Love Notes: Pure Love Will Kill You

Damn it, the author did a good job. Holy shit, I watched the protagonist peel away the heroine's heart step by step, digging into their painful childhood, wanting redemption, but falling into the pain of their own hearts for various reasons. The step-by-step portrayal of the yandere and the protagonist's heart is very good, the changes in love and dislike, the desire for freedom, and the desire to redeem the heroine. The writing is great!

Each character in the article is deeply portrayed through psychological description, and the protagonist tries to get a perfect ending from these imperfect people. Different choices in the Sims will lead to different lives of the protagonist. Several people with very different personalities are connected because of the hero's time travel. The complexity of the human heart stems from different families of origin and different living environments. The male protagonist has very rich experiences and knowledge learned in different simulations. Although the results every time were unsatisfactory, he still continued to simulate and try from the simulations to try to get the most perfect results. From the beginning, he was wandering around like a headless fly, constantly trying and making mistakes, and later he became familiar with the characters of the heroines and formulated corresponding strategies or protection. The interpenetration of heart and heart, the unpredictability and preciousness of life, maybe you can find the answer to why you live in this book. [Praise]

+Follow This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The descriptions of the female protagonists are all great. This cannot be summed up by just the label of "yandere". Basically, they are all three-dimensional and have their own characteristics. The male protagonist's early battles were quite enjoyable, unlike others who seemed to have no thought of resisting or escaping. Overall it has fun, a good story, and impressive characters. Personally, I feel that there is a slight problem. There is too much preaching. Maybe it is to describe the growth of the male protagonist, or maybe it is an unavoidable shortcoming of focusing on psychological description, but it is indeed a bit too much. And why don't the authors distinguish between "that" and "which"? Is it my problem, Tomato's problem or the author's problem? Also, I'm really looking forward to the male protagonist actually doing it. It's always been a simulation, although I've only seen half of it. According to the Tomato rating scale, I personally feel that it is at least 8.7 To 9.0, But this way of writing may not be liked by so many people. There's also "in" and "again", part of it. I'm basically done reading it now, and the author also said it's almost finished, so I'll add a follow-up review. I can only say that it's pretty awesome. In the first half, the content of the notes alone was only 8.7 To 9.0. In addition, the male protagonist's actual performance later gave me a score of about 9.3 Or 9.4 On Tomato. The male protagonist's gradual madness and the changes in the female protagonists, as well as the changes in the emotions of each female protagonist through the male protagonist's perspective, are all impressive. I feel that the author really has some foundation in psychology, or has seriously studied this aspect. In short, it is different from traditional yandere literature, and analyzes the reasons for their psychological formation in detail starting from childhood. Personally, I feel that online novels can really be said to have a bit of depth. Unlike other yandere novels I have read, which only show how crazy the female protagonist is and how she loves the male protagonist in a yandere way, that is too superficial. It is just like a label and not understand the meaning behind the label. It's a pity that the audience is limited, otherwise the rating should be higher. And the problem is still as mentioned before, it is a bit too preachy, and there is a suspicion of showing off knowledge (not a small one). Although it is not uncomfortable for me personally, this kind of writing is always easy to be criticized by others. Good luck, author, and I look forward to your next book. I hope that like this work, I can output some opinions that can withstand scrutiny.

