Nightmare Disaster

Let's put it this way, this first chapter of Blackwater Town can be a whole novel on its own. It is an oriental fantasy and supernatural type, with great skills and upgrade system. The author's writing skills and plot foreshadowing are very good I like Eastern fantasy and supernatural genres, but the style change in the second chapter, well, everyone has their own preferences.

The book is actually really good. The main problem is the three golden chapters. I didn't read much of the early plots. The main reason is that it started to work around the time when the Black Water Realm accepted the disciples. I guess many people stopped reading the beginning. It was only in the undead beasts and wizarding world that it gradually got better. The author obviously started to speed up the progress in the later stage of the world of undead beasts. There are too many aspects of writing female characters, which actually have little to do with the progress of the plot. I feel that there is still a lot to write about undead beasts. He has been paying too much attention to the female characters, which is inconsistent with the protagonist's character, and the character design has collapsed. Okay, the female supporting role is written down in the back, and there is a hidden hook. She is obviously a character of a evil demon, and she still makes some emotional dramas. It is a bit disconnected and the two are not happy. The power system is quite good, but the second-level world has reached the wizard's late stage power body. To be honest, it's hard for the system not to collapse. Nowadays, the general novel system of wizards is considered to be the top of the power system of fantasy novels. Even if you write about gods in the future, it is difficult to feel that you have surpassed it. There is still hope for science fiction and weird Cthulhu to compete. It is impossible for three or five world protagonists to be invincible. The recognition of the author's self-innovated system is probably not too high. I hope the author can write better and write less female characters. I really don't want to read it. It would be much better to just write some other plots with experience-earning tasks. Come on.

Four stars. The writing is actually quite good, in terms of subject matter, content, etc.; However, too much psychological description really affects the perception, and the behavior is too naive. Maybe I kept looking at a certain point, and the requirements are a bit high. Withdrawing this sentence, one copy has inexplicably written many chapters of cultivation.

I've read more than 30 chapters and I think it's quite interesting. Chapter 60, the marriage plot is a bit abrupt, downgrade it by one point Chapter 65, it seems like it was written by another person, forget it

This book is quite good😊, interesting and novel, and the characters are full-bodied, but I hope she has a single heroine, and that this heroine is the first one to go on a nightmare mission. His master said to choose a woman, divide her soul, and not only become the heroine, but also a salty or sweet person who can stand behind the protagonist, but don't be too pretentious. It would be better if there is a plot with a knife. However, I still hope that the author will update it soon and give me a five-star review! ! !

I can't explain why, but the second copy is much worse than the first copy. It doesn't have that sense of wanting to watch, and the character's personality has changed a lot compared to the first copy.

To be honest, there is a bit too much written about female characters. It would be better to spend more ink on other places, such as the protagonist's exploration and innovation of paper skills. The first world is still well written, but the second world is dense with poisonous points. If the author honestly focuses on upgrading and uses women as a supplement, the results will be better.

The writing of Blackwater Town is pretty good, giving people an oriental and mysterious flavor. The undead beasts are just so-so. The Wizarding World is really a headache to watch. It took me a long time to explain it over and over in one sentence. There are many such plots in one chapter. Also, I don't like to criticize the heroine crazily, and neurotic women are indifferent to watching it.

Why is the plot of this wizarding world so similar to a novel I read a long time ago, where the weak eat the strong, go to the wizard sect in the borderland [facepalm], it is also on the sea, and you encounter risks. Now that you see the wizard, you must also become a disciple [facepalm] And there is too much water in some places [face covering] The protagonist sometimes kills decisively, but sometimes he can't carry it clearly and is indecisive.

The writing is quite nice. In fact, the first world is very interesting. I want to see how to continue practicing, but I won't allow it to be broadcast if I write any more. It's a pity, but I like the first world very much. Farewell. I wish the author will write better and better. If you return to the first world in the future, remember to kick me.

It's super cool. I think it's very interesting. If there is a reward later that allows you to enter a random small world and stay for a few days, it will be even more fun. I still like reading it on a daily basis. There are also a lot of people who say that they come to Tomato to read novels. Isn't it just for fun or something? I can only say that if you like to watch the kind of one-punch explosion but the plot details are not good, I will watch it, but I like it more. After all, this is the one that really allows readers to remember the characters. The only thing that makes me feel a little inappropriate is that the spells and projects at the back are not very detailed. If the writing is more detailed, the evil deviousness is a little more detailed, and the characters are written a little better, I feel more comfortable and better! ! ! ! ! ! !

