An Invisible and Weird Delivery Boy

This novel is so good. In the past, when I read ghost novels, each country sent a representative to fight against the weird, and then listed a bunch of (more than a dozen or dozens) rules in the weird world that were hard to remember. In the end, the protagonist found loopholes to fight. The repeated routines were too boring. Effortless pleasure is the essence of the novel.

This is a novel that can be made into an animation. In the novel, the identity of the protagonist is not revealed. The existence of the protagonist is always verified in the form of plot. Otherwise, you would not know who the protagonist is. The protagonist's ability is to neutralize the magnetic field. Within the range of the protagonist's magnetic field, strange objects and Abnormal influences will be nullified. When the protagonist enters the scene, the whole scene is nullified. Therefore, the author narrates the full text from multiple perspectives and from the perspectives of supporting characters. It would be very dull to describe it purely from the perspective of the protagonist. However, it is still very interesting for the author to lead the protagonist in writing with supporting characters. I am used to reading novels. , Those who like to read quickly may not be able to bring it into the plot. The author's descriptions from multiple perspectives can only be read as narrative texts [Salute][Salute]. Final summary: The author's writing style is pretty good, the plot is reasonable, the supporting characters have distinct images, and the protagonist's personality is close to life. Conclusion: Worth watching[smile][smile][smile]

It's very good-looking, and it has a scary feeling. I didn't read the introduction at first, thinking it was Lu Ren, the single male protagonist, but the group portraits are also very nice. I just wish Lu Ren had more roles. I feel like I'm just a stranger [laughter]

It's pretty good, but there is too little interaction between the protagonists. I don't know who is the real protagonist for a while [awkward laugh] Damn, everything revolves around Chen Long as the center of the plot. After watching it for a long time, Chen Long is the first male, Chen Long's second uncle is the second male, and Lu Ren is the tool man who saves Chen Long at the critical moment.

I feel like the writing is very good, but starting from the Mutton Restaurant, the protagonist's presence seems to have become significantly lower... As A Jun, Aaron, and even Zhang Xian's characterizations become more and more detailed, the protagonist has really become a passerby. While others are growing, Lu Ren's thinking has not improved much. In the final analysis, the author's writing is too strong and the story is relatively rigorous. However, the setting of the title and protagonist feels like it should exist in a more relaxed and funny story.

It's a very interesting group portrait novel, but I disagree with those who said in the comment section that the protagonist's role is small and useless. In this type of book, most of the development of the storyline relies on the imagination of the supporting characters, and the use of flashbacks and other techniques to improve the character image. To put it simply, the protagonist is more of a guide and witness rather than too involved. The comic adaptation of this kind of text should be popular (refer to "I'm Really Not the Follower of the Evil God", a really cool article, the plot is all based on imagination), I hope there won't be too many surprises in the later period, I will insist on reading it Finally, big cheers to the author! ! ! Don't worry about those people who criticize this book because it doesn't suit your taste. I hope this book will get better and better! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

A reminder to brothers and sisters who want to read a cool article. This article is not a cool article, but a group portrait. If you like to let the protagonist pretend to be a big kid every second, this should be too suitable for your taste. Don't give so many scenes to the supporting actors. Since it is a group portrait, it is for everyone else. There may be few description stones, so you should either get used to it or read other interesting articles. My suggestion to the author is that the writing style is a bit immature, and the number of words in each paragraph can be shorter. It is a bit tiring to read, and some descriptions are a little wordy. You can adjust it later! The subject matter is very unique, and I also like the concept of "I am the only one in this world who doesn't know how powerful I am". Come on!

I like this theme very much, and the story content of each unit is quite attractive. I actually like to read group portraits, but I feel that the interaction between the protagonist and other members is rather sloppy, the plot is a bit delayed, and the description is too detailed, which makes it look a bit boring. The story is generally quite novel, and I hope that the later plot can be smoother.

A wonderful novel, but it is not recommended to open the book review and read it. Some readers in the comment area may have read too much of Urban Fairy King, and their speeches have a sense of beauty that lacks IQ. As a weird novel, it is very well written. Come on, author, don't be led astray by readers' comments.

It's good to read, but, although, the protagonist's role is really pitiful. Most of the readers are attracted by the title of the book. Come here and read more than ten chapters, the protagonist does not show up once...

The author has updated a lot. Although it is "a bit" difficult to understand, I feel that the general outline and world view are still good. Although some places may make people feel a little weird, but when you read the novel, it is good to lose your mind (≧∇≦*)

It's so pretty, it made me laugh. Listen to novelty. I have never read such a weird novel before, hahaha

It's super good-looking, but the male protagonist's scenes are too few and they're mostly from other people's perspectives.

The author is carefully writing multi-perspective group portraits. He wants to show readers the reality and horror of the idealistic ghost world from the perspective of the supporting character, and also uses the perspective of the protagonist to show that everything is objective under the materialist system brought by the protagonist himself, and all idealism has no effect on the protagonist. However, the processing of the two perspectives felt to me that they were separated and not integrated, especially the time-staggered narrative was stiff and not very smooth. Please use chronological narrative or reduce supporting role perspective.

