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I tasted the fine chaff on the tomatoes... It's not a CP article, but the emotions are definitely delicate and deep enough, and the accumulation of a series of small things is enough to burst out huge emotional energy... It's so delicious that I kept reviewing it all night long...

The family ties between step-brothers are excellent. . . Although the two brothers in this week's episode were a bit miserable, their relationship unexpectedly gradually improved () I personally think that the author's psychological description of Yan Sheng is really restorative. Although it is in the second person, I personally feel that there is no OOC. It is completely substituting into it. It was weird and uncomfortable to watch before. Thank you Tomato for letting me eat such a good meal. After reading it, I briefly changed from a poisonous woman to an innocent little girl. . 😭😭I really like this book, teacher, please continue to work hard [love][love][love]

It's really beautiful and feels very real. I hope the two of them will always be fine and their family relationship is very warm. Seeing Yuanyi being beaten and injured by his father, but avoiding the injury because he didn't want to worry his brother, Yan Sheng felt a little internally conflicted because of this, and he felt sorry for them. As expected, the person he disliked the most was his "father". My brother is actually a very sober person who understands everything but can't let it go. But this is the true portrayal of most people in the world... Although I really like the family relationship, I still have some vague expectations for the other direction mentioned by the author, and I am a little curious about my brother's reaction. In short, [please update]

It's really well written, with delicate emotions and a strong sense of empathy. When I watched it before, I felt that for a proud person like Yan Sheng, when he saw his younger brother easily accomplishing something that he couldn't even do with all his strength, and trampling on his efforts, his feelings should not be just hatred or jealousy. Humans are very complex creatures. At that time, Yan Sheng still loved his younger brother and said that he would protect his younger brother. He might feel disgusted and jealous about this. But at the beginning, there must have been a moment when he was truly happy for his brother. This is the gentle elder brother in Yuanyi's memory [almost crying]. Yuanyi, who is intuitive, can think of him as a kind person. Yan Sheng must have had a kind side in the beginning. Why do some people use their own subjective perspective to evaluate whether this person is good or bad? When watching Demon Slayer, many people rated Third Brother better than Black Death Mou. They seemed to have deliberately ignored Yan Sheng's jealousy of geniuses and his desire to protect Yuanyi. The arrogance of a person as a superior protecting a subordinate, but the reluctance and jealousy of being surpassed instead are the true nature of ordinary people. Maybe it's because they are too similar and they don't want to admit their inner feelings, so they don't recognize him either and want to escape from this fact, because they are really too similar to us who are ordinary and powerless in the world. So the author really writes very well. This is the first time I have seen such a detailed analysis of Yan Sheng's psychology in Demon Slayer fanfiction. Although I have read other good articles with equally delicate emotions, they really rarely describe Yan Sheng's psychology, and the descriptions are too one-sided. Even if there are some that are not so one-sided, the author's writing is the best description I have ever read. It is really amazing.

Very, very... After reading it at a glance, it is obviously a different development from the original work, but it is completely reasonable and does not feel OOC at all... Maybe this is what everyone expected, and suddenly I remembered the shock when I saw the crocodile patching up.

Not bad, not bad, well written. The character of Yan Sheng is shaped so right. The brotherhood with Yuan Yi is both caring and annoying at the same time. Under normal circumstances, the two of them would not have sex. Putting in Yan Sheng, I felt a stomachache when I saw Yuan Yi. The encounter with Hydrangea made the character more vivid. Hydrangea melted the ice on Yan Sheng's surface and touched Yan Sheng's soft heart. But the two of them wanted to be together. Yan Sheng didn't care about Hydrangea's weirdness before. After giving in his feelings, he subconsciously thought that he didn't care. But he was awakened by fate and finally realized his feelings. The so-called exploration of Guo You's weirdness was just self-deception (he was not well educated and could not express what he wanted to express. The author wrote it very well)

