Doomsday: My Roommate Is Actually a Reborn Big Shot

I was a little scared after seeing some of the roommate scenes. Have you seen the rest? Is the protagonist a gay dog ​​licker?

It's good, but there are too few apocalyptic elements and not enough tension, especially for the protagonist team. Secondly, it's a bit deformed that all the development forces are female. In fact, it would be much better to merge with the puppet forces. It's a pity that the author wants to please all types of readers but ends up being stuck. With your writing style and writing skills, you can definitely use friendship, love and power to write a warm apocalypse. In this track, you can It is more suitable, and there is no need to pursue the unrealistic pursuit of satisfying everyone. For example, I see that you don't want to be a stallion and want to write more delicate emotions. You need a team, but some readers don't like a team with men, so you find a bunch of women to raise. This kind of affects the perception and is a poisonous point. There are many other similar points in your book. It can be improved if you give up and you will get something. Come on.

To be honest, it's just so-so. It's not so much a post-apocalyptic novel as it is an urban supernatural novel.

There's a plot, but it's just that a villain who doesn't seem to be alive for long is reborn. I don't know if the protagonist's mind-reading ability will still appear. Maybe more than one person is reborn? Can we collect other people's future information later?

I quite like the protagonist and his friends. Giving him such nice things, isn't this what love is? I didn't expect there was a female protagonist behind me

It's very interesting to watch, but I think some of the plots are a bit boring. Maybe it's because I didn't sleep well and was too sleepy.

It's okay, but the emotional scenes are a bit off [smile][smile]

Not bad, very beautiful👀, the author will continue to update, please work hard

Looks good, don't watch it with your brain

Just score four points first and see what happens next. Emm... It's a bit weird to play with the female protagonist, it feels like skipping the process and going directly to the result, purely for sex.