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Author, you are not authentic. You have only written this little. Come on, do more. Don't be a coward.

Super good-looking~ But Ning Zhongze's age is a bit confusing, sometimes he is 13, sometimes he is 16, sometimes he is 19, and they all change within two years.

After reading the previous ten chapters, the writing is good and the descriptions are also detailed, especially the farming style of the heavens. This is the first time I have seen it. I hope the author can continue to work hard, and I also look forward to the world in the future being more exciting. I like Zhu Xian, what will the author do in the future? There is actually a lot to explore about the character Yue Buqun. Many people have written about Yue Buqun before, but here I feel that the author still has a modern mindset. But after all, it was written by a modern person, so the flaws cannot be concealed.

Objectively speaking, it has created a new feeling and effect. I will continue to read it. Good luck to the author (⊙o⊙) Wow Good to keep following

I think the writing is pretty good, and it's not toxic at the moment. It's unrealistic to expect this book to be highly written. If you read a free novel, don't be picky. Overall, it's not bad. If you like watching martial arts fanfiction, it can be used as high-quality food. There's just one thing, updates are too slow. Shouldn't I write more in the early stage? [Chigua] [Chigua]

It's okay, you are already a master. When you need to show off, you can show off. When the sect needs to develop rapidly, it can develop quickly. Just be careful of conspiracies. If others are plotting, you can assassinate and kill high-level officials. Anyway, they are not your opponent. What you lose is your disciple. Others may be cut off from the inheritance of the sect, which is equivalent to the existence of a nuclear bomb. I would like to make a small suggestion. The name of the Bone Strengthening Chapter of the Book of Changes can be changed. It can be used as the basic physical training method of the sect, and combined with some decoctions, pills or medicinal baths to confuse it. The backbone of the sect is definitely not bad or lacking. Personal opinion, be cautious! ! !

Objectively speaking, this book is really my favorite. I have collected it. Come on.

I finally found a book about Astronomy, which is not written entirely according to the plot. When I saw those Astronomy before, it felt like a person was added to the original work, and then everything was written according to the plot. I felt that if I left it, the plot would not be written. So why should I read it? I might as well just read the original work. The author is good, keep up the good work and keep paying attention (ง ˙o˙)ว It's a really nice novel. I've finished it. I'm already addicted to it.

What's going on? Suddenly it's gone [what]

It's okay, five stars for encouragement.

Huashan is experiencing great development. Yue Buqun strikes the sky with his long sword and the heroes bow their heads.

He had his own ideas and wrote a different Yue Buqun. I have already tested the poison for everyone and it is ok. You can take a look.

The protagonist has a distinct personality, is chivalrous and righteous, and the plot line is quite enjoyable. I hope to stick to the quality. If it is All Worlds, I suggest you take the heroine with you when you leave!

Not bad, keep up the good work

I look forward to going to other worlds later, good luck to the author! (✧◡✧)

This novel is very well written, not watery, and very fluid in every aspect.

Go to Kunlun Mountain to find the burial place of Zhang Wuji

Looks good so far

A different world

It looks pretty good so far

It was written with great care, and I look forward to the follow-up!

Big cheers for the author

Well written, please support it.

I like to see this kind of development force

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Author, don't panic, you will be on the list sooner or later, persistence is victory! It's just a little short. Can you please make more?

The book is still well written, but a bit short. Please write it quickly and make it longer.

It's great. I really didn't expect it to be written by a girl. It's unexpectedly to my liking. Maybe I can check out more female channels in the future.

Okay, it's pretty good. It doesn't have any poisonous points. It kills decisively. It's just a bit affected by modern times, but it's normal for a time traveler.

So far, it's okay. It's a decent book. If you want to kill time, you can read it.