Harry Potter: The Dark Lord? What a Joke

It's good-looking, the male protagonist is good-looking, and the female protagonist is Hermione

Four stars for encouragement, don't ask me why the reading time is so short, because I jumped to read it, and those who read HP fan fiction for the first time can appreciate it. For me, although the author has some foreshadowing, for now, the plot is nothing new and boring. Also, I am in Gryffindor, I understand everything, and it is no different from most other fan fiction.

In fact, I feel pretty good so far. There are so many people who don't like the heroine Hermione. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences. The logic is quite smooth at the moment, there are no poisonous points, and the updates are normal. I feel pretty good.

Mark it, this is written by a troll!!!!

When I saw Chapter 12 in the library, I didn't want to read it, just because it was a girl? Just because she's the heroine? The male protagonist demonstrates the transformation technique first, but then she starts to do it without explaining it? You are always violent, you are always angry for no reason, why don't you tell others when you are angry? The male protagonist is not a roundworm in his stomach, how do you know why he is angry? Is it difficult to recognize the excellence of others? The male protagonist is not a time traveler. He is also slowly learning in the hotel. He is slowly practicing while working and reading books. He is not ashamed to ask, why should he pay for it? Do you find that the current heroine feels like a chess piece, a stepping stone that only brings out the bad side, or is it a foil to others, like a vase? Shouldn't a real female protagonist slowly catch up with the male protagonist through her own efforts and advance side by side with the male protagonist?

The protagonist is positioned as a "student master" and the overall performance is slightly "____", which is not derogatory. Point 1: The author attempts to set an extremely mysterious background for the protagonist, and the previous article keeps digging holes... How should I put it? The burying is too blunt, and the number is so large that people have no desire to read. Point 2: Gryffindor, yes, you read that right, it's Gryffindor... Everyone knows it... (It's not that you can't write it, it's just that the stereotype is very harmful) Point 3: The love line came too early. No need for the author to tell me, I knew who the heroine was at a glance (it's not a bad thing, it's just that my personal feeling is a little disconnected from the setting) Point 4: I have the same problem as most HP fans. They all come to see the fandom because they want to see something new. If it remains unchanged and is still written according to the plot, why shouldn't I read the original work? Finally, due to the buried pit. I really want to say: "Is this guy's mind filled with splendens?" (Sorry if this offended) I admire the ability to turn the ideas in my mind into novels. However, because there are too many nanny and dog-licking articles on the market, writing a work that seems to be a nanny novel is not popular in a saturated market.

I only read the first 20 chapters, and I can't stand it anymore. I feel that there is no difference except for the addition of the main character. I can't listen to the book. I just skipped and read it. It feels like an ordinary feeling. If you haven't read many Harry Potter fans, you can give it a look. If you have read a lot of Harry Potter fans, I don't recommend reading it. You will feel aesthetic fatigue. It is not much different from the original work. Moreover, the author is a bit of a Riddler. I am not sure whether the holes dug in the later part of the novel can be filled. In fact, The Riddler is okay, but the continuous riddles affect the viewing experience.

Nanny article, why do all the protagonists lick Harry Potter?

I wanted to raise it before, but I didn't expect it to die. Now it's revived. Overall, this book is very good.

It's great. It's best if the author writes 100,000 words a day.