I think it's very good, the writing is very good, and the sense of immersion is quite strong. Of course, it's mainly because one of the stories is a bit scary to me. Maybe it's because I'm timid, and the writing is quite detailed. But the problem is that it is too detailed. There are too many details and it takes up a lot of space. As a result, although it is a good article, the content is too boring and boring, and it is easy to give up. Another point is that the protagonist has too few scenes, but the other supporting character has a lot of scenes, making people feel that he is the protagonist. I've only written 90 chapters now, and I feel pretty good about it. But the storyline of the hotel was too long and too boring. Many people gave up there. The protagonist didn't have many roles, which made me anxious to read. However, the latest chapters are a little better. The protagonist has more roles, but it still gives people the feeling of a supporting role.

It's not bad at all. It's quite different from Yi Yi. The protagonist of Yi Punch has a lot of expressive power and is very big. However, he is not recognized by the people in the drama. It is because he feels that the protagonist does not have such strength, so from the first perspective, he feels like he is just a passerby. Except for us from God's perspective, this one is different. It is just forcibly erased. It is somewhat similar in nature, but the method used is different. One is natural, while the other is deliberate.

Let's just say that the author's writing is very interesting, and the writing style is the most important thing that attracted me. I really wanted to laugh out loud several times, it was so funny, hahaha. However, I am very worried about the subsequent plot development. I think whether the plot is novel may be the biggest challenge of this book. Big cheers for the author[note]

It's quite good-looking. In fact, the setting is a bit similar to One-Punch Man. The protagonist is too invincible and only depicts instant kills, which makes it a boring novel. The group portraits can understand more of the world view and more ups and downs of drama. I hope the author will work hard and recommend it 😉

Maybe they all have their own preferences. I really like this book. How can I put it this way? Whether it is the weird description of the inn or the funny contrast between the protagonist and the protagonist, it is very natural to close and release it. Some people say that the protagonist is too short, which is contrary to Tiangang, but the setting of the protagonist is to purify all the ghosts around. Where there is a protagonist, there will be no ghosts. So in order to describe the horror atmosphere, reduce the length of the protagonist. I think this is a good way to deal with it.

Tomato is one of the few excellent works. Those who like fast-paced stories can read it. The writing is good. As for the weak sense of participation of the male protagonist mentioned in the comment area, I think it is okay. The content is transferred very smoothly. I suggest the author to keep the progress of the article and not to emphasize the content of the protagonist just because of the comments. It's best not to make it the kind of story where I'm invincible and I don't know, and then everyone comes to hug me and I'm still confused. I really can't write about it. It's okay to be a bystander like this, or it's good to be useful at critical moments. .

One Punch Man in a weird world, here he is called a delivery boy passerby. There are also characters corresponding to S-class heroes, such as the Taoist priest with the red sword and the monk in blood-robed cassocks. Here is the weird disaster investigator at the headquarters. The protagonist is invincible and the writing is cool.

The writing is very good. Some people say that there are too many supporting characters. In fact, this is the best way to write it. In this book, the protagonist's almost invincible existence means that he basically won't be defeated, so the supporting characters will have to take care of it. You think that the supporting characters take over the spotlight, but in fact the supporting characters have to suffer all the hardships, and the protagonist has to pretend to do all the bumbling.

It's good-looking, very good-looking, a bit like One Punch Man. The protagonist doesn't have many scenes, but he is the king when he appears. It uses a lot of supporting roles to set the stage, but there will be no situation where the protagonist loses his role and people forget about the protagonist. Here the supporting characters are fighting life and death, and then here is the protagonist's daily lighthearted and funny life. This kind of collision is handled well by the author so far. It looks okay

It's a hot topic. The subject matter is good, but the description of the protagonist's perspective is too little. It's a bit verbose, but the introduction of the background in the early stage is understandable. I hope the author can improve it [love] [love] [love]

It looks good. This is a new track. I have never seen this type of track before. It is very similar to the setting type of a book called "I am already level 1000, and the highest level outside is 30". One is about ancient immortality, and the other is about modern weirdness. Come on, please update more.

I really enjoyed reading it. When I read some reviews of the book, I thought it wasn't that good. I thought Lu Ren was the only protagonist. But slowly as I read the book, I realized that this story is actually described from a God's perspective. It unfolds from the perspectives of the protagonists. I like many hilarious scenes between them, like Chen There are a lot of laughs in Long Guangxuan, the scene where Zhang Xian is slapped in the face, misunderstood and is knocked off by a battery car. The book is not dull. Every key character has a three-dimensional image. The plot is interesting. I couldn't get enough of it at the end. There are alien creatures in the story. Gods and other things are not obtrusive and logical. Anyway, I really like it.

Overall, it's good, but the protagonist's role is not as good as the supporting role. The supporting role's role is about 10 times that of the protagonist [laughing awkwardly]

So far, it's pretty good. The protagonist is invincible, but he is only a character who promotes the plot. The main plot is other characters, and other characters are also relatively vivid. This will prevent the protagonist invincible from being too boring. Instead, it can save the scene at a certain moment or show off invisibly. It is fun and has a plot, which is fine.

The subject matter is really novel, and I personally feel that it is pretty good. However, I still hope that the author can write more roles for the protagonist. I feel that the sense of presence is a bit low [Like]

For this book, in my personal sense, it is very good. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. Other readers have reported that there is too little plot about the protagonist. I personally think it is okay. All in all, I like this book very much.