It's not a novel, but it's a bit depressing. The author's human nature is very well portrayed. The protagonist also loses his humanity when he thinks about playing with human nature. Many short sentences in the book are inadvertently thought-provoking. Although I haven't finished reading it, there is an inadvertent warmth in this book, as well as that A sense of depression like a dark cloud always hangs over my heart. The childhood of the four heroines and various analyzes of the human heart make me think and wonder if I also have some psychological illness. In the end, the warmth makes me return to reality. I have overthought everything. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. Different people see different protagonists. The clown? Kind? What I see is the ethical relationship between body and mind, whether thinking has to bear physical sins, whether the body becomes uncomfortable first or the mind collapses first under the constraints of morality, the collision of inner demons, fears, morality, ethics, various topics, whether to abandon the small self to become the big self, and whether absolute reason can make mistakes. On the one hand, there is the fear of the heroines, on the other hand, there is a conflict between the two, and the protagonist who is too arrogant, creating an environment that makes people feel depressed even though there is no knife. The protagonist's own emotions are different from those of the heroines, creating a protagonist who is kind at heart but is losing his humanity. The protagonist attempts to use psychology to complete redemption, not only hoping to be separated from the body, but also to save the four female protagonists who were unfortunate in childhood. Each time, they simulate different lives, experiences, people accompanying them, different emotions, etc., Etc., And finally twist into a hemp rope, which keeps getting cut and sorted out. The protagonist does not realize that those who play with human nature will be played by it, and those who want to change their destiny will also be taught by fate. The protagonist's becoming indifferent is a manifestation, and the protagonist's desperation and increasingly crazy mental outlook are the best explanations. I was obviously looking for a sweet romance novel or a funny novel, but instead of laughing, I felt a haze in my heart. Although there is no knife, it is so able to provoke people's emotions. The author's writing style is very strong, and it makes people feel depressed without knowing it. It neither makes people cry nor makes people sad, but it is just so dull. It makes people want to read but feel unhappy. In the end, they don't know what to say. Finally, I have the text in my hand but I cannot express the essence and emotion of the book, but in the author's hand, I can easily stir up the reader's emotions. I'm really unhappy.

I finished watching it, and overall I enjoyed it. The last part was not that good, and it was quite uncomfortable to watch. I can understand the author, because I wouldn't be able to write it down. Unless you write a bad ending, you won't be able to write it well. It's amazing if you can write it well! To be honest, if I had to write it, I would write a bad ending. If the logic is consistent and not inconsistent, I can only write it towards a bad ending. None of the five people can be redeemed, because the moral bottom line of the male protagonist is too high, ridiculously high. Although I finally let it go, my character completely collapsed. After struggling for so long, I suddenly turned into a clown. The persistence and torture before felt like a joke. The other four heroines said they accepted the harem, but in fact they were just trying to compromise. They all wanted to have it for themselves, but they just loved him too much. To be honest, this kind of compromising feeling is quite sad, like sugar mixed with yellow lotus. But if I write a bad ending, I'll probably get trolled to death. Fortunately, I'm not writing it, hahahaha~ All in all, although I'm not satisfied with the tail, overall it's a blast to watch!

This is a good book, but it's a bit sad emotionally. I originally wanted to give it 1 star, but the quality of the book is so good that I can't do anything that goes against my heart. I just hope everyone has a happy ending. Can we finally make this extra episode? It's a side story of the sheep heroine, one heroine and one side story

I'll give it 5 stars. It's really well written. I have a feeling of powerlessness when watching the male protagonist in a horror movie. Every time I think about it, it would be great if the male protagonist immediately obtains the golden elixir and cultivates the Nascent Soul to suppress everything. This kind of thing is really refreshing [smile], rather than like a precious thing. Take a deep breath when reading the first 60 chapters. It's normal to feel dizzy. The more you read, the more addictive you become. The author is so cute [shy][shy]

Ahhhhhhh, anyway, I just think it looks good. This kind of yandere novel is really different, and some points are really satisfying. However, some of the connections are not very good and a bit awkward, but this is only a small part. There are also some parts that the author didn't handle very well, which makes me feel uncomfortable, but I'm still very happy. Also, I don't know what other people think. I thought it was quite uncomfortable to watch the part where we all die together after more than 100 chapters. I just didn't like it and I don't know why, but after that, the part where the protagonist stopped simulating was really fun for me. Mad, I regret it. I feel so angry and uncomfortable after seeing the scene later. It feels completely contrary to my psychological expectations. Oh, hey, hey, what are you doing?

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that it is really a top-notch yandere novel, and its style is unique. The author depicts the characters' personalities and moods very delicately, and even the subtle emotional fluctuations of the heroine lead to completely different endings. Unlike other yandere novels where the heroines' characters are quite extreme and single-faced, purely sick or spoiled, in this book the author has created a layered, broken and complex character for the four heroines. Each heroine has her own character flaws, and there are reasons for these flaws, which are very real. I found that the content is basically from the perspective of the male protagonist, and there is almost no psychological description of the female protagonist. This restricted perspective naturally leads to "brain burning", because the human heart has always been elusive. The character of the male protagonist is also the most comfortable one among the many novels I have read. He strives to find a balance between redeeming the female protagonist and preserving himself. He is neither brainless nor aggrieved. Each episode incorporates life and death, love, desire, and redemption, which is quite touching. If the author really did a more thorough analysis of the male protagonist's psychology as mentioned in the novel "Crime and Punishment", I think I would be more immersed in watching it. But after all, online writing is still different. Cheers, author:-)

