Naruto: Umi, I'm Determined!

It was well written [Eating Melon], but I felt that there was something wrong with Naruto's character in the early stages of the novel. He was originally supposed to be a naughty and sometimes autistic character, but it was written to look like the adult Naruto in Boruto, as if he had become able to think and suddenly grew up [Facepalm]

It feels good. The only thing I don't understand is that Haki is the standard equipment of the Navy Headquarters and most generals know it. I hope that Naruto can control the time travel independently in the future and the characters on both sides can communicate with each other [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Great job~ I kept it and planned to watch it later, but it turned out that it was unfinished. You are really good at it.

It's a bit interesting, but I discovered it too early and read it in one sitting. The subject matter is pretty good. Naruto is also pretty good. The world of One Piece is okay so far. In the world of Naruto, I feel that except for the protagonist Naruto, the other characters are too thin. There are some feelings that are not in line with the original work and have no characteristics of their own.

The logic is reasonable. The experiences of the three brothers Nartuo and Luffy in the pirate world make up for their childhood regrets, and there are no outrageous hooks. It feels like alternate archives in the world of fire. The system of the normal Fire Pirates is very much looking forward to a big update and five-star support. Ps. Do you have any plans to write about a harem? (It feels a bit like it.) I'm just curious and I don't know how to point fingers. @ Beastparu

It's very novel, and the emotions are very delicate. Some settings may be biased, but as long as the emotions are in control, this book will definitely become popular. It's also one of the best fan novels I've ever read. The disadvantage is that there are too few, and it is easy for people to keep books, causing the data to decline.

I feel pretty good at the moment. If the plot doesn't fall apart in the later stages, and the ending doesn't end well and there's no supervision, there's a chance it will become a masterpiece like Dave. It mainly depends on the author, but I still want to ask, is there a female protagonist? I hope not. If there is a heroine, I hope it won't be split into official roles. It will still be Hinata. If it's another one, I personally can't accept it. Moreover, Naruto is really not like his original self, but more like someone who has traveled through time. This is a bit poisonous. Moreover, Dave's plot in the early stage collapsed a bit, but in the later stage, the plot is good. The author can learn from it.

Great stylistic idea. It's hard to imagine how terrifying Naruto's combat power will be in the later period? It has both the Naruto Six Paths mode and the domineering power of Pirates. It's good and worthy of encouragement. Five stars. Well, it describes the world of pirates too much, but it seems that the plot of Naruto should be promoted recently. Well, I think the protagonist group is okay. We should contact them more appropriately, otherwise Naruto will feel more separated from the world of Naruto.

It's a good book, but the setting is not official enough, but finally someone has written about Luffy and their brotherhood. Dadan is also the finishing touch. Although it is a bit far-fetched, the writing is pretty good and has a strong resonance. Don't make random jokes. This is not a time traveler. There is Chakara in Chapter 41. If it is written wrong, you can change it. Oh, update! Work overtime, Palu! @ Beastpalu

This book is only a little bit toxic, but it's harmless. It's a very good subject for celebrities to double-penetrate themselves. The whole writing is very smooth, including celebrity awakening, and various abilities are very reasonable. Overall, it's a very good book (´∀｀*)

To be honest, it's really good-looking. I haven't watched One Piece that much, but I'm a senior Naruto fan. This celebrity is portrayed with so much emotion. The indifference towards the village made me a little uncomfortable at first, but later I saw Naruto's feelings towards the pirate world and his recognition of them when Sasuke protected Sakura. I knew that Naruto was still the same Naruto [Note]

After receiving the goods, I unpacked them immediately. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description and completely exceeded my expectations. The packaging is very careful and tight. Overall, this is a very satisfying purchase. The quality is good and I am very satisfied! Very comfortable to wear, the colors and styles are good, I will come again next time~

It's okay, but the protagonist's personality and behavior haven't changed much. His thoughts are still like those of a child, focusing on justice.

Update soon, Naruto, who has been suffering all his life, can finally be happy [crying][crying][crying]

It's really invincible. Whether it's the world of Pirates or Naruto, it's very well written. It's never biased, especially the Jiraiya part. I felt like I was going to cry. [Crying] It felt like I saw Minato.

It's beautiful, very touching, and it doesn't violate the character! I hope the author will not stop updating! I haven't seen such a satisfactory Naruto novel in a long time!

The writing is smooth and there are no basic grammatical or word order problems such as broken sentences. The setting of Naruto is also very novel and interesting, and the story development direction is also good. ... It ends in a broken chapter halfway through the writing. Friends who don't like to fall into traps should avoid reading this book ╭(╯^╰)╮

Although this Naruto has changed a lot, he is still the same person we know. It is very well written.

I feel like I want to have a harem, but as long as it looks good, can I play with Sasuke? I want to see two pillars kill one against seven [laughing evilly]

This is the first time I read a double-traveling fan novel, and I think it's quite interesting (it's refreshing, not frustrating, and the combat power is not broken for the time being).

Okay, okay, this is the first pirate fanfic that I can read, it's good [love][love][love][love][love]

I like it so much, I like it so much, Naruto has a righteous heart and does not give in to the darkness, but when facing the darkness, he also strikes hard and does not hold back, I like it so much

Very good-looking👀If you can't read enough, please support me first and become a long-time fan of the author.

Update quickly, I want to see the scene where Naruto saves Ace in the top battle

It's very interesting. I'm mainly interested in the theme of Naruto's Time Travel as a Pirate. I might not be as interested in any other character [eating melon]

Highly recommended. After being short of books for so long, I finally found a novel that I can read. Unfortunately, I found it too early and there were too few chapters.

I enjoyed watching it, but I just hope the original work (in One Piece) is not broken up.

It looks great so far. The only flaw is that there are some translation problems. I hope the rating can be 9.0+ In the future.

Awesome, very beautiful, I hope there will be more updates, haha, but don't force the author lah

I think this book is very well written. It's no worse than those masterpieces like Dave or God of Death. Why is the rating so low?

It is no longer the brainwashing of the Will of Fire, but the righteous Naruto, come on, update soon