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Emmm, what can I say? It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good, the plot is also very exciting and unique, and the characters are also very full. . But from the beginning to now, there are more than 100 pictures, which is almost the same. The male protagonist is very young. I always feel that his behavior is infantile. . Of course, it's just some words and actions. It's still very interesting in the ordinary plot. The author's writing style is also very good. There are many emoticons and so on. It can be seen that the author likes to use emoticons to express emotions, which is also a very unique feature. The only thing for me is that it is childish, such as having some words~. . Wait, there are a lot of modal particles. Maybe the author likes to use them, but I am not very interested in them. Overall, the style and writing style of this article are quite good, the plot is not sluggish, and the character setting is also very good. Sisters who can accept childishness (just a little bit) can feel comfortable with it.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist's personality is silly and cute, but he's a little too cute and uses too much force. Is it true that the protagonist can't speak well? Sometimes I really get a headache when reading the text, because one moment I feel like he talks like Detective Tang Ren from Chinatown, and the next moment I think he sounds like some coquettish little girl. Only very rarely do I remember that the protagonist is a male. Because although my personal sense of attack in Danmei is that one is lying on top and the other is lying on the bottom, in the final analysis, the gender is male, and there will not be too many feminine senses because I like men. Of course, maybe I don't understand gay men enough, or maybe such protagonists are more popular in Danmei novels. I rarely read such dual-male protagonists with clear CP, and I don't know the current preferences very well. The overall character control is very good, and the protagonist is also worthy of love in terms of ability and personality. Except for the protagonist's own words, which give me a headache as an old man, and the personality and behavior that look back, I feel a bit... Yin is strong and Yang is weak, everything else is pretty good.

The character of Shou was well developed, especially in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, I felt that the replacement of some homophonic words was too tactful, or maybe I wanted to create a silly and sweet character, but used too many such things as "da", "wo" and "mud" and it lost the feeling. It made people feel a little uncomfortable (it also has a derogatory meaning, just a simple suggestion). Overall, it is quite good, the plot is smooth, and the shaping of each character is quite good.

The content is quite good. One thing is that Shou's speech is too "cute". The voices in my mind are all those of children. I can't imagine what it would be like for a sunny and cheerful teenage voice to say such things [face covering]

Everyone's reading habits and xp are different. This book has homophonic substitutions such as "nest". In the later period, the number of babies who are not able to accept it will be reduced and they can go. There are foreshadowings, but it's not too deep for me personally. And then there's the plot, which has no pitfalls that need to be filled in later. It's very suitable for daily viewing. It's so sweet that babies don't have to worry about having knives. Also, Lanxi, you are a tea! Ayuan Baby Tonic will follow him! (This sentence is purely joking. It does not mean to slander or criticize others. It is purely joking. If you feel uncomfortable, I apologize in advance.) Besides, baby, your writing is so beautiful! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's really super good-looking and the content is really hilarious. I started laughing non-stop from the moment I read this book. I really like the character of the owner. It's so cute. Great support for the author.

I don't want to say it anymore, but I have to comment after reading it halfway through. It's really beautiful. I really like A Yuan's sunny and cheerful character. I feel better after reading it. The main reason I want to comment is not because A Yuan is too cute. The main reason is because the author is too big. I didn't understand some of the words in the author's big words before. I really like it, there are some coquettish modal words. I was thinking about abandoning the article, but when I read it later, I couldn't stand it. I sent a comment to the author. At that time, the author replied to me with a nice sentence and a heartfelt expression. I thought that the author would remove those modal words later, but I didn't expect it. The author changed all the modal words in the past night. I haven't read them in the past few days. I just wanted to recall the plot and re-read it, only to find that the author also changed the previous ones. I really want to cry because I don't really like some of the modal words in it, but I like the plot in it, so With a glimmer of hope, I made a small suggestion to the author, but I didn't expect that the author really accepted it. I love you so much, author. I thought it wouldn't be ignored because it was some small tone words, so I changed a lot of articles. It was too troublesome. I really love you [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The plot is good, but the writing is a bit slobbery, and the characters are also good. It's worth watching.

I really like the character of the male protagonist, I really love him! ! ! ! Really recommend, really recommend, really recommend! I usually don't bother to write reviews, but this book is the only one I particularly want to recommend to others! Be sure to check it out! ! ! ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The male protagonist is super powerful. He doesn't bully others, but if he is bullied to the point of being bullied, he will definitely fight back. Moreover, the male protagonist is sometimes timid but he is never afraid at critical moments. Really recommend, really recommend, really recommend

I read the first part first. The character setting and plot setting are very attractive, but there is one problem that is very uncomfortable. I am not looking for fault, nor am I criticizing the author (apologies for everything). The author wrote it very well, but that part is a little bit uncomfortable. It is really not nitpicking, it is really a little bit uncomfortable. I don't know if it will get better in the future. The author's writing is really good, maybe it's my problem!!

