated ③-④ stars, because it felt like it ended a bit abruptly. Although everything that needed to be explained was explained, it was just a bit uninspiring. And it feels like the heroine doesn't talk much (thinking) ! ! ! But! ! ! The characterization is very good (especially) the heroine! ! ! Jin Xiaoguai! You are a pampered but very upright little girl! I won't look for a mistress when I'm in love. "If I don't like him, then I'm off course and I'll change my route." There will be no internal friction but it will not hurt other people's babies either! As for the male protagonist, (thinking about it) I jumped into watching it, but I preferred the Nian Shang group, mainly because the ex-husband is delicious but be, Charmander is silly and sweet but has a good life, not as good as the two Nian Shang's dank characters. Good writing! There is no sense of a running account, and there are no embarrassing words such as "sweating dripping with fragrance". It is very normal language! There are no females, males are everywhere, seconds! In addition to love, there is family and friendship!

It must be NPC. If it develops to the point where there is no CP or 1v1, I will sue the central government! ! ! Our Zhizhi is worthy of everyone's love. She doesn't need to struggle with choices in relationships. She is the best little girl.

I feel that none of the male characters appearing so far have any interesting points, and the female protagonist is also super cute. I have accepted all my expectations. It's just a few [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Super awesome! Although the author's description of some of the heroine's actions in the early stage has some logical problems, overall, the heroine's baby is super cuteớ ₃ờ! Several other male protagonists are also described without poking fun at it. Hehe, I just like to watch Brother Strong break his guard and cry. I just like that the female protagonist's baby can be surrounded by everyone's love and grow into what I like in love!

At first, I couldn't understand why such a beautiful book had such a low rating. It wasn't until I read the last chapter that I hurriedly told the real truth of the story. But before that, it was really well written. I hope to have the opportunity to see the author's extra chapters again, instead of seeing the dead ex-husband come back to me in my dream/ The simple explanation of marrying my brother first and then falling in love/reuniting with Chi Pojing/Min pursuit is incomplete. The whole story is incomplete. Without any of their stories, this book is not perfect. Since the previous writing is not bad, I reluctantly gave it four stars. I really hope the author has time to fill in the extra chapters.

I feel like I was fooled into it by the introduction. . I cried so much [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I thought it was a sweet article, what's going on [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Don't die ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Author I hate you! ! Half of the pillow was wet from crying. I really couldn't see the knife. How could it end like this? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I was tricked into killing by the introduction.

It's very good. The heroine has a very straightforward personality. If you like it, you will like it. If you don't like it, you won't like it. A heroine with this kind of character can see that the human breast glands are very smooth! I can't help but push for an update, it's too little, not enough to watch ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [shy][shy][shy][shy]

I admit that what I said earlier was a bit loud. Now I ask Xiao Xie Zhuma to become a male ghost 1 ha If you are dead, you can do whatever you want. You are already crazy anyway. Wouldn't it be better if you died? [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] It's just a sweetheart who used to be hard-spoken and soft-hearted. He really keeps losing his shares. If he finds another way and really dies and becomes a male ghost, I can vote for him. Currently, some of the people who have a higher favorable opinion are mostly male partners. Song Ruichu, Jiang He, and Wen Luo wanted to be promoted to regular jobs mainly because they wanted Song to be promoted to regular employees. As for Jiang, he is a bit like the youthful version of Zhu Ma. I think it is easy to cause Zhi Zhi to become soft-hearted. I also like Xiaofang and Daxie very much. I feel so good about my current boyfriend. I have a happy family, but when I met Zhizhi, who is as charming as Fujiang, I actually became violently jealous. I will guide you. Now I finally understand why even though I was not optimistic about Zhu Ma in the early stage, now I am more optimistic about Zhu Ma becoming the male protagonist. It seems that pure love is not very deep. This kind of love-hate intertwining and memories from time to time make this kind of emotion more impressive. Although I don't say I prefer this kind, I still prefer the stickiness of my current boyfriend.

It's so good to read, I was so happy when I read it, but suddenly it's gone, sad [crying] [crying] Jin Zhiyu is so cute, she has such a good character, I really like this heroine design, it's so good. It's rare to find a book that suits my taste on Tomato, it's so new, there are so few chapters, I cried [crying] [crying]

This story is super well written [Blowing Kiss] The plot twists and turns, every emotional line is very real [Blowing Kiss] The writing is very good [Shy] Touching and moving, but I have always supported the golden branches and jade leaves [Laughing] The world is too bad. But, fortunately, I have you. If the price of gaining power, money, and status is to make you lose yourself in pain, then I will destroy it all, even if you fall into the abyss, as long as you can still be yourself. My friends, my playmates, my family —and my only true love.

