She Is Too Weak to Take Care of Herself

After watching the first plane, I can tell that the author is a novice ☑Immersion can also write about a scheming female protagonist, but it is obvious that the author did not write it out. It feels like the female protagonist is not seductive. After doing it, the male protagonist starts to analyze his feelings inexplicably. The plot and sentences are also very long-winded. The point is that there are always deletions in the article (🍅you know). My suggestion is that if the author deletes it, delete it, but don't point it out directly in the article, because it will affect the mood of reading the article. You can just write it in a paragraph and tell everyone. Although Fan Q is not allowed to drive big cars, there is no problem if it is written in a cryptic way, and after deleting it, the author felt that he did not add a few sentences at all. It looks like it was broken [grievance] ps: There are many typos and missing words in the article ☑Oh my God, it's so long-winded and a bit confusing. Some of the plots are simply unnecessary. I originally wanted to finish the first plane, but I couldn't hold on. Chapter 30 has reached my limit. ☑The relationship between the protagonists conceived by the author is very touching! But the character design is almost meaningless. I hope the author can make the plot more compact and the heroine be more scheming [currently working on the draft] Come on! Jumped directly to the third "aunt" plane, which is a great improvement compared to the original author! After only about thirty chapters, there is finally no boring plot anymore. It's just that the male and female protagonists in the early stages were too miserable.

There are so few updates. I really like this kind of immersive guide, which is to do it as if you were the original owner. I hate the kind of game that says I'm immersed in the strategy, and then actually chats with the system while I'm conquering it. [Pouts]

Everyone likes it differently. I really like it when the original owner wears it according to his original character. It looks good. If the original owner's character changes, it doesn't look good. It's very nice [Love]

The third world is my favorite world. The author's writing is so good. There is also a second world, which fully proves that sentence. The man chosen by the heroine is the hero [laughs] It's not about who to conquer, but the heroine just wants to complete her own unique story line. It's really good [shy]

It's good to read, I really like this type of novel. I like it very much, but I would like to give you a suggestion. Sometimes it is immersive, but when the idea of ​​a strategy suddenly comes out, it is a bit abrupt, and there are places where the thoughts go back and forth (for example, in the description after the heroine was captured for the second time and everything was over, she kept saying that she had to think about how to deal with it. This sentence was mentioned several times, and then she saw the hero, Chen Sen and Song San, this place will jump a bit) readers will come out. Anyway, this is what I feel now.

The four stars are for the sake of the first plane. The second plane is super invincible and poisonous. Those who like to eat pesticides can check it out.

The writing is pretty good. Although the author clearly wrote about the character of the heroine, I still took a look at it out of curiosity. After reading the first article, it was okay. I'm getting more and more tired of it after reading the second part. If the heroine keeps going this way, it will be hard to watch. But if you like the character of the heroine, I recommend it. The writing and the story are pretty good.

Not bad, not bad, immersive plot, smooth story, and most importantly, please continue to maintain the male hygiene setting. *(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭*

I really love this genre, but there are too few of it [crying] [crying] Do you have any recommendations for books of the same genre [shy]

Five stars for the first world. The first world is really beautiful. The heroine is scheming and her charm can be seen. She is a smart woman who seems weak but is clear about her goals and advantages. I followed several more worlds, but they all lacked the flavor of the first world. It felt a bit like playing house, and the male protagonist lacked charm and was not worth the efforts of the female protagonist to seduce.

The first story is okay, but the writing style of the second story is not so good, but the plots of both worlds are very interesting.

I love reading and writing more, especially the second short story. It's so right to change the male protagonist. Come on, author Very much looking forward to it

It's good-looking, the characters are all well-rounded, the heroine is not abused, and you can enter with ease

I haven't seen it at all. Please update. I just want to see story line four [please update]

The first story in the first world is good-looking (♥∀♥), the plot development is very reasonable, and the characters are all tenable. Good reviews (o^^o). . . It's just not enough👀ahhhh Waiting for updates every day, I watched it for a few days and then finished watching it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's a potential stock and worth a look.

Watch more. I like female protagonists who are weak and can't take care of themselves [laughing]

It looks good. The low rating may be because it's not finished. It's the first time I've seen this type of quick wear. It looks good.

It's super beautiful, and the setting is very interesting, but it's too little and not enough to read. I hope the author will update it more [Love]

It's very interesting. I originally thought it would be the same as before, but this book makes people want to read it.

It's great, but there are too few people who really like this genre. Please give it a try, author! ! !

Please update soon, you are really beautiful, you are my spiritual food [I'm about to cry]

I think the author wrote it very well. The male protagonist has shortcomings, but he completely fits the character's characteristics and has a sense of immersion. Big cheers for the author

It's so good-looking, really good-looking, especially the second dungeon. Oh my God, this joke is so good.

A great book, with delicate characters, and the plot of each chapter attracted me to continue reading. This is the first time I have read the book twice, and I look forward to the author's big updates [Love]

Superb! Super invincible and beautiful ^ω^[adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Beautiful, can't get enough of it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Yes, some shortcomings can be ignored. It would be nice to have an extra chapter after the short story is finished. Some short stories are confusing without the extra chapter.

Not bad, I just like to see people who can pretend and act like this