A Knight's Virtue Online Game

Advantages: 1. The protagonist has a very good character. He neither wrongs himself nor his teammates, does not procrastinate in doing things, and strikes hard at the enemy. 2. The narrative rhythm is good. The forces, missions, arenas, etc. In the main city are briefly introduced and then passed through in one stroke. It mainly focuses on the protagonist's team's level improvement, equipment replacement and refreshing battles, and the description is very comfortable. Disadvantages: 150,000 words is enough to read a piece of cake.

It's very interesting to watch. There is no time travel or plug-ins. It gives the impression that just because you love cold weapons, you have maxed out your proficiency in various weapons. As for Europeans, although they are a bit old-fashioned, the reality has to be admitted that some people are suspicious of life. It is a very good novel.

I'm sorry that I can only give 4 stars. I would have given 5 stars in the past, but I really hope the author changes it. Of course, this really doesn't mean there's anything wrong with what the author wrote. The story of this book is very exciting, and the characters are relatively fleshed-out, but a serious problem is that the narrative is too bland, really. If I didn't really like the book, I wouldn't have much motivation to continue reading. Although Fulilian (ky apologizes) also has a relatively light narrative, its story actually has ups and downs and climaxes, and the narrative can only be said to be more restrained rather than dull. Although I really don't know how to change it, I sincerely hope that the author can change the narrative style. I know this is not hydrology, but I really hope the author can change this, because it is actually very interesting, even if you think about it carefully, the story itself is not unique. I don't know how to describe it, but if the writing style were changed, I think this book could be comparable to "The Burial of Florian". Best wishes.

This author can do it. He can give whatever role he wants. He should join the protagonist group. This is the first time he makes a cameo in an author's book. If nothing else, I'll give him five stars [smirk] [OK]

A very nice book. It feels like the protagonist is actually playing a game, instead of just being a set story about another world.

I hope it becomes popular. To be honest, I still fantasize about the arrival of the holographic era. I don't know if I can survive until then.

It feels very good. It's rare to see such good-looking online game novels. I hope it can grow up. Many good-looking novels are just seedlings and then die.

The description of the fight is very good, but it's not the kind where you have to kill with one sword or describe a bunch of inner activities.

It's very interesting to watch, and the fights are well written (actually it's an evil pv deal [smile][smile][smile])

It's good. It's well written. There's no big problem with the fighting. It's very comfortable to watch.

I would like to give myself a five-star review. If you find it difficult to accept the appearance of Man Xiaoman, you can skip those two chapters first [laughing evilly]. The content after that is still equally exciting [laughing evilly]

My little bean is so pretty. The author must update it.

Come on, it's very well written. The protagonist squad has distinct personalities and there is no real-world plot. Very good [like][like][like][like][like]

A very nice book about games. It's a breath of fresh air in Tomato, which doesn't have many game articles. I think this female character is nothing. Why do I see some people criticizing her without thinking and insisting on making the protagonist a reckless man who only knows how to fight?

Full! Wkas! (Waterproof military logo) I like that the author is kind and listens to opinions.

Not bad, okay

I like to watch very well

You say you want to be a lone wolf, but you don't know how to refuse a girl? Not a good look.

I briefly read a few chapters and found that, except for the low word count, other aspects were quite to my liking. Beautiful, no need to say more

Is the author playing For Honor? [Thinking]

It's a rare type, but it's well written.

The description of the fight is relatively smooth, without the feeling of being stuck one after another.

Yes, it's written without restraint and the writing style is okay, but it's a bit too rigid.

The most authentic and best online article I have ever read

I hope you can help me get a role

The more you look at the monsters inside, the stronger your sense of sight becomes. Damn, right?

It looks good. If you like it, buy more. [Blowing kiss]

The book is pretty good. I hope it becomes popular.

Very nice, pretty good

This style is quite good.