I Adopted a Child, but Somehow Raised Them All Wrong

The writing is good. The author must be a novice writer. Long paragraphs often appear in online articles, which affects the perception. However, as I become more proficient later on, this situation rarely occurs. The psychological portrayal of the two heroines is also great. I look forward to the following chapters.

The love of growth is sweet and cruel. Yun's brave pursuit illuminates An's heart and becomes the little sun in her heart. She recognizes her persistence and runs towards a new life. It also tells that good friendship is more valuable than love. The emotional line is delicate, and the two are strong in the later stage. Highly recommended!!!

Overall, this book is excellent. It may be that the character setting touches on the quirks and experiences of the group. The descriptions that are relatively close to reality are very accurate. The sugary parts in the back are also okay. After all, there is a big difference between having a real story to record and the beauty imagined to make up for regrets. Therefore, the rest of the book is relatively formulaic. However, compared with other wild and mindless books on the same platform, it is really excellent. In the early stage, in order to set up the beautiful, strong and miserable character of the service, it was still a little uncomfortable, but it did not exaggerate the plight of women too much. It was acceptable. After all, it was not amplified, it was just concentrated on one person... The sweetness behind it, emmm, compared to the realistic style of the previous article, it is too fantasy, and it becomes more and more like that The feeling of a fairy tale is the feeling of "the prince and the princess live happily together forever in the end". The advantage is that it is hasty, but it depicts the obstacles that must be solved that can be imagined, so as long as there are no accidents, it is equivalent to falling in love forever and dying happily. The disadvantage is that it is really too fantasy and too idealistic. A Chinese teacher once said something that struck a chord in my heart. The reason why your article is so highly rated is because you have experienced it, observed it carefully, and thought about it. Even without gorgeous words, those straightforward comments can lead readers into your story, because you are just the recorder, and it is your hand through which the story touches people's hearts. Those articles that are not so good are just words and sentences that you think you think you want. Maybe a good author can make readers feel that this is all true~ instead of you writing the article, the author has done it in the previous one hundred chapters. The author should be clear when reading the paragraphs and comments. I hope the author can reach this state, come on!

I read it all in one go. To be honest, I didn't read this type of book before. I read one this year, but I didn't think it was as well written. It was particularly immersive. I just wanted the person I've been in love with for seventeen years to be me. In fact, love has nothing to do with gender. It feels like being able to truly feel such hot love, and even express love, proves that you cannot stop loving her through free will. Even if you escape for so many years, you finally defeat free will, and in the end you can only choose what you love. In fact, there is no reason to love someone. I longed to meet someone who could love me like the characters in the book. It's a big hit, it's really good-looking.

Quite nice to look at. Compared with those articles about the entertainment industry, Ba Zong's articles are much more real. The down-to-earth little life is addictive The more you watch, the more addictive you become. Where to find people like Zuo An. Record it, three brushes

Nice! It is particularly life-like. Compared with many travel books and imaginary worlds, this kind of more realistic and real world attracts me more. Then there is the age difference love that I also like very much, and the slightly contrasting image of Zuo An's confident workplace woman and gentle sister is also very attractive to me... In short, I really like this novel! And I also want to see the author write this type of novel in a big way. Finally, I feel that the author really likes to respond to readers' comments seriously. Sometimes it feels so cute hhhhhhhhh. Anyway, I must give high marks 💕💕💕

The writing style is steady, ordinary yet elegant, the characters are vivid and vivid, and the true emotions are revealed, which can calm the impetuous mood. It's good 👍

Okay, I can't understand it a little bit at the beginning, but the back part is very readable and up to date, especially some parts are very realistic. It's a great book. The author is also very good. I even asked some people to find pictures in the comment area.

It feels like they are really close to each other, two drowning souls are redeeming each other and supporting each other, and I feel that the love between the two is a bit paranoid. Maybe it is to make up for the regrets of youth and cure the misfortune of childhood??! Sorry, there's something wrong with my understanding. Yun Shu doesn't have any childhood problems, only misfortune in youth??

A very good novel. The obsession in the protagonist's heart is like fire, which he holds back and does not dare to erupt. The emotions are both cruel and sweet. I hope the ending leaves us with the hook of getting together again and relieving the difficulties in our hearts.