It's really, really beautiful. . . I don't know what words to use to express how I feel at this moment. After reading this novel, I finally understood why I felt something was wrong when I read other novels in the past. Growing up together as childhood sweethearts, they will not maliciously hurt or slander the partners they grew up with because of some evil deed from the sky. Maybe childhood sweethearts and sweethearts do not necessarily have to fall in love with each other, but they will not hurt each other.

This is a normal female video, okay? . The female protagonist baby will always be the dominant one in the relationship, dare to love and hate, and will not lose herself for the male protagonist and male partner. I especially like the female protagonist🤲🏻🤲🏻

I was deceived by the introduction hahahahahaha. The author has not finished updating the unfinished extras. I thought it was 1V4, but the final male protagonist was Xie Zhiye, and he was her savior. "If the price of gaining power, money, and status is for you to be lost in pain, then even if you fall into the abyss, I will destroy it all, as long as you can still be yourself. For you, I will destroy this wrong world." Jin Zhiyu, you will get everything you want after I die. This is my last wish." The early stage was not good for him, and it may have been paced by the barrage. After seeing the ending and the extra narrative, I Jin Zhiyuye, this world is a huge liberation literature. Involving amnesia, micro-heartthrobs, dog training, love concepts, dare to love and dare to hate, barrage (Jinzhiyu), Childhood sweethearts, brothers at each other's throats, car accidents, early death in the white moonlight, falling into a dream (Tse Chi Yeh), Yandere, pretending to be dormant, knowing ③ when ③, fake brothers and sisters, marriage first, love later, contract marriage (Xie Yulan), Rivals, Clingy Milk Dog, Humble Sensitivity, Love Brain, Innocence Fire Dragon, Shura Field, Love Diary (Chi Kyung Yue), crush, inconsistency, face-changing master, wife-chasing crematorium (Min Jinyang). Oh, by the way, these four are somewhat icy. The outspoken Xiao A is quite interesting, the strong woman Xie Ma (playing with men × no dignity), the tolerant Jin family, the friendly roommates, the competitive and fierce Song, the old enemy turned into a best friend... There are still many holes that have not been filled, such as the conflict between Min Jinyang and the senior, Xie Zhiye's college life and car accident surgery, Xie Yulan's car accident plan...

20240910 Don't be like this, the portrayal of the pampered lady is so strange. When drawn as a cartoon, some details can be ignored without thinking, but when written into words, it is difficult to ignore.

I'm the chosen one, the heartthrob Wen Shengti The only drawback is that it is short A little more! Love watching! Just watch it without thinking, don't think too much, it doesn't matter if you can't stand scrutiny, just be happy! ! This article does not boast that I have a very logical mind. I am just a charming guy. I don't care about him and just read it! I hope the author will post more comments, and I want to read the forum comments.

It's really good to watch. It's great for a lover like me who chases his wife in the crematorium but can't catch her. Especially the scene where the heroine pokes the sweetheart's heart is so enjoyable to watch. I don't like the open-minded relationship between the two after being abused, but I like the heroine's ruthless revenge and going back to make him suffer.

Super beautifully written! ! ! The author is very good at writing! I really like Zhizhi, I feel like she is really a beautiful baby who knows how to love people, but she is hot on the outside and cold on the inside. She loves herself the most! This is the kind of text our female protagonist should read [to give her heart]! Among the male protagonists, Charmander is my favorite at the moment. How about we not break up and let the other guys be mistresses [laughing]... I like it very much! It's just too short, and the ending is so quick. I feel like the extra episode will have the highlight of Xiong Jing Shura Field, which I love to watch. I'm looking forward to it!

The author writes very well! ! The characters are also well created! Zhizhi is a good baby with a clear distinction between love and hate, and he is growing up slowly.

Why is the rating so low? I really like the character of the heroine who never gets into trouble There is a bit of a bad srds

Well, I personally think it's quite interesting, but there are very few chapters. Not enough to watch. Secondly, I think many of the boys in it are pretty good. Can the heroine be with all these boys, or is there a side story? It can make up for our regret, which is asking the heroine which boy she is with, and there is an extra scene with another boy. I feel that it is a good way to make up for my unhappiness. Then I have a bit of a contradiction, that is, the boys here all like the heroine, but they don't insist on confessing to the heroine. Anyway, there are various reasons, including some personality reasons, and some psychological reasons, that lead to retreat. I personally hope that these boys will change, face the heroine's feelings directly, and confess to the heroine. If they always have this idea in their hearts, I personally don't like it. Although I understand it, I don't really like it.

Starting from the following extras, you will find that the entire article is about Xie and Jin's redemption! (っ╥╯╰╥C)

So far it looks pretty good, I hope all the female leads will be accepted, because I like all these guys😍

It looks good. I love watching it. The character of this arrogant young lady is so interesting. I just don't like the character of Little Ye Zi very much. I hope they can make peace with each other.