It's a very interesting yandere novel, which greatly satisfied the twisted monster like me. The heroines don't stick to the general yandere template, and the memories in these chapters also add to the heroine's arc. Moreover, the male protagonist's concept of love in front of someone is a bit similar to mine, and I loved watching it even more. Here are some comments for the author: 1 I personally think that when several heroines read the protagonist's memories, they can be longer, because this can better shape the image of the heroine and allow readers to better understand her motivations. At the same time, because it is a memory, you don't have to think too much about the plot, which can leave more thinking space for the next plot. Of course, this is not very friendly to current students, and it is easy to make the chapter test data unsightly. So you can also appropriately reduce the memories of the fighting girl and the boxing girl, and just write down their delicious expressions of regret after breaking the guard. (I don't know why the changed Dou Ming girl gives me a soyo feeling. I have already begun to look forward to her. When I first read the memories, I thought that I would make up for the protagonist in the future. Then, in the memories, my astonishingly intelligent operation gradually collapsed, and I was completely blown up on the cruise ship. When I finally saw the protagonist, I could only kneel on the ground and beg the protagonist, oh, wow, Darcy, don't leave.) Just kidding, I also hope that the author will bring us good content in the future.

It's good to watch. Although the plot feels cheesy, I can't help but the emotional description is too delicate. I have to take the final high math test at 9 o'clock in the morning. I watched it all night without sleeping last night. I was so fascinated by it. I am always fascinated by the results of the next simulation. I always struggle with every choice of the male protagonist. I always hope that the next choice of the male protagonist will save me. Although it looks awkward, the performances of the four female protagonists are very reasonable and yandere. After being rescued, the only support for survival is the main character. The male protagonist has to make constant compromises to save himself. Although it is very heart-wrenching, it is also fascinating. After reading nearly 240 chapters in one night, this book emptied my mind and heart. As a result, I did not get a perfect score in the final high school math test. Warm reminder to everyone, [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Don't read novels before exams, as it will affect your grades and make you more likely to fail the exam, woo woo woo.

To be honest, when I first read it, I thought it was an old-fashioned simulation of redemption for a yandere. After reading it, I realized that it was a series of spiritual redemptions. Any extreme personality has a reason. Okay, so pretty

The yandere writing is well written, with a sense of reality and the madness that belongs to yandere. It describes the disease of yandere, not just yandere. Haha, hahaha, all crazy I don't know where love starts, nor where it ends. It is such inexplicable feelings that can torture people to death.

This is the first romance novel that I read for almost two consecutive days without even a break in between. Three hundred chapters felt fleeting and very worth it. Although it is not a pure love novel with a single female protagonist, to be honest, the ending of the harem is what I want to see more. This novel is not like the old harem romance anime that only involves jealousy and fighting with the male protagonist in the Shura field (see Itsukawa Shidou and Yuki Rito). It is more like a redemption. It is the rebirth of the king to four people and the rebirth of the king to four people. The psychological description and character portrayal are very successful, including how the mentality of the five people (including Wang Chongsheng himself) changes little by little, without feeling abrupt at all. Although there is a cheat-like thing like a notebook that can deduce the future, it does not give people the feeling that the deduction is greater than reality. The plots including the upgrade and exit of the notebook are also appropriate, which makes me even feel that it is acceptable not to explain the causes and consequences of the notebook. All in all, it's worth watching. It's not far from the end. There is no bullshit in the whole process. The plot with twists and turns will gradually get better. Just like the title of the book, this is a "redemption".

Analyzing it objectively, from the plot point of view, it is very novel, and the characters written by the author are indeed very good, some are gentle and cute. However, I am not optimistic about this novel personally. The possibility of discontinuation is too high. The development of the plot and the shaping of the characters make the novel more interesting. It is said that it is very difficult to write down, and some strange plots are poisonous in the eyes of readers (this can't be helped). In addition, there are some typos. The author writes well and the characters are well established, so it is difficult to develop the following. However, after handling it, this is definitely a magical book.

It's good, not even 9 points. The emotions are well written, but the hatred for the heroine is a bit hard to get. I think it can be written more focused, otherwise the immersive feeling will be half reduced.

