Rebirth in the Apocalypse, Stocking up on Goods and Posting to My Wife

It's great. It's different from the usual apocalypse. The world view seems huge, but the author is holding on and the plot is moving forward steadily. There is no sign of collapse at the moment. Moreover, it is a true double heroine. Most of the two heroines in the apocalypse are one of them is the eldest heroine and the other is a dependent existence. In this book, both of them are important in the plot and have their own characteristics. They complement each other and are both brilliant and comfortable to watch. The supporting cast is also pretty good, and even though it's excellent, it doesn't steal the show from the protagonist. I hope these advantages can be maintained. The author writes really well.

After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to write a book review for myself. After all, this is the first book for which I have prepared a serious outline. The current story has been written for half a year, with more than 600,000 words and almost 700,000 words. The reason why I gave myself four stars is not because I am ashamed of myself or because I feel that my writing is not good. It is just because I haven't finished it yet. I will talk about the detailed reasons later. First of all, let's return to the novel itself. Some of the issues in the early stages of this book have been mentioned in the reviews left by other readers. I was actually aware of these issues when I was writing the first volume in the middle and late stages. Maybe because it was the first volume, the plot arrangement and character creation in the early stages of the first volume were a bit immature. For example, in the early stage of Tingting's character design, some Baozi thought that Tingting's attitude towards human beings in previous lives was a bit too upright, but this was not my original intention. What I wanted to express more was Tingting's helplessness towards the bond and fate of her deceased best friend. It's not that I don't love Huayu, but more of a struggle and helplessness. The past life is not the main plot, maybe because of the writing skills, it is difficult to explain a complex person clearly in the limited space. The first step to making progress is to admit the problem. At that time, I thought about cutting the book and starting another one, but in the end I decided to continue writing. One reason is because it took a long time to prepare and the story is not finished yet. The other reason is because after writing for so long, I still like Huayu and Tingting. It feels quite relaxing to stop updating for a few days. After all, there are not many people reading it. I have a few more hours to play games and read comics every day. But as time goes by, I can't bear to leave them when I think of them, and I feel very sad (⋟⋞). Then I recently saw a great master share his writing experience. I don't remember exactly what he said in the original words. I just remember that he drank enough chicken soup (.-`ω´-) And gained a lot from it. To put it in terms of my own understanding, I am writing my first book as a newcomer. It is an objective fact that there are some deficiencies in it. After all, I am not a genius who is an innate online novelist. I can accept that there are no readers, and I can also accept that the writing is poor, but I cannot accept that I will give up if I can't persist. A few years later, when I come back to read this book, I can say that I have tried my best at that time. Regarding Huayu and Tingting, I can also say that I have tried my best, instead of saying, "The data was too poor at that time and no readers could read it, and then it became eunuch (´--`;)" So, for now, I'll give myself four stars. After all, I haven't finished the book yet. Therefore, I will work hard to finish this book. I will carefully consider your suggestions and reading impressions. I will work hard to improve any shortcomings or overlooked areas. I firmly hope and believe that as long as I calm down and work hard to write, I will make progress and write better and betterヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ! It's over

A good post-apocalyptic Lily article. The setting in the article is novel and attractive, and the world view is large enough to support the overall structure and writing of the article. It is also updated stably and the writing style is excellent. The only shortcoming is that there are currently few articles and the content of the first dozen chapters is slightly confusing. In addition, the follow-up is very good. In short, it is worth reading. I believe it will be an excellent book in the future! [Please update]

It's very interesting, the plot setting is very rich, but there are too few stickers. It would be great if there could be a bonus episode [Sending my heart] There are many characters in the later period, but it is a pity that various characters are not followed up. Overall, the story is very good. It was very satisfying to read the plot line in one go, and the world view setting is also very novel. [Like] At the end, I wish Yehua 99. Although she turned into a flower and leaf in the end ([learned]), I also hope that they will continue to walk hand in hand forever. If they are locked together, please get married. Thank you [laughing]

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Come on, great author.

