The Disciple Is so Strong, but the Ancestor Is Too Cautious!

A very interesting novel about time travel and immortality, with skillful and smooth writing and detailed characterization. The plot develops with ups and downs and is naturally fascinating. The characters in the book have their own characteristics. After reading the book, the scenes will be vividly remembered and arouse many associations. Good book, worth recommending!

There are thousands of time travel novels, but this one is my favorite. The author has a big imagination and exquisite writing style. He describes the characters in the book deeply, and the fighting scenes give people a strong visual sense, as if they are actually there.

The plot is very interesting, the author has such a rich imagination, [like] [like] [like]

So well written! It is unconventional and can make people follow it in one breath.

A very nice and systematic fantasy novel, the author has good writing style and the story is exciting. [Praise]

The plot is novel and interesting, the writing is online, and it looks good. Five stars!

Good-looking, similar to Wen Fei from Qunxing. Everyone ascends together, rather than cultivating until the last person becomes an immortal. To be honest, why I like to read articles about stars is because we are just ordinary people. Even if you lie flat, if the stars are lucky, they will lead all mankind to ascend [laughing]

The plot is ups and downs and the content is rich and colorful. It is a good imaginative novel.

This is the most comfortable book to read about the ancestors of the sect. It does not have the double-eyed supreme bone sect and various great emperors and beasts guarding the series on the assembly line every time you go out. Instead, it is like a long and steady stream of cultivating immortality step by step. Finally, it is not an industrialized immortality novel. It is the first time I give it a five-star praise [blowing kiss] Two stars will be deducted in the middle period. There are three poisonous points. Is the first male protagonist engaged in rural development? He farms and opens an academy and runs a group. This is a fairy tale, not an urban dragon king. The second male protagonist has a system but it is useless. Whenever someone around him is injured, there is no cure. Either his lifespan is shortened in exchange for detoxification, or he takes a few pills and waits for a few days to wait for death. The third thing is that the name was abandoned. I don't know if it was a prank or just to make readers run away. There were a lot of disciples who came later and were named Zhuge Liang and Xue Rengui. It was too dramatic.

A very unique book, worth reading

A very interesting time-travel novel with clear ideas

It is a concise fantasy novel, the plot setting is unconventional, and the slow pace is not mindless.

This is the first time I read an article like this, it is novel and interesting. Recommended for everyone to take a look.

The writing is good, the writing style is delicate, but there are a few flaws, but it doesn't affect it. Come on👏!

The plot may be slower, but it's still ok. This is not a mindless article.

The author's language is so smooth and beautiful that I will update it [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, but the word count is too short. Very nice. ! ! ! ! ! Like 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. Big cheers for the author!

The writing is very good, Chang Fengxue has made some modifications, and the author is still very attentive! The description of the sect is also good! The broken sect really needs to develop slowly. I look forward to the development of the plot later! Very good!

The writing is sharp and the words are outstanding. It is a rare good book. It will subvert some of your views. The plot is good and the characters are vivid.

Not bad, a little poisonous but harmless. The plot is smooth, just a little slow, but everyone has some descriptions, not to mention they are vivid, but at least they know what their character is.

The story setting of this book itself is full of drama and contrast. The story breaks out of the traditional Xianxia routine in which the protagonist advances all the way and upgrades rapidly. Instead, it goes the opposite way and allows the ancestor to hide behind the scenes. When his disciples become famous and become sword immortals, he still chooses to lie low and dormant. This plot trend is like a breath of fresh air, constantly arousing the reader's curiosity: Why is the ancestor so stubborn? What unknown past and shocking plans does he have? In the process, the author cleverly weaves a series of events, intertwining the disputes in the world, the rise and fall of sects, the undercurrent of mysterious forces, and the ancestor's "Gou Dao" practice. There are tense and exciting battles between immortals and heroes, as well as resourceful and strategic battles, as well as relaxed and humorous daily interactions. The rhythm is relaxed and moderate, so that readers always maintain a high degree of interest during the reading process and can't wait to uncover the truth behind the story.

It's a novel for a newcomer, I feel it's still very powerful, the plot is relatively smooth, there are flaws, but it doesn't matter.

It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. The author uses a delicate writing style to describe an extraordinary sect. I look forward to the follow-up. Please give it your best.

It's extremely exciting, and the subject matter is my favorite type. The game tasks are combined with cultivating immortals, with a little bit of time travel from God's perspective. The description of the cultivating sect, level and improvement is quite comprehensive. Worth reading, stay tuned. . . .

There are so many fantasy books about time travel, but I like this one. The characters are very well drawn.

A very exciting novel about time travel and immortality. The writing is smooth, the content is compact and not procrastinating, and the story setting is unconventional. I love it.

A very exciting fantasy novel. I haven't seen such a good one for a long time. The author's writing style is witty and humorous. The plot has twists and turns and it progresses layer by layer. You can read the latest chapters without any pressure. It's a great reading experience! I give it five stars.

The writing is smooth, the characters are outstanding, and the subject matter is new. It is a rare fantasy novel and is highly recommended.

Interesting article, unconventional story, very special ancestor. There are exciting fighting scenes, the growth trajectory of the characters, the hanging pot that helps the world, and the power to scheme by any means. Each one has its own excitement. I like it!

There were many sects during the Qin Dynasty, such as sword sect, air sect, etc. It seems that the author has done a lot of research on the history of the Qin Dynasty and various sects. The various secrets in the book are well designed and attentive. I have been listening to them for two hours, and I am following them! After listening to it for five hours, the storyline was full of ups and downs, making me unable to stop, so I decided to catch up.