A great fanfic, I found it in Tomato Gold Rush. It is really written very delicately and expresses many easily overlooked points in it. It is actually a little better than the original work. I originally didn't like Jiguo Iwakatsu very much, but I just didn't understand his choice. But this article made me understand that I can't stand up and talk without pain in my back. Most people in that war-torn era It is a psychological problem, a tragedy caused by the problems of the times. It is due to different cognitions and not enough knowledge, so I cannot fully explain myself. The author shows us another possibility, and it also allows me to really enter his state of mind. I find that he has really done everything he can. Like a person who is constantly struggling in his destiny but has no solution, I really feel sorry for him. For many years The accumulated pain is unlikely to be cured in one go, so there is a reason for the accumulation of emotions and the final choice in the original book. I hope the author can give him a different ending in the fanfic. There are not many books that really make me feel stomachache when I read them. Maybe I read less, but the author definitely has a very deep writing skills and I really like it. I really look forward to how the author will describe it later. Some people think it is because the description is too sentimental. If emotions affect the plot, I think emotions are the focus of this book. I like it very much. If I want to delete the article because of these, I hope to put the extra emotional descriptions into Easter eggs and tell us which ones are connected to which ones. My description of the teacher's emotions was deeply shocked by the writing skills. Thank you teacher, I tried my best to drag my friends into the trap to see you. I will definitely finish it.

I dare say that they understand each other, but they can't solve each other's pain. Yan Sheng and Yuan Yi have a chemical reaction that makes people feel sad. The author's writing style is very good, allowing every reader to enter Yan Sheng's perspective and feel their stomach churn. The extra is very sweet. It is the optimal solution after eliminating all "abnormalities". Everyone loves each other, instead of hating each other and being twisted and painful like the original work. Simply put, a must-read for fans of Step Kingdom Brothers.

It's very delicate. I caught up here all night long. The author is really good at describing feelings. He is not OOC at all. He breaks the feelings into pieces and talks about them. After reading this, I can only sigh with emotion. It is the choice they will make and their unsolvable fate. The writing is really beautiful, and I felt really sick to my stomach as I was drawn into Yan Sheng's emotions. This is the first time I'm looking forward to the appearance of Boss Dan to take Yan Sheng away. The younger brother who doesn't understand human emotions really puts too much pressure on Yan Sheng (although my only feelings are with him, I feel like he is the anchor of Yuanyi and the world), but Yan Sheng is a younger brother and can't let it go. Really... ... I hope Yan Sheng can escape from all this, stay away from Jiguo, and stay away from the sun. It is really too depressing and sad. This kind of mental pressure would make ordinary people crazy long ago. Yan Sheng can actually persist for so long, and he still has the courage to break the boat at any time. His determination is really very attractive.

The further you read, the more you look forward to the story behind! ! ! Great writing in big letters! When I read the article, I was very immersed in it and didn't get distracted at all! There is no OOC in the dialogue. This book must have been on my bookshelf for half a month (because after reading only five or six chapters, I felt... Stomach pain (? I took it seriously) The emotions are handled very well! ! Not only did the author write the dialogue between the characters, but I was also influenced by it... When I feel distressed, I really look forward to the two brothers getting along well. With this expectation, I continued to watch for another five minutes - Brother Jiguo's post! ! ! Ps: My mood↘↘↗↗↗↗↗↗ My heart: Sugar is sugar! ! ! I have your five-star praise, it's great to see the fans! ! This author is good at what he does, I like both Shota and Tie Tie Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe (chihan) Yuan Yiyan Sheng, please continue to update! ! ! Thank you very much! ! !

It was so well written that I felt like I couldn't breathe. I was completely immersed in the strong emotional impact of the article. Many places really made me feel like my intestines were being crushed and I couldn't help but retch😭😭😭It felt like my whole soul was shattered along with Yan Sheng's self-identity being crushed again and again while reading it. The tragedy does not come from "not talking properly", but from the value system of both parties. Just like the dimensions of existence are different, they are incompatible and despairing. Alas, it made me dizzy. I hope everyone can have a happy ending😭

I was originally attracted to this book from the beginning, but when I read the reviews, everyone said it felt depressing, so I was still unable to click on it (after all, I am essentially a sweetie who is afraid of knives), but! This book is different! The sadness described by the author is not a hysterical tsunami that will devour you unpreparedly, making you feel helpless and suffocated while being unable to escape; the sadness described by the author is like a continuous rain falling on your heart, which is depressing but gradually getting used to it. Even if the rain becomes heavier, it feels logical in your heart, after all, everything has been foreshadowed. Certainly! There are a lot of sweets in it. Iwakatsu has friends who are very good to him and he is more honest. The brother posts are also good. I personally think that the plot after joining the Demon Slayer Corps is very well written! However, a reminder for those who are impatient, the author's description of emotions is very delicate. Although the plot development of the article seems very reasonable, the length of the plot is relatively small, which seems a bit slow. (For example, in the scene where Yan Sheng knew that Enichi was about to commit suicide and went to stop it, I wanted to shake Yan Sheng's shoulders like crazy and tell him to stop thinking so much and hurry up and save your brother.) However, the author has also gradually corrected himself, which is worthy of praise! All in all, good books are rare. If you pass this village, there won't be a store like this one, so hurry up and take a look! Ps: That metaphorical sentence deeply reflects my lack of words. To be honest, I don't even know what I am expressing. It is super confusing😵‍💫. The last sentence makes me look like a salesperson. It is really embarrassing. I have a wonderful sense of shame (cover my face🤦‍♂️). Anyway, the book is good and there is nothing wrong with it (confident)

