[Mammon Center + ooc + a lot of plot fabrications + group favorites]
(There are a lot of personal settings, I write whatever comes to my mind, just for love. In this article, Mammon's gender is female, CP is to be determined, a small white text)
It was clear that the final outcome was over, and I finally lived a leisurely life counting money every day, only to turn into a baby again as soon as I opened and closed my eyes? ! A real baby or something, well, I don't want it in a day like this.
Reader comments
Overall rating A+
The character structure is good, Mammon's character traits are richer than in the original work, and Valya's description is more intimate and united than in the original work.
The rhythm of the plot is a bit too fast. I feel that the author's control of the plot advancement is not too mature, and the logic in some places is hard to understand. Fortunately, the writing style is not bad, and the psychological description is relatively delicate.
It has great potential for development. I hope the author can fine-tune the details, maintain the existing advantages, and update it quickly!
But! This author has been discontinued for a long time and has not updated for two years! If you can't bear the interruption, run away quickly
It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.
It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author [blowing kiss]
Super nice (♥∀♥) Will the author come back? ! !
It's really good to read. There's not much OOC. I really like Mammon's female body. The group pet is great. It would be great if the author comes back. He writes more and writes well. I recommend reading rare good tutoring articles.
I hope the author will come back to write soon
Can you send me all my wishes? Little Mammon is really worth it~[Send heart][Send heart]
It's hard to find Mammon's article, please come on, author
Overall rating A+ The character structure is good, Mammon's character traits are richer than in the original work, and Valya's description is more intimate and united than in the original work. The rhythm of the plot is a bit too fast. I feel that the author's control of the plot advancement is not too mature, and the logic in some places is hard to understand. Fortunately, the writing style is not bad, and the psychological description is relatively delicate. It has great potential for development. I hope the author can fine-tune the details, maintain the existing advantages, and update it quickly! But! This author has been discontinued for a long time and has not updated for two years! If you can't bear the interruption, run away quickly
It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.
It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author [blowing kiss]
Super nice (♥∀♥) Will the author come back? ! !
It's really good to read. There's not much OOC. I really like Mammon's female body. The group pet is great. It would be great if the author comes back. He writes more and writes well. I recommend reading rare good tutoring articles.
I hope the author will come back to write soon
Can you send me all my wishes? Little Mammon is really worth it~[Send heart][Send heart]
It's hard to find Mammon's article, please come on, author