It's so good to watch. Although the first few chapters are a bit ugly, it's not that it's ugly. It's just that there's a lot of talk in the first few chapters. The subsequent plots are getting better and better. I didn't even plan to read it. I was intrigued when I saw the latter part, and I spent a few days reading all the books. I wonder if the author could make a side story about Qing Yu. That one is also very interesting. And then there are the side stories about other CPs, which can produce more food. I haven't read enough and found out that it's gone. It's heartbreaking. It's so good.

The characters are well created, and the writing and plot are very good. This is the only book that arouses my interest. I still like it after many months [laughs]

I saw that there is no knife in more than eighty chapters, but Xiaowan's problem depends on how the author writes it. Unless the protagonist builds his own base and the Hua family siblings manage it, it would be difficult for a human base to accommodate a heterogeneous person, let alone the Yun family (his father views his daughter this way, even if he goes, he may not have a good life, or he may wander outside with the heroine and the others).

A belated blessing to the author. Cheers! And... I owe the five-star praise (o^^o) hahaha, I hope the author will not blame me, the belated blessing and the five-star praise are a bit irritating hahaha [send heart] [please update] [please pay attention]

It looks good, and I like it very much. Come on, author, and don't stop updating it! [Blowing kiss]

It's okay, I hope there won't be too many supporting actors and scenes later on

Just to watch the two heroines, meet again soon, don't live the apocalypse alone [smile]

It's super nice, I hope the author can keep it up

Good news: I found a great book Bad news: not finished It is very different from the usual doomsday novels!!! The plot development of this book is quite attractive, and I can also feel the helplessness in it (after all, it is not a purely refreshing novel). The main plot and the posts are very good, but I am more curious about the ending of Yun Chenhai (a minor character, I think he is disgusting, he is essentially a very selfish person, he does not have much love for his wife, and always considers the interests of himself and his family. I read too many refreshing novels and it is difficult for me to tolerate this kind of person) , because I don't know how this kind of person will end up, and I don't want him to die happily and lightly, and I don't want him to live like this, and I don't want to see the drama where he says he regrets and others forgive him, but he has a family relationship with the protagonist group. Hey, I don't know how to solve it. Actually, it depends on the author. It would be okay if he is a villain, but the problem is that he doesn't seem to be a villain). The character is well created, but his personality and stance are incompatible. I hate this feeling. I hate it, I hate it, I hate it! In short, it is impossible for me to say anything that can change the ending that the author wants to write. After all, I am just a bad reader. I usually like to write the things I hate in book reviews. It is just my personal feelings. Don't bring it in yourself.

There are many foreshadowings in the whole book, and they are also deeply hidden, especially the relationship between blood spirits and star spirits. It is a pity that the story of Huayu's family and Michelle was not included.

[Thinking] It's a very good apocalyptic novel, why is it rated so low?

Needless to say it looks good, just watch the duration. How come no one reads such a good book? [Angry][angry][angry]

If you give me a five-star review, no one will know.

It looks good. I would give it 95 out of 100. I will put this book out now.

I've seen the latest chapter. When will Huayu regain her memory? And there shouldn't be any more big swords in the future, right? [Chigua] The main plot is very interesting, but I still hope there will be more plots. After all, I was attracted by the title at the beginning. Now I feel that there are too few plots in Tietie. Basically, they are promoting the main plot.

The ten-year-old bookworm tried his best not to like it

Come on, the author writes well

Send a five-star review! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Looking at the name, I thought it was ordinary, but the result was an unexpected surprise × 2

Support me, the first chapter looks pretty good

Well written! But why are there so few comments on these? I can't figure it out! (⋟⋞)

At the end of the first volume, my heart was filled with pity for Huayu, and she couldn't help it.

This is a book that I like very much. I originally thought it was about ordinary post-apocalyptic survival, but it was a big surprise later on!

The plot is very rich and the logic is very appropriate. The most important thing is that the interaction between the two heroines is really sweet. I like to watch this kind of [blowing kiss]