It's good to watch. Those who haven't seen it can check it out [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Recommendation [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

In fact, it's still very interesting to watch, but there are a lot of homophones and the tone of the main character's speech is a bit too immature. Also, the interstellar background has a really low sense of presence. Sometimes I forget it's an interstellar background unless a starship suddenly appears. Apart from the overly homophonic tone, the tone being a bit immature and the lack of presence in the interstellar background, the content of the plot is still very attractive. Although the plot is very cliche, I am a local dog and I love watching it [laughing]

I would like to support Jiujiu's new article [Sending my heart] Xiaoyuan's character is quite lively. I look forward to the next plot development. I hope Jiujiu can make more updates [please give me more updates]. Of course, don't forget that Ning Ning Zai Zai is still waiting for you [Blow kiss]

Who knows this is so beautiful! [Like] [Like] [Like] It's just... Too short, update soon [Sad] [Sad] [Sad] I was watching it hard and fascinated, and the evil shit yellow button came out [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

Super super pretty! Sui Xiaoyuan is so cute! ! It's just that Sheng Lanxi has so few scenes. . . I feel that other stocks have more roles. . . Although I know Lanxi is attacking! But those who say np, can they consider people like me who purely love warriors? I don't want to see np at all! I don't mean to say anything bad about those people, I respect every kind of xp! I don't mean that the capitalization is bad. The capitalization is great. I love watching it! ! There is no intention to guide writing! Finally, I wish you a happy day! ! The update frequency is super fast! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (Super strong desire to survive)

The author writes very well and is very interesting. I laughed from the beginning to the end. As long as I am not happy, I will definitely laugh until I run out of oxygen while reading this novel. Come on, the author~(ง •̀_•́)งCome on

The characters are vividly described, and the individual images and personalities are very distinct. The content is rich and interesting, and will not make people feel boring. The plot is also very immersive. Anyway, I love it! ! ! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! ! The author begs you to update it quickly! ! ! I was so excited that even if I couldn't find my bladder in the toilet, I wanted to pee, pee, pee! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhh! Sir author, my heart that admires you is as heavy as the stinky smell in my pants, it's heavy, moist, and warm!

It's quite interesting. The protagonist of this book is very cute and attractive. However, in the early stage, there are too many childish words that make people uncomfortable, but in the later stage, it is very good. There are some logical flaws in some places, but if you don't care about it for the sake of plot, you can skip it. It is not too eye-catching. All in all not bad.

This is the only book I have ever seen with a shit yellow button. I have kept this book for several weeks and am still interested in it. It's so beautiful~ It's a must-see for everyone who loves to watch it. It will definitely make you want to stop after watching it. If you don't put it on the bookshelf, I will lose. I have been chasing it from 8.9 Points to 9.1 Points.

Sui Xiaoyuan is really super super super super super cute! How could you not love Lan Xi! He loves it so much! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Lan Xi is really good at flirting! It made Sui Xiaoyuan stunned for a while (otherwise he would have a wife) [laughing evilly], but it was no match for Sui Xiaoyuan's brain circuit [laughing]

Hahaha, you've made a fortune by laughing, why is Baby Suiyuan so funny and awesome? Dear friends and relatives, don't miss it when you pass by. If you miss him, you will miss the happiest time in your life. Haha, I like it so much [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's really super, super, super good-looking, a funny and heart-warming story, and the male protagonist has a very positive outlook! The plot is super interesting! ! A lot of the plot descriptions are very exciting and exciting. If it is not enough, it is only the connection of some camera changes. It is a little confusing, but it does not affect it. Then there is the appearance of another male protagonist. The plot is strangely sparse now, but it is really interesting and enjoyable. It is a light-hearted and humorous little article, and I feel very happy while reading it.

Like! ! ! Interesting! ! ! ! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahaha, can you update a hundred chapters in one day? It's totally not enough! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][love][love][love]

It's very good, very good, and the hole I dug has been filled. [Sending my heart] I really love the author. I read a book that was similar to this one before and I was fascinated by it. It also traveled through time and again, but the author didn't write it completely. He dug holes like crazy and didn't fill them in. At the end, he even dug a hole for me.

So pretty! ! I want to whip the author into updating quickly! ! Can't wait, I want to see more and more! Is this the charm of a heartthrob? Love, love! This is a heartthrob that even readers are fascinated by! Sui Xiaoyuan is really super cute! !

Nice! ! ! Not enough to watch at all! ! ! The end of the extra chapter caught me off guard! Let's smash the atmosphere destroyer from a distance [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] No matter how ambiguous the atmosphere is before enlightenment, it will be broken far away. That's called a funny [sneaky laugh] [laughing] [laughing] @wanyue. Lin @ Tear off the head of the tomato sacred core. It is really highly recommended! It may be a little uncomfortable in the middle, but it will be fine afterward~~~ The author is great! ! ! Liquor! ! ! Hungry! ! Rice rice! ! @Wine

I was Sui Yuan. I thought I had traveled through the book and could eat melon in the front row and watch the Shura field. If they hadn't come after me one by one, I would have almost believed it [shy] Advantages: The plot is very novel and the characters are well described. Disadvantages! : In the later stage, he was too young, and the homophones were always pronounced. However cute Sui Yuanzai was, he was an adult male of 1.8 Meters and had no problem with his brain. It would be great if the homophones were changed a little! Perception: The plot is really interesting. I can't wait to watch it every day. Apart from being a little too young in the later stages, there is also a big problem with the big sentence breaks. But around chapter 100, I can see that it has been greatly improved. There are a lot less homophones than in chapters 60 to 95, and it feels very comfortable to watch! It can be seen that Da Da is working hard to change it! I hope you can accept our opinions and make more corrections and you will succeed! ! @Wine

Super pretty! Who knows how my body trembled when I saw the description of Xiu Xian's battle! Also, the writing is really good! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, I just fell in love with it, ahhh... Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]Update soon [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's so beautiful. The homophones on the side are really random. It's so funny. There are some homophones in it. For example, I and Wo can't accept the lightning protection bag. Anyway, I think it's very beautiful.