Are You All Awake? Then I'll Be the Evil God

The subject matter is quite new, the first part is good, but the second part progresses a bit slowly. It's still pretty good, but the protagonist's personality doesn't quite fit the evil spirit. I think we can compare the strength of those who ride on the protagonist's head (Lin Bei, etc.) First. (The protagonist is currently in the human camp) [Pout] The protagonist's character can be more decisive (not too cowardly). The above are my opinions, book reviews and suggestions.

At the beginning of the story, I did make a lot of mistakes. Thank you readers for pointing them out, but I still give myself a five-star encouragement! The following plot is progressing bit by bit, praising the black goat~

I would like to say that the beginning of this book is very good, and I really like it. It is not as lacking as the author said, but I feel that as the plot progresses, I could have written about the white spiritual mist on Yang Yan's left hand, but only wrote about the third-level warrior, and started writing about the [Black Goat] red mist on the right hand that reached the demigod state. It felt a bit rushed. Secondly, when Yang Yan went to the Black Goat Temple, a door was opened, and two doors behind it were not opened. However, it was not written around this until the ending, and the foreshadowing was not filled in. Thirdly, it has been said later that some ancient relics and miracles of the 12 gods of Daxia were discovered in the mine, but they did not say what they were until the end. Fourthly, the original hidden identity of the protagonist was the Black Goat. This character was very tenable, but the ending was suddenly changed to another one, which was very abrupt. I think we can continue to write about the character of the Black Goat and fill in these holes. Fifth, at the end, it writes about Yang Yan becoming a human again and some experiences with his sister Yang Xiaodan. It feels unnecessary, and it feels like it is copied from Fang Xiu. In fact, it is good for the author to revolve around the character he wrote at the beginning. In short, this book has some shortcomings, but I still like it very much. If I continue writing like the beginning, it will be perfect.

The language in this book is good. Compared with most Tomato articles, this book does not contain any objectionable words, neither effeminate men nor infantilize women. Moreover, there are many foreshadowings and foreshadowings as well as unexpected and funny moments in the article, which successfully captured my interest.

Ahhhhhhhh, it's so beautiful [admiration], but the author is so short [grievance] It looks really uncomfortable in the front, but it feels better in the back.

Come on, I'm looking forward to your follow-up~ I hope I can write more, it's really not enough to watch QnQ This type is rare, and the author's writing is very attractive. I hope you can continue to update~ Very nice, come on!

Give you a five-star review as a reward

The writing is so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good [awkward laughter] [please update]

My dear, I hope to keep updating, more and longer, it's so beautiful. Support…

(=^▽^=)(=^▽^=) It looks pretty good. Although some plots are a bit cliche, it feels good.

Why is this good book rated 6.5?

This is not a cool article

It's so good, but a little short. I really wish I could update Chapter 800 [Adoration] one day.

Come on, your writing is good [thoughts]

Good-looking, just good-looking [smile]

I can't tell intuitively what this book is like, but I think it's very interesting.

It's nothing too shocking, it's pretty good-looking hahahahaha

The setting is great, but it's a pity that the plot behind it got out of control

Although some places are very toxic, the setting is okay. One more thing, can the author be more innovative [face covering]? It's hard not to get bored by repeating what I said before more than a dozen times.

The main text is quite nice [blowing kiss], but I didn't read the extra (mainly because I don't like this type [face covering])

[Adoration][Adoration] It's super good, but can there be more chapters?

It looks good. I really like the character of the protagonist, unlike some protagonists who start a story with a beautiful woman when they see her...

It's good-looking, I love watching it. It's good-looking without a female protagonist. Now the male protagonist is getting stronger and stronger, but his situation is also miserable.

It's very beautiful. Keep up the good work, the author. Update 800 chapters a day.

Win, the protagonist is the Three Pillar Gods [laughing evilly]

Come on, it looks okay

The plot is good, quite fresh

Okay, okay, come on, author

Not bad, so-so

Your five stars, delivered on time