Each of the four heroines has their own strengths and unique skills. Their fighting spirit and endurance are astonishing, and their secret weapons can even surprise you! In the yandere world, they are equal to the Heavenly Dao in the strong world, as powerful as Oga. I would like to call them Ji Tou Si!

This is the meal I should eat! ! ! Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The first point is that reading the notes at the beginning and letting the heroine experience the life of the previous few weeks are a bit boring. Especially in the latter part, it feels like forcibly making a knife to earn the tears of several heroines. The second point is that the ending is okay, but it is too hasty or hasty. Once you have an epiphany and break your own concepts, you have to become an immortal and become an ancestor regardless of fantasy novels and immortality novels. No matter how grand it is, it is not so hasty. Here are my thoughts: The first shortcoming, I would like to add, is the so-called ebb and flow, but regardless of the ups and downs, there will be a flat period. Reading the notes at the beginning is similar to the preface, which is a flat period, while the subsequent experience of life is an ebb and flow. To be honest, a novel cannot always pursue an eternal climax, it must be slow, so the first shortcoming is just something I point out objectively, but I don't have much resentment in it. Every major twist in the novel is quite interesting. The author is really thoughtful. I like [Shy]. Some of the plot details are also very well done. It gave me the feeling that it was adapted from the stories of people around me instead of my own story. The character's characteristics and thoughts are fully portrayed, and the people in the story are brought to life. They all have their own thoughts, rather than following the same story line. Especially the epiphany of the male protagonist at the end is not particularly wonderful. After all, the author also talked about opening up the harem, and the public also wanted to see the harem, so this epiphany is wonderful, but it is not the kind of extraordinary and unexpected magic that is unreasonable and unexpected. However, this wonderful thing makes the protagonist more and more vivid. This is what I want to see. I won't say much more. I hope you all can experience the story on your own. It would be too much to say too much. All in all, this novel was very touching to my heart! ! !

Some of the early psychological descriptions, character creation, and some psychology and philosophy are also very good, but there are too many simulations and too little emotional promotion of the real heroines. After Chapter 160, the real thunder begins. The subsequent series of explanations are too far-fetched. I wanted to write about choices and struggles, but the real female protagonists in the early stage had too few scenes and no story foreshadowing, making the four-party conversation seem too pale (I lost all my strength and means while watching it [crying]). The overall story pace is sometimes very fast, and sometimes it is very slow in order to focus on the description of the characters' psychology. But considering that the author is writing for the first time and writes whatever comes to mind, it is understandable. In summary, it is worth reading compared to Tomato's other novels (the second volume will be considered as appropriate).

It is a simulation, but it is not too redundant. Each time is a different experience. The characters in the book do not follow the same rules as the simulation. The so-called simulation is more like digging into the characters in the book, allowing readers to know the background and more information of the characters from different angles. It is a very good book. It is very beautiful. There are no poisonous points for the time being. Come on, the author.

It's a very good book, although the author dug a hole for himself, making it difficult to make dumplings. But the character description is very pure, the story is still too sad, and being loved by four people is too painful. I can only say that being loved is also a painful thing. Although I am not very satisfied with the plot behind it, I still think it is 5 points.

The image of the protagonist is particularly complex, I can't describe it, but it's quite annoying, but I can say it's very good. It may also be that the author has written the human heart too well, with the confidence to be loved, the self-righteous rationality, the kindness to others, and the cowardice and self-avoidance. ..., Write out a person's ugliness and beauty one by one. The ending is similar, but the process is too complicated. This is a change in a person's mental journey, but it is not the only one. To be honest, I skipped reading it. I had already skipped it when the protagonist and Qianzuru were in it, and went straight to the next ten chapters. Forget it, it's a bit depressing. Due to the lack of some plots, I can't give an accurate review, so let's go Forget it, give it a four-star rating because some of the plots are really long-winded.

It's so well written, I feel a little regretful. The first time I saw this book, I only wrote more than 90 chapters. Then I stayed up late to read more than 30 chapters, and couldn't sleep at night. Then I didn't open it. Until today, I have read so much more. I read it for more than four hours at a time. It is so well written. I want to say a lot, but I don't know. What should I say? The author is so awesome. He writes so well. I feel like my soul is trembling now. Now that I have finished reading the memory part of Yue, I have just pushed to the main plot and need to calm down for a while, so I am writing this book review. In fact, I don't comment on anything. I just express my feelings. It's awesome. I can only say, wait for me to slow down and read on.

