[Daily Variety Comics + If you haven't watched the drama, it won't affect your viewing]
Traveling to the comic book world, it seemed that Zhou had replaced Zhou from "The Angel Next Door". There was also Anna Yamada, the heroine of "My Heart Is Dangerous", in the school. A few days later, she ran into Mai Sakurajima from "Young Pig-Headed Boys Don't Dream of Bunny Girl Senpai" at a reading club.
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Reader comments
It looks okay, but the author needs to take a closer look. Many paragraphs are repeated.
If you want to write a good novel, you must at least give the protagonist a normal personality. Don't meet a heroine who has the same personality as the protagonist in the original novel. This will make the plot very rigid.
As a person in his 30s, can he be more normal? You're not a little bitch
It looks okay, but the author needs to take a closer look. Many paragraphs are repeated. If you want to write a good novel, you must at least give the protagonist a normal personality. Don't meet a heroine who has the same personality as the protagonist in the original novel. This will make the plot very rigid.
As a person in his 30s, can he be more normal? You're not a little bitch
Changed a few paragraphs
Listening to books is so boring