If you like Jiguo, come check it out, it's a masterpiece, it's an excellent Jiguo😭😭😭The author's writing is so awesome Reading this book is like a traveler during the Warring States Period who accidentally heard about the bizarre lives of the twin brothers of the country, and then traveled across mountains and rivers to pursue the shadows they left behind, pieced together their lives bit by bit, and wrote a biography for them full of respect. I'm not very good at describing my excitement in words😭I tied this book in one breath. It's so beautiful that it made my head feel dizzy. The description of the two Step-Kuni brothers is really delicate. When I read it, I really thought, "Ah... They will indeed do that." "It really looks like him to think this way." This kind of thought is great. After turning the first page, I was completely immersed in the world of the Step-Kuni brothers. As the scroll unfolded, their lives were sliced open. When I came back to my senses, I realized that they had experienced so many years. But saying "dissection" feels too sharp. This article will be gentler, but I can't think of any words to describe it at the moment😭 This article feels very gentle and old-fashioned to me, and it matches the temperament of the Step Kingdom Brothers very well. The feeling between the green grassland filled with water mist after the rain and the damp and moldy old house😭😭😭 is really great, very Jiguo. The indescribable complexity of the step-brothers, the mixture of love and pain, is great. And the handling of some Jiguo's characters is great😭The strong sense of discipline of the times is really great, and the cold-bloodedness shown by some local brothers is really great😭 Because of the gentleness I showed when I was young, my other traits are easily overlooked (such as the cold-blooded determination acquired through education at that time). The author really writes the secret madness under my gentle skin very well😭 I like it so much. Benbendi is great😭The combination of his gentleness and simplicity and the inhumanity brought by his high force is really great, a top-notch character. The Jiguo described by the author is really complex and vivid, so vivid. The author's treatment of the younger brother is really great. After reading the two hundred chapters so far, you can really see that the younger brother is slowly growing up like a clumsy child😭😭😭 He has grown up, but his original character background has not been lost, and so does the younger brother. Reading this book, you can really see the two of them growing up little by little. I can't say enough words with my tongue😭😭😭In short, it's great, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, great, wonderful Jiguo! Jiguo ah ah ah ah! Boss, I want to follow the Jiguo you wrote for the rest of my life😭😭😭

The content is very detailed, and the character of Brother Yi is well portrayed. Brother Yi himself is a person with rich inner emotions. The author depicts Brother Yi's inner emotions in great detail! I feel that this is what I can do, that is, a living person. In the original work, a person is on the road of no return because of jealousy. In this article, although Brother Yi also has some jealousy towards Yuanyi, he suppresses these emotions very well, like a very awkward person. Although he is very reluctant, he will still give Yuanyi a lot of love. By fully expressing the word "brother", the author created a new and vivid Yan Sheng. It also makes up for a lot of regrets. The author's writing style is really delicate, and he knows the facial expressions and psychology carefully. As a reader, I can feel that I am immersed in the book even when I am not reading it in detail. The feeling of stomachache, as if I am Yige himself. This is the first time I have such a feeling while reading. A strong sense of nausea and depression filled my whole body. What appeared in front of me was a vivid person. In short, the author writes very well. I love the author so much! ! I am the author's big dog! I am so crazy about eating so much, and I hit big walls because of the big frame! Big, I love you!

It is well written, with a very delicate writing style, the second-person inner narration is appropriately chosen, and the character's changes in mood are very clear and traceable. Overall the parts I saw were pretty good. Personally, I think the reason for the lower score is that the copy didn't directly state that Yuanyi would get married and have children. The presence or absence of CP affects the perception of the story. For an omnivore like me, if it is stated at the beginning that Yuan Yi will have a wife, I will be able to read it easily if I have already preset it in my mind. But halfway through the story, which I always thought was a story between two brothers without cp, I found that the author hastily warned that this would inevitably lead to a lot of controversy. The discussion in the commentary was very unpleasant and completely disrupted the mood and rhythm of the story. It's a very good story. It kept me in tears most of the night. It was well written. I am writing this review in the hope that readers who want to read this book will have their expectations in mind.