After reading it (╯-＿-)╯╧╧The whole story gave me the feeling that I was licking blood on the tip of a knife. It's fishy and sweet with a hint of blood. The protagonist feels like an extremist (it feels like a small life. Of course it's just a joke and does not contain national discrimination). He is extremely kind and extremely indifferent. The Holy Mother shed tears after seeing what he did. But sometimes... It's a bit... This guy feels like he won't compromise... But it's really admirable. It's really good to be able to persist in doing things. The female protagonists are well portrayed. Each has its own characteristics, each has its own illness, and each has its own medicine. As for the protagonist, I only see the word "persistence". This is such persistence. He is like a fucking superman. I have no fucking doubt that the male protagonist can do all the things in the notes. It's like he can do it. The female protagonists are indeed very sick, but the male protagonist is even more sick. But the female protagonists are his medicine. In the early stages of this book, the author was really excited about the writing. In the middle and later stages of the book, the author was also excited about the writing. He also wrote about the poisonous points for many people. The writing is indeed very imperfect, depressing and uncomfortable, but this can be regarded as a perfect point of writing. After all, nothing is so damn perfect. Finally, come on, author. The writing does have its own style and flavor.

It's super good-looking. I'm used to seeing many time-travel stories. Most of them quickly accept their new identities, girlfriends, etc., And then kill everyone to start a harem. It's the first time I've seen a protagonist with such upright views in a time-travel novel. He doesn't want any of the four female protagonists and leaves after redemption. Although I don't know what the follow-up will be. But even if the four female protagonists in the article all become the protagonist's girlfriends, there won't be any negative feelings. The protagonist is worthy of her! ! ! ! The author must not stop updating.

This book is a slow-paced group portrait, a yandere novel. The male protagonist is normal at the beginning, but is slowly tortured to a point of madness. He will have his own mental internal consumption, rather than someone who just accepts the love of others without caring about anything. This kind of protagonist makes people feel comfortable to watch. After finishing it, it is a very good book to read, because the writing is detailed enough, and it will be very comfortable to read through it. It also has a touch of philosophy, the writing is smooth, and the foreshadowing and pit filling are well written. It is among the top three in this kind of husband-chasing crematorium type novel, and you can clearly feel the thinking and transformation of each character.

The author writes well, with vivid characters, smooth plot connections, smooth and rigorous logic, and the emotional transitions of each character are naturally not blunt, as if they were real events that happened to people in the real world. This book involves a lot of psychological description, which shows the author's writing skills, but there is a small flaw, which is due to the reading experience. I always feel that there may be a little difference in one place. Due to my level, I cannot point it out clearly, but the flaws do not hide the good, no, it should be Heshi Bi. Finally, because of the author's plot and characterization, this book is so good that I think it should be regarded as pure love.

First of all, this is a work that I think is excellent. As a pure lover of the Party, I personally hate being in multiple boats (I have complained about a few of them before [I'm full]), but before reading it, I read the reviews and said that the yandere in this novel is very sick and twisted, so I couldn't help but read it. The main reason why I could read the whole story is that the male protagonist is a pure lover. As for the female protagonists, they are not as twisted as I imagined. I can only say that each one has his or her own characteristics and is cute in various ways. The love and hatred between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also vividly depicted, and you can appreciate the details slowly. (After reading it, I got a little carried away, which made me unable to get into the next yandere novel, so I had to come back and comment first)

Five stars first, there are currently more than 130 chapters. 1. The simulation will not be annoying at first. Although there are many, it is necessary to use death to strengthen conflicts and build extreme emotions. It is also extravagant, very beautiful and logical. 2. Save people, self-destruct, save people, reverse, despair breeds hope. If you're looking for sweetness, go away, the characters themselves are still struggling, and there's very little sweetness. However, this is actually the contradiction, the real point of view. 3. There are some imperfections in the author's description and narrative, but the perception is good and can be improved. The main contradiction is well captured and the emotions are captured sufficiently. 4. Redemptionism is not about chasing after each other between two people. Madness is the surface, and sadomasochism is also the surface. Inside is the determination and twists and turns of salvation.