The supernatural power setting is good, and the protagonist has a growth line. Although it is relatively short at the moment, I don't think that many book reviews say that it is grinding. Who can press the button to execute hundreds of thousands of innocent people without any psychological burden, and finally figured it out. This matter is not something that the protagonist can affect, and it is a bit absolutely neutral. The first world is about the power of the soul, and the new world should focus on physical strength. After spending this world, you should also be able to reveal an ability in the main world. I hope the author can write it down well. The pace is pretty steady at the moment.

I don't think it's too much to say. Let's go to 8.5. I hope the author won't stop updating and will update a few more chapters. This author is a newcomer and has no fan base, so it seems that the number of readers is low and the rating is low. But it is really a very good book, slow-burning, so don't read if you don't mind.

It's okay, but the protagonist of Paper Man is relatively rare, not as good as 98% [smile][smile][smile]

To be honest, the subject matter and writing style are okay. The shortcomings I currently feel are that the protagonist treats himself too much, or the author wants to write a novel with pursuits.

Give me five stars to encourage you. There are some flaws but they can be completely covered up. The plot is also quite good. It's rare to see such a long chapter in an unlimited novel. It seems quite enjoyable, and the background of the story can be unfolded in large chapters. I just don't know why the author chose a lesbian as the heroine. I almost gave up the book earlier. Fortunately, the heroine appears less in the plot. I guess the heroine's death is probably the author's way of explaining why the heroine can survive the nightmare. I am a long-time bookworm. I recommend this book to newcomers. It is a good source of food.

It's good-looking. The protagonist is a normal person but more sensitive. There's a lot of inner drama but it just expresses a sense of urgency. It's more of a growth story. The background of the first story is war and Taoism practice in the Middle Ages. The protagonist is a kind of inheritor of Yin paper cutting. There are not so many rules. The second story is set in ancient Western times ➕Invasion of alien beasts ➕Academy survival. It's good to watch but too little.

The writing is good, although there are some inconsistencies in the opening setting that make people criticize. But in the second copy, he wrote a wonderful story with his own ideas. He is one of the few authors on Tomato who can tell the story of his own setting well.

Blackwater is well written. I can read the second dream, but I have no desire to read the third dream.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update this book. Don't give up. It's so original that every world is very beautiful and I can write a lot of content. But because the theme is similar to fast-travel, I can't write too in-depth. I feel that the author is getting deeper and deeper. The first world has just enough white space. I feel that the content before the wizarding world is like two books with the content of the wizarding world. Now the updated content feels like it will soon become the third book. I hope I can find a chance to connect them as soon as possible without getting tired of writing.

A good book should be read by more people. Is it because there are too few reviews that lower the score? The rhythm of the story and the portrayal of the protagonist's character are quite good, but I feel that people in the academy have a weak sense of presence. In the end, there will be more and more.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I really can't read many traditional books unless the writing is very good. The setting of this book is novel (although it may be a bit limitless, but it is really ok). The author's writing is also good. The setting is good➕The writing is really good. This is the first review in so many years. I don't know if the author can see it. I really agree with this book. If it is written well, it can fill in the plot well without breaking the plot. It will not lose to Zhan Shen.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I highly recommend it. It is worth reading. It is just too short. The author will hurry up and update it. It has the potential to become a masterpiece. I hope that the writing style will continue to be maintained in the future and there will be more descriptions of the main world. Come on, I haven't seen such a good-looking book on Tomato for a long time.

It's very good-looking. It's very similar to Han Li's character. I've looked for several similar novels but can't find it. If you like it, you can run away if you can't beat it. In many novels, the boss and the boss treat other people as fools. Each character has his own personality.

In fact, the author wrote this book very well, but when we got to the third world of the Wizarding World, I felt that it would take a long time to write, and it was like reading it after reading it. But maybe my idea coincided with most people, so when we came back to read it, we found that this book was written to death [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is actually very good, but the rhythm of the second world is a bit broken. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. And if one world is too long, seventy or eighty chapters will be enough.

How to put it, the story is rich and interesting, but from what I have seen so far, some settings do not need to exist or it would be better to have some new settings in the future. For example, if you keep entering the nightmare world, when will it start? , In this case, the future focus can be slowly developed in the main world. These are just some of my suggestions. My personal feelings are not important, because I feel that from what I have seen so far, it is still very beautiful, but I just can't see enough.

I must give the author five stars. The author's one picture is equivalent to two or three others. Although some of the characters for water are a bit abrasive. But every chapter is full. [Love][love]

Four stars. The pace of the dungeon is too slow, resulting in too few plots in the current world. The world view of a single dungeon is too grand. It is recommended to reduce it.

The writing is good and can be brought in. This is the original intention of Infinite Flow. Each copy is in the real world and has real feelings. It should be written about different life experiences. This book and another Infinite Flow book are my favorites. The feelings of each book are written. The other one will not be named. It is from another platform.