It's beautiful, and it's a really good brotherly relationship. Different from the original plot, the experiences of Yuan Yi and Yan Sheng were reversed. Yuan Yi stayed as the heir while Yan Sheng went to the temple. The best thing to watch is the twists and turns of the family relationship between the two, Yan Sheng's repeated analysis of himself and his heart, and the feeling of love and disgust for his younger brother. The author really nailed it for me. Five-star praise is presented [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The description of Yan Sheng's psychology is very detailed. Yan Sheng's jealousy of Yuanyi and his love for Yuanyi are very contradictory to his desire to keep him safe. It's very well written!

It is a refreshing imagination, the emotional description is very delicate, the second-person design brings a strong sense of immersion, some characters get along very well, please continue writing, this book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in Demon Slayer Tongren.

It's amazing. The description is comprehensive and not verbose. The image and emotion of each character are particularly three-dimensional. Even if the plot is a bit cliche, you can guess it from the beginning, but the main thing is the description of the content! Just like the art exam questions only have a few words and sentences, different people produce different paintings. At least with me, you deserve 99 points! One less point will make you proud! Come on!

Very well written, really. I saw a book friend commenting that "the article is full of a touch of sadness", which is really good. When I read this novel, I would say, after reading one or two paragraphs, or a chapter, I would always quit and wait for a while, just like I had read a few more chapters to write this review. I think it was the faint sadness in the article that inadvertently infected me while I was reading. It made me unable to continue reading and wanted to slow down. This is a wonderful feeling after I have read so many novels. I'll savor it. Thank you Pisces! [Love][Love][Learned][Learned][Learned] . . . Actually, I think it should be, or maybe, probably, Pisces is big, what you wrote is male copper, right?

Although I have only read a few dozen chapters, there is no doubt that it is good to watch. Iwakatsu's physical disgust towards Yui Yi is also a point that I like. The hatred, jealousy and admiration for the son of God towards Yui Yi in the original work are also very consistent with my standards, and it does not feel OOC when watching it. Like most people, he is not overly close to Yuanyi. To be honest, Yan Sheng's character design is actually very complicated and not as perfect as most fan fiction, but it is more realistic. It can be said that it is relatively easy to grasp, because people with a personality like Yan Sheng are relatively common in life. In most Sun and Moon fanfics nowadays, Iwakatsu is mostly OOC, and Iwakatsu from the original novel who has a good relationship will explode after just one look (bushi) In the original work, Yan Sheng is actually a very tragic character. When he was a child, he could say that his father did not care for his mother and his mother felt that Yuanyi was weak, so she would have a preference for him. Therefore, Yan Sheng received very little maternal love. According to his father, he is a person who seriously values ​​the family's strength and talents, and the way he gets along with Yan Sheng can also be said to be very complimentary. Maybe Yan Sheng really had a good impression of his younger brother in the original work, but when Xiangyi showed off his talents, that good feeling instantly turned into disgust. In addition, his father also chose someone with more talent at this time, so Yan Sheng was abandoned. Although in the original work Yuanyi left and Yan Sheng became the head of the family, this method is undoubtedly an insult to Yan Sheng. It can be said that Yan Sheng's life was not smooth, and in the end, Yuan Yi did not wait for him! [Crying] Haha, so much rambling, but almost nothing is on point. I started analyzing it out of nowhere [Chigua] In short, the teacher's character is well grasped! I love this very much [admiration], a rare good product among persimmons [blowing kiss] One last thing to mention, the sun and the moon must be affectionate towards each other! You must not use CP! I can eat the sun and the moon but it's a little thunder [crazy]

It's a great article from Yan Sheng's perspective. I can experience the mental journey of growing up. The author's writing is super exciting, and the plot and emotional ratio are just right. I won't feel that the emotional description is too uncomfortable, I will just sigh: Yes, that's it! This kind of delicate and step-by-step description makes people feel that it is natural for Yi Ge to sometimes feel sick to Yuan Yi, and even feel a little upset in his stomach. Hahaha, the author who can write such charming articles is a god! I'm really looking forward to the appearance of Muzan Kibutsuji in the next volume. The transformation from reality to magic [shy] I hope Ichigo can feel better. Finally, I would like to express my love to you, the author who allows me to eat this table of delicacies from the mountains and seas. I love you! ! !

Yan Sheng, Yuan Yi, two twin flowers that grow together, no one can live without the other, and no one will give up on the other. The author's delicate description explains this very well. This is a good book, well worth reading. The characters are not OOC at all, the plot is reasonable and bold, and the psychological description is meticulous. It is worth watching.

It's quite good. The description of Yan Sheng's psychology towards Yuanyi is very accurate and delicate. Yan Sheng's image is well grasped. From the comics, you can see that Yan Sheng is a delicate and sensitive person. The article describes Yan Sheng's delicacy and almost perfectly, including Yan Sheng's complex emotions towards Yuanyi, as well as the advantages and disadvantages of Yan Sheng's own personality. The second person's sense of substitution is very strong, and people can't help but follow Yan Sheng's heart. However, the author's writing style is a bit stream-of-consciousness, and it will be a little difficult to follow when reading. This book is the kind of book that gets better and better the more you read it. Some people say that it looks like two male protagonists in the previous reading, but that is not the case. People's emotions are very complicated, let alone Yan Sheng's relationship with Yuanyi. For Yan Sheng, Yuanyi has already become the indispensable other half of his life. It is a complex emotion formed after experiencing countless setbacks, sufferings, pains, including all happiness. He has too little in his life. His father regards the glory of the family as everything, and his mother loves his younger brother and instills in him the responsibility of protecting his younger brother. Just talking about his father. Mother, he no longer has many things worth mentioning and owns. Almost everything around him (even if they have been separated for a long time) is filled by a person named Jiguo Yuanyi. In the first half of his life, he was never separated from Yuanyi. In the second half of his life, he used the call that Yuanyi taught him. Inhalation method, subconsciously think of Yuanyi, and then meet Yuanyi again. In this article, Yan Sheng and Yuanyi are twins. They have been inseparable for a long time. The author describes this delicate, complex and tangled emotion beautifully and deeply, which is really beautiful.

The teacher's writing style is very good, and it solved the bug that I don't like first-person perspective novels.

It's really great. I don't like second person, but the psychological description in this book is very delicate. It's like Iwakatsu's autobiography. It's wonderful. Come on, author.

Nice! I really feel sorry for Yan Sheng from the front [crying] [crying] [crying] It makes my heart ache to watch [crying] Yuanyi's emotional intelligence is too low [face covering] Both brothers are good kids! [Sending Hearts]

Super pretty! ! ! [Love] [Love] The teacher described their twisted and morbid emotions so appropriately. It is not OOC at all. [Adoration] [Adoration] It is written on my heart, but there are too few updates and it is not enough to watch. Come on, teacher! ! [Shy][shy]

The sense of immersion is very strong... This book is suitable for reading slowly, immersing yourself in it bit by bit, to understand Yan Sheng's mood, so that you can eat the knife better (cross out), find candy in the knife and eat ovo It's just that if you are too immersive, you will easily be fooled by a knife... Is this the reincarnation of a sadistic article? ! Definitely (nonsense. Jpg) Overall, it's excellent, really, really excellent. Yan Sheng's inner activities are described very well. Scumbag's father died well, and Yuyu also learned a lot! (It would be nice if my eloquence was better) What's more, my dear Da Da~ I don't think about letting Hong appear a few more times in the mud test~ I'm really looking forward to the extras and so on! ! ! Finally, cheers! I will work hard to ensure that I don't keep books after I catch up with the progress! (Ah, it's difficult to chase better QAQ) Okay, okay, I'll add a review after I finish reading it. That's it for now, bye~

It took me one night to read it. At the beginning, I was really impressed by the cuteness of the two little ones written by the author. It was very delicious. But from the warmth at the beginning, as the brothers grew older, they encountered more things, and the warmth of childhood was rarely reflected. The author really wrote a lot of inner descriptions of his brother, but to be honest, if it were not for these inner feelings, In terms of description, we don't know what he is thinking. Based on the appearance, we will think that this person is really cold, but such a brother will still catch his younger brother the moment he runs over. Even when the younger brother says he loves him, he will still be disgusted and vomit. Outside the text, the author will also write about different situations or the family as brothers. If line, but the background of the characters has not changed. This is a very different perspective after reading a lot of fan fiction and original works, and even people who have restrained their love for CP. I also understand that I don't want to eat CP, but because I like the emotional interaction between the two of them. The author said that this is a family relationship, but I still like this kind of emotion very much. It is very delicious. , Whether it is family or love, as long as they are together, there will be no problem, and the author has really written this book for a long time. I think it was written in 24 years, and I thought it was finished now, but I didn't expect the author to continue to update. This book gave me a big surprise, and it also made me understand the personality background of these two brothers better. Thank you for writing this book.