This ****

I wrote it faster, but there's nothing I can do about it. After all, I don't know when this book will be gone. Some of the details of killing moves and Gu worms have been ignored. I just hope that the Immortal Queen can write in more detail, what kind of poisonous insects are, what ingredients they are, and what kind of killing moves they can form.

The author simply abandoned the first volume and started writing from the second volume, and most of the space is focused on the protagonist Hu Bo. To be honest, I would rather see Fang Yuan, but I think the author's writing style is good, and the setting is relatively novel. The use of Gu is changed to Dan. Although it is a bit awkward, it feels good. [Learned] I think the biggest problem is to quickly change the cover of this book. I think this cover is really not good. It is not as good as the cover of the previous book (Gu, Chen Bo). I hope the author can change it. Finally, I send you a five-star review. I hope the author can write it to the end and leave more space for the things between Fang Yuan and Hu Bo (trading, calculation, etc.) [Blow kiss] Unexpectedly, Dan Wanhe rises, and all systems and schools can grow. The green grass is frozen thousands of miles away, and the south wind blows away the vicissitudes of life. Painting brushes are searched in the wild, and the family massacre continues in the painting. Traveling thousands of miles to the mountains to discuss, I inherited the essence of selling stones in my heart. On the martial arts stage, he demonstrated his swordsmanship and killed all powerful enemies at level 4. Abandon the business and go out of the city, and gather around Dongmeishan Mountain. If one person only masters swordsmanship, who can stop him from annihilating powerful enemies? Tianyuan Baolian thought to herself, why should I be afraid of embarking on another journey? (If you don't do well, don't criticize, you can comment) [Salute]

Humanity is the most powerful thing. Become an immortal soon, otherwise you may lose it again.

It's a very interesting Gu fanfic. The protagonist's actions are very consistent with my thoughts. Compared with the original work, there is not much difference in setting concept. The character structure is good.

The kendo is so cool, the sword formation is also cool, it would be even better if it can be more innovative.

The setting is good, the plug-ins are moderate, not brainless, brothers just jump into it

Looks good, be careful of the Tenth Turn Forbidden Network Gu

Excellent quality, wall crack recommended! !

A bit real

The protagonist is quite ruthless and the plot is fast-paced.

Although the noun has been changed, it is clear that it is Gu, and Gu's fans are relatively outstanding.

The battle scenes are written smoothly and imaginatively.

I have an idea and I have an outline as soon as I read it. I hope I can finish it.

Continuing the writing style of the previous book, this time the progress is faster, no procrastination, and it is more enjoyable to read.

When to refine three gen Gu, four gen Gu and ten gen Gu?

I hope the author can write faster, I want to see a completed fanfic

Urging for updates, it seems that the results are not very good, but I hope the author will continue to write. As long as he writes slowly, he will always be seen.

I follow the same style from the previous book, but I hope the author can write it for a longer time and don't get banned again.

Nice, come on author