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Very good, very good food. The writing and plot are very good, and the setting is very logical and consistent. The explanations of the settings in the previous pictures are a bit long-winded, and the golden finger double pupil does not show its "supreme" power right away. Everything else is very good, and the double pupil will be very helpful in subsequent research on improving the speed of cultivation and ways to break through the realm. At present, it still meets the definition of double pupil, and it can have unlimited pupil cultivation, detect illusions, and assist the protagonist in studying the essence of cultivation. It is a growth-type and auxiliary cheat, which suits me very well. I don't like cheats that are invincible from the beginning. It is no different from cheating in the game. After watching two of them, it is boring.

After reading this fan novel "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality", I am absolutely amazed! When the world of cultivation collides with scientific thinking, this imaginative cross-border fusion is so amazing! The author skillfully combines physical formulas, chemical agents and immortality cultivation techniques, allowing the protagonist to break through the realm in a unique way of "scientific cultivation of immortality". The element ratios in elixir refining and the circuit principles in the drawing of talismans and seals are refreshing. Every innovative setting retains the passionate core of the original mortal's counterattack, and gives the immortality cultivation system unprecedented logical depth. What's even more rare is that the author's control over the details of the original work is superb. Han Li's caution and suspicion, the cruel laws of the world of immortality, and even the characteristics of classic magic weapons are accurately restored. The newly added scientific elements not only do not destroy the charm of the original work, but interpret the theme of "defying nature and changing fate" from a new perspective. The plot has a tight rhythm. From the battle of wits in the city to the adventure in the secret realm, the intertwining of scientific thinking and cultivation methods is amazing. Such a masterpiece that combines innovation and original feelings is really rare! I sincerely hope that the author will maintain this unique creative inspiration and continue to use the wonderful collision of science and cultivation to bring us more unexpected excitement! I can't wait to see the protagonist use scientific theories to overcome the difficulties in the Nascent Soul stage!

The writing is very detailed and enjoyable. It feels like the author has polished it carefully. It's also fun to watch. Although some of the links are a bit abrupt, and it's a bit awkward to explain that the private setting is too long, which interrupts the continuity of the plot, but overall, Tomato is already a gold rush book, and the book has already tied it. Looking forward to the following chapters [Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates]

Carry out the scientific and informatization construction of the industrialization of immortality, launch a plane war, and lead the world to promotion.

The protagonist of a good novel is neutral and kind. When will the world be broken?

There are very few novels about the mortal worldview in Tomato. This one can be considered a dull one, with some good stories and no bad ones. Compared with a lot of novels, this book is much better. In Tomato, all good things written by ordinary people have been removed from the shelves. Cherish them.

I don't think the size of the Dantian has anything to do with spiritual roots.

My imagination is wide open, but if I don't have anything else, why don't I use martial arts techniques to cultivate Yin Yang and Five Elements, and use Yin Yang and Five Elements to shape acquired spiritual roots. The innate spiritual roots and acquired spiritual roots are combined into one to shape the Taoist body of the human race.

All I can say is that those comments are messy. Try writing a novel yourself. This is the author's own understanding of spiritual practice, so you should respect it. Cultivation is not about fighting and killing.

Very nice, but the explanations for some things are a bit long.

The structure is reasonable and fully combines modern mathematics, physics and chemistry knowledge, analyzing the principles of cultivating immortality at a macro level, the plot is compact, and the characters are vividly portrayed. Although the results of this book are not ideal in a short time, it has great potential in the long run. Good luck, author. More updates and more recommendations.

It's good-looking, I love reading it, it's a textbook for cultivating immortality [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It looks good, it's not exaggerated, and it respects the original work. It's just an update. . . Hard to describe in one word

The writing is ok, suitable for setting files and details, and also suitable for people who like to watch people slowly become immortals.

The content is very good, but the disadvantage is that some of the cool points have a natural element. When the dog is almost beaten, there is no escape route, and the cross-border killing of enemies does not maximize the fun points.

When will you go to other worlds?

Very good Very good

It looks good, unlike the others that look fake

The protagonist has perfect double pupils and practices the mortal system. The ideas are good. You can see how the writing goes in the future. It is a new book that can be read and collected.

This is the first time I saw a fan novel about a mortal cultivating immortality on Tomato. It's pretty good. I recommend reading it.

The book is quite good, overall readable. Some settings in the early stages are explained a little more, which has a slight impact.

Come on, the author is awesome.

Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !

Looks good, take care of it first

Hahahahahaha

Incredibly good-looking

Come on, I hope you don't go too far

Very good, keep up the good work

Not bad. You can read it in Shuhuang

Good, good, good, good