Ye Yun traveled through the wild world, which was in a state of chaos and disorder, and faced crises everywhere. Fortunately, the system awakened, and Ye Yun summoned the strong men from all over the world to guard him, so he slowly emerged in this chaotic world, and step by step became the strongest in martial arts.
Reader comments
Too messy, average
The first plot was a bit fast and chaotic, jumping to other storylines without a beginning or end.
The second force is not strong enough and has created a force. The summoned subordinates always call him Sir, while people from other forces call him Sir. Every time someone from other forces comes, they have to go out to meet and talk to others in person.
It's so messy, I look a little confused
Nosy and licking
I'm jumping around and I don't know what kind of chicken request you are writing.
What the hell? ? A messy bunch
Generally medium,
The best pretender
Brother, what you wrote in Realm does not match the front and back.
Seriously, if you can exchange spiritual stones for points and wipe out a few families, then the money will come, and there are all the gods on land. Isn't it easy to wipe out the clans? [Spit]
The plot is so messed up.
It's a messy bunch, and it's inexplicable to see.
A bunch of chaos, the strong and the weak are in complete chaos
Very stupid......
Not bad😁[smile][smile]
Quite a mess
It's a mess and the main line is not clear. The plot is not connected
Too messy, average
The first plot was a bit fast and chaotic, jumping to other storylines without a beginning or end. The second force is not strong enough and has created a force. The summoned subordinates always call him Sir, while people from other forces call him Sir. Every time someone from other forces comes, they have to go out to meet and talk to others in person.
It's so messy, I look a little confused
Nosy and licking
I'm jumping around and I don't know what kind of chicken request you are writing.
What the hell? ? A messy bunch
Generally medium,
The best pretender
Brother, what you wrote in Realm does not match the front and back.
Seriously, if you can exchange spiritual stones for points and wipe out a few families, then the money will come, and there are all the gods on land. Isn't it easy to wipe out the clans? [Spit]
The plot is so messed up.
It's a messy bunch, and it's inexplicable to see.
A bunch of chaos, the strong and the weak are in complete chaos
Very stupid......
Not bad😁[smile][smile]
Quite a mess
It's a mess and the main line is not clear. The plot is not connected