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I admire the author's skill and courage for daring to write a group portrait book. However, it can be seen that the character creation is still a little thin. The memory points of many characters are similar to quirks or abstract speeches. It is recommended that the author clearly defines the character and then gives a text to shape it. At least the reader must be able to think of what kind of person he is when he sees the name. Also, please give me a reader group number.

Me and my city-breaking spear, from Victoria

In fact, to be honest, it's okay. The following is just my personal opinion. Please correct me if there are any mistakes. The supporting characters don't have too many roles, but the heroine's role is a little less. It feels a bit biased towards group portraits, but this is not a big problem. To be honest, the interaction between the supporting characters and the protagonist is also interesting. Making enemies because of the heroine will definitely lead to trouble. This has been explained in the first few chapters.

It looks good, the emotional lines are delicate, and the settings are clear and interesting.

I think the author should have written this novel in the direction of a group drama, but he couldn't grasp it, which resulted in the perception becoming a daily routine. When writing about Ryan and his brothers, the meaning is unclear, or it is confusing. However, the author has a good foundation in writing and has broad prospects.

Good book, well written, keep up the good work!

Let's take a look during the observation period

It's very beautiful. Please support it.

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Pretty good, I think

I always feel like I've read this book somewhere before

If the ratio of weight to height is greater than 1, you must read it [smile] [smile] [smile] Of course, I am not

Author: Where have you been? Author: Why haven't you come back yet? Didn't I have a chance to read the rest of the article?

So it will be a long time before the cosplay server can be launched [I'm about to cry]

I'm giving you some attention. It's a little bit poisonous to me. I hope it will be better in the future.

Okay, I think it still looks pretty good. The male and female protagonists are very sweet, and there is also a growth story of the male and female protagonists, just don't do anything later and leave for a while for revenge or something. Come on [send heart]

I think it's okay. There are sweet stories with the heroine and the growth of the protagonist. It's good to watch.