I Was Supposed to Be a Laid-Back Cannon Fodder, So How Did I Get a Harem Protagonist's Script?

Emmm, what can I say? It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good, the plot is also very exciting and unique, and the characters are also very full. . But from the beginning to now, there are more than 100 pictures, which is almost the same. The male protagonist is very young. I always feel that his behavior is infantile. . Of course, it's just some words and actions. It's still very interesting in the ordinary plot. The author's writing style is also very good. There are many emoticons and so on. It can be seen that the author likes to use emoticons to express emotions, which is also a very unique feature. The only thing for me is that it is childish, such as having some words~. . Wait, there are a lot of modal particles. Maybe the author likes to use them, but I am not very interested in them. Overall, the style and writing style of this article are quite good, the plot is not sluggish, and the character setting is also very good. Sisters who can accept childishness (just a little bit) can feel comfortable with it.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist's personality is silly and cute, but he's a little too cute and uses too much force. Is it true that the protagonist can't speak well? Sometimes I really get a headache when reading the text, because one moment I feel like he talks like Detective Tang Ren from Chinatown, and the next moment I think he sounds like some coquettish little girl. Only very rarely do I remember that the protagonist is a male. Because although my personal sense of attack in Danmei is that one is lying on top and the other is lying on the bottom, in the final analysis, the gender is male, and there will not be too many feminine senses because I like men. Of course, maybe I don't understand gay men enough, or maybe such protagonists are more popular in Danmei novels. I rarely read such dual-male protagonists with clear CP, and I don't know the current preferences very well. The overall character control is very good, and the protagonist is also worthy of love in terms of ability and personality. Except for the protagonist's own words, which give me a headache as an old man, and the personality and behavior that look back, I feel a bit... Yin is strong and Yang is weak, everything else is pretty good.

The character of Shou was well developed, especially in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, I felt that the replacement of some homophonic words was too tactful, or maybe I wanted to create a silly and sweet character, but used too many such things as "da", "wo" and "mud" and it lost the feeling. It made people feel a little uncomfortable (it also has a derogatory meaning, just a simple suggestion). Overall, it is quite good, the plot is smooth, and the shaping of each character is quite good.

The content is quite good. One thing is that Shou's speech is too "cute". The voices in my mind are all those of children. I can't imagine what it would be like for a sunny and cheerful teenage voice to say such things [face covering]

Everyone's reading habits and xp are different. This book has homophonic substitutions such as "nest". In the later period, the number of babies who are not able to accept it will be reduced and they can go. There are foreshadowings, but it's not too deep for me personally. And then there's the plot, which has no pitfalls that need to be filled in later. It's very suitable for daily viewing. It's so sweet that babies don't have to worry about having knives. Also, Lanxi, you are a tea! Ayuan Baby Tonic will follow him! (This sentence is purely joking. It does not mean to slander or criticize others. It is purely joking. If you feel uncomfortable, I apologize in advance.) Besides, baby, your writing is so beautiful! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I don't want to say it anymore, but I have to comment after reading it halfway through. It's really beautiful. I really like A Yuan's sunny and cheerful character. I feel better after reading it. The main reason I want to comment is not because A Yuan is too cute. The main reason is because the author is too big. I didn't understand some of the words in the author's big words before. I really like it, there are some coquettish modal words. I was thinking about abandoning the article, but when I read it later, I couldn't stand it. I sent a comment to the author. At that time, the author replied to me with a nice sentence and a heartfelt expression. I thought that the author would remove those modal words later, but I didn't expect it. The author changed all the modal words in the past night. I haven't read them in the past few days. I just wanted to recall the plot and re-read it, only to find that the author also changed the previous ones. I really want to cry because I don't really like some of the modal words in it, but I like the plot in it, so With a glimmer of hope, I made a small suggestion to the author, but I didn't expect that the author really accepted it. I love you so much, author. I thought it wouldn't be ignored because it was some small tone words, so I changed a lot of articles. It was too troublesome. I really love you [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's really super good-looking and the content is really hilarious. I started laughing non-stop from the moment I read this book. I really like the character of the owner. It's so cute. Great support for the author.

The plot is good, but the writing is a bit slobbery, and the characters are also good. It's worth watching.

I really like the character of the male protagonist, I really love him! ! ! ! Really recommend, really recommend, really recommend! I usually don't bother to write reviews, but this book is the only one I particularly want to recommend to others! Be sure to check it out! ! ! ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The male protagonist is super powerful. He doesn't bully others, but if he is bullied to the point of being bullied, he will definitely fight back. Moreover, the male protagonist is sometimes timid but he is never afraid at critical moments. Really recommend, really recommend, really recommend

I read the first part first. The character setting and plot setting are very attractive, but there is one problem that is very uncomfortable. I am not looking for fault, nor am I criticizing the author (apologies for everything). The author wrote it very well, but that part is a little bit uncomfortable. It is really not nitpicking, it is really a little bit uncomfortable. I don't know if it will get better in the future. The author's writing is really good